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Okay, I just want to get some people's opinion on this 'cause I don't find it very clear myself XD. I was wondering how much I've improved over the course of the year. Here's a pic of what I drew in '06, then what I drew in '07

http://baltosource.timduru.org/art/Ashu ... 08-63.html

I forgot the teeth/tongue on the character on the bottom. I would have regularly included them, but I sort of forgot XD

Critiques on how to further improve on my drawings is accepted and is very much appreciated ;D. Thanks for viewing :]

Improvement deluxe<3!

the tail is still the same but other wise its a big change

yip!!!

Yes, you've definitely improved. =D I can offer some critique too. With the paws, for one, are very small and triangular. Paws are more rectangular. Also, with front legs, the legs don't connect directly to the paw, they have and extra angled bone. Think of our hands. Our fingers don't connect directly to our fingers do they? No, we have extra, flat, anged bones there that connect the two.

Another thing from the picture you gave, is the chest is very small. Try to bring out the chest more under the front legs.

Other than those few things, nice improvements! keep it up! ;D

Draco --> I appreciate the advice and critique ;] I've had difficulty with the paws in the past, so I'll definatly keep you're advice in mind about both the chest and the paws :]