Post subject: Re: Under a Blue Moon Ch.1 : HINTO **TEASER**
Posted: Fri Nov 02, 2007 8:21 pm
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Its a cute idea, and I'm really glad how you're making Hinto. However you may want to work out Moonspill's personality. If she wanted to stay away from males, why would she sleep with one she didn't even know? XD If you can think up a reasonable explanation for that, I'd definitely put it in there. You may want to also re-plan Balto being the topic of conversation for them. It seems way too "planned" you know what I mean?
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