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 Post subject: The Power of a Mother's Love (my first fanfic)
PostPosted: Mon Nov 05, 2007 10:02 am 
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Eloin is a young she-wolf who was unable to bear pups. Blinded by her pain she adopted a young stag. Her pack forbidded her to keep the fawn, but Eloin was unwilling to give him up. They fight the laws of nature to stay together but what will happen when winter comes. Without the love of a mate and the security of a pack how will Eloin keep the fawn and herself safe from the periless dangers that lie in wait? Only the true power of a mother's love will keep them safe.
Part 1 will be posted and the link to my gallery is here --> http://baltosource.timduru.org/en/fanfi ... /1323.html
Parts 1 to 5 in my gallery now :mrgreen:

heres part 1 hope you enjoy

The Power of a Mother's Love

PART 1: Barren

Eloin looked to the forest floor, tears filling her eyes. "I'm afraid to say your barren my dear!" Those were the words the Healer had used, and they stung like the sting of a bee in her heart. Being barren is worse than death to a she-wolf, for what point is there being a she-wolf if you can never birth a cub. Eloin got up and shook the tears away, she had to be brave, she had to tell Anlach, maybe if she was lucky she could make beta female, for even she was clever enough to know she could never be the Alpha female now.

Anlach had a bemused look on his face as Eloin, nervously padded up to him. Something was wrong, she was submitting to him like an Omega should, not his mate.

"Eloin what's the matter?" he growled as she nuzzled him under his jaw.

"I..I have s..ome bad news" She whimpered choked by her tears, this would be the last time she would be considered his mate.

"I went t...to the...the Healer to..day to s..see why I have ne..ver birthed y..your cub.s..." She was unable to finish just yet, as she swallowed hard and held back her tears she began once again.

"I..I..am...barren!" After finishing she burst into tears and collapsed to the floor, not wanting to ever move again.

"I..I.. I don't know what to say" Anlach whimpered utterly confused and hurt, he loved this female dearly but she could never be his mate now.

"Do the pack know?" He whispered laying down next to her shuddering form and licking her cheek tenderly. Eloin looked into his amber eyes and shuck her head. Anlach felt as though his heart was being torn from his chest, he had grown up with Eloin since they were pups and he had always wished her to be his mate, she was by far the most beautiful she-wolf in the pack, with her big crystal blue eyes and her silky cream and brown fur.

"Then they needn't find out... ever!" He growled firmly his eyes clouding over with sorrow for he new what was coming next.

"You know we couldn't do that, for one the pack would wonder why there was no new borns and..."

"But I love you!" Anlach growled looking at her beautiful, tear stained face once more.

"I know you do, and I feel the same way, but that is why I cannot let you do this! You need a female to carry your pups in her belly and protect them from danger so they can grow strong enough to carry the pack on when you can no longer, besides in time you will love another!" Eloin looked down, she was heart broken, she new Anlach loved her very much but it would destroy the pack if she carried on the role of Alpha and no new pups entered the pack.

"Maybe, but never as much as I love you! Come my love, one last hunt we shall share as Alphas!" Eloin perked up a bit, for she loved hunting with the pack more than anything and to run by Anlach's side was simply magical. So she nodded and as they assembled the pack Eloin couldn't take her crystal blue eyes off of Anlach.


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yey im gonna read it when i get back from my uncles (im gonna wach some fire works) :D

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awesome! Fireworks are brill but my pets are terrified by them :( xD I'm going to the park tonight.
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my cat is weired she lovs em she sits on the shed waching them. she just hates he screaming ones lol (hurts her icle ears)

ohh well gotta go ill read the fanfic later bye :D

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sorry for double post but that 1st part is so emotional.

i have also left a comment on your fanfic page and added you to fav list with heidi

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I read you're first four stories of the series. Very good! Really not bad for your first fan fic.

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I've been working on the 1st one for a while now :shock: I can't wait to finish it :lol:


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