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just the beggining of a fanfic based on my real life
i know theres spelling mistakes i havent edited it on word yet

ok here it is:

Note: the names Oakly,Mark and conner will come into this storie. they are not my charries just the boys at school i loe to bits.also my friends dannii lauren kimberly kaylee and my cuz georgia

(in the story ayame is leaving and going to the forest,my story going to school)

on her way

Ayame was coming out of her primary hears and into her senior years.She felt mature enough to leave the family and begin an early start to life. She new she would miss her family dearly but she also new that an erly start was better for her education and future. To start off her life she whent in serch of a place she could stay, she went to a forest named ormes forest. She felt comfertable there knowing she wasn't that far from home and a few of her other friends lived there. On a very hot morning Ayame and her friends whent down to the lake to cool off. When they got there there was two boys messing in the water, Ayame gazed in amazement. To her it was love at first sight but she loved them both.The boys shook the water off them,still soking they walked towards the group of girls. The one with bloned spiked hair stood near a tree whating for his friend, she could tell he wasen't shy but he didnt whan't to et involved. It was the same as Ayame but she was shy. The other guy was teasing her friends but soon whent as Dannii chased him away. They all began to giggle. Ayame walked over "who were those guys?" she asked nervously "the one with the blonde fur is Oakly the one with the black is Mark" Dannii replyed "Oakly is the cutest he is so SEXY" Dannii began chattering about Oakly acting all twiterpated. "err guys im just gonna go have a look around this place is tat ok?" Ayame asked. They all noded and started messing about. Ayame made a quick escape before they started saying ohh so who do you fancie? She rolled her eyes and began serching for the guys. She found them racing on the feilds, she hid behing a berry bush and wached them run. She loved the way they used there muscles as they leaped forward springing loose.She shook herself out of her fanticy and remembered she was going to wach her cousen fight (play fight kick boxing).Ayame got there just intime fore the training, anyone could join in on this bit but she was to shy to. "hey you came ohh this means so much to me" My cousen said huging me then introducing me to her fighting friend Conner"this is Conner yes i know hes ugly but hes very funy and kind" she looked at him and found him slightly atractive but when she heard his soar throatish voice(he didnt have a soar throat) her heart sank, sooon after the fight she heard his low toned laugh that made him even dreamyer.He was diffrent from other guys because she felt that she could really talk to him.About 2 hours later and Ayame whent to Georgia's den. They started to have girly talks about young males. Ayame started to describe Oakly and Mark. Her cousen was more intrested in Oakly, Ayame had to say she liked Mark better as her cousen wasn't that kind when it came to males. She started to as Ayame if she liked Conner, she denide even though it was true.It was time or Ayame to go she left and whent to her den what was a hole in an old Oak tree, it was warm and snug but very small.The next day she met her cousen again. "Will you ask Oakly out for me? i know i don't know him but the way you described him he sounded so hunky" Ayame was gobsmaked her cousen said that, "errr ye shure but im not that good speeking to boys" I repyed to her. I whent to serch for the boys in the forest, she sniffed at the ground for ther send."ECHOOO". She sneezed and suddenly bumped into Oakly. "Ohh err excuse me miss" He said to he. He looked at her knowing she was going to ask him something, she backed her hears and smilled, then bolted out of his sight. He sighed and whent to sneek up on his friends. Ayame tryed her best to talk to him but the words seamed toget stuk in her throat. When she told her cousen she didn't tell him she wasn't impressed and insisted se tryed sumore.A few weeks past and she saw Conner walking in the forest she ran over to him and started to chat.He was a year older than her but it didn,t mater she loved him so.Her friend came and began to chat to her, Connersaw his friends chasing a abit and decided to join in. Ayame asked her friend Kimberly if she would help her tell Oakly that her cousen loved him but when she said yes and Ayame whated for her the next day for her to come with her she stood her up and said she was busy and forgot.

Thats awesome Jodi! A few spelling mistakes ( But doesn't everyone make them, I do even with the spell check lol) but over all really good, please continue