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Jake Razor
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Post subject: Toby Part 10: Preview Posted: Wed Nov 14, 2007 9:08 pm |
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This is a preview for the tenth installment in my Toby series. Since the mods deemed it too short to be accepted as a teaser fanfic, they advised me to post it here in the forums. So here you go.
Luna watched as Toby approached a sandy-colored female dog outside.
“Toby!” the dog barked. “Thanks for showing up! I’ve been waiting and waiting for you to get here!”
‘She’s excited,’ noted Luna, ‘but that’s no crime. I’m usually excited to see him too.’ But the rising suspicion in her mind argued, ‘You have a reason. What’s hers?’
“Yeah, I’m here,” replied Toby. “I told you I’d come. Now let’s get up there and I’ll show you how it’s done.”
The girl laughed a little. "Did you make that rhyme up yourself?”
Toby shrugged. “No, it just came out. I’ll have to remember it the next time I drop by Luna’s.”
Luna’s heart began to sink as Toby followed the female into the building. Still, there might be a logical explanation. Maybe she was a friend of his, just like he’d said. But what had Toby meant by, “Show you how it’s done?” With a sickening sense of distrust, she followed them inside. She got there just in time to hear the upstairs door close.
Soon after, strange noises emitted from the closed door. She could hear running, as if Toby were chasing the female around. “You’re getting better at this,” said Toby at one point.
‘No, it’s not possible,’ thought Luna. But those sounds, along with more talking, kept coming until finally Luna left in despair and disgust. It looked like her sisters had been right after all.
Tell me what you think! I'll be posting the full story in my fanfic gallery as soon as I can.
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Duma9
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Post subject: Re: Toby Part 10: Preview Posted: Wed Nov 14, 2007 9:40 pm |
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O.O It's an interesting start. Unexpected really from some of your posts. *looks away* I wonder what's really happening. *tries to peek at work*
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Jake Razor
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Post subject: Re: Toby Part 10: Preview Posted: Thu Nov 15, 2007 3:07 pm |
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Chickawaii*canine wrote: O.O It's an interesting start. Unexpected really from some of your posts. *looks away* I wonder what's really happening. *tries to peek at work* slayguy86 wrote: You've caught my interest.  Thank you. I aim to please. The fanfic should be out soon, and I guarantee that this is only one of the surprises in store 
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WolfCall
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Post subject: Re: Toby Part 10: Preview Posted: Fri Nov 16, 2007 6:28 pm |
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WOAH!!! PLEASE get it up soon! I AM BEGGING! IT SOUNDS SO GOOD!!!
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Duma9
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Post subject: Re: Toby Part 10: Preview Posted: Sat Nov 17, 2007 6:01 pm |
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You enjoy torturing us, don't you?  I'm BEGGING!! Put the fanfic! *makes puppy-dog pout*
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anileu
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Post subject: Re: Toby Part 10: Preview Posted: Sun Nov 25, 2007 6:42 pm |
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either a game or something naughty (sorry)
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