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I'm writing the end of Just Like a Snowglobe on a Notepad file because I don't want to forget the ending, but I need a final saying that sounds good. I need the last of Inori's thoughts, to be sad =D This is what I've been writing for it:
During these days of Dark war, I've realized my stupidity as I had not realized the songs meaning and it's true beauty, and how I was not the only one to sleep alone. Now here I lay, on the battle ground where the others had fallen. It was drenched both in rain and our blood. In my mind I hear my fantasy of the joined howls of us all, singing our victory; Which ,of course, would never come...
I really need your opinions, and if you were to change it what would you make it be?
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