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Hey guys I'm here with my first fanfic preview hope ya like it and if anyone can draw a title page I would appreciate it.

~summary~
Angel is a police dog who always wanted to be like her father, a captain of a police unit. That was until she discovers his ties with the mafia. Her father gets captured by old enemies along with her mother. Will she help her father escape or let him die?

~Characters~
Angel- Our main character, she has an extensive history in the police business as an academy student. One-and-a-half years ol, she has a keen sense of smell and peripheral vision that surpasses a regular SWAT team dog. She is the daughter of the captain of Unit 89 which we will go into later. She is very tomboyish since her dorm is shared with boys but, she can also be very brash in her decision.
Breed: German Shepherd/Husky mix Fur: White and Ginger

Rhyder & Nimbus- Rhyder and Nimbus are a part of Angel's squad and her best friends. Rhyder who is a female has many combat disciplines and very tough in her complexion. She is feared but also praised by many females so she could fit in like everyone else. She was part of the Austrailian Police force but then transferred to Bay City to broaden her horizons in combat. She also lives with Angel currently. Nimbus is the profiler and field agent. He is very agile and fast which makes him great at recon and retrevial. The only problem though was that he had many defects at birth and was fitted with robotics parts. He is currently crushing on Angel heavily but does not show it to anyone.
Rhyder: Breed: Austrailian Cattle Dog Nimbus: Cyborg dog
Fur: Golden Sepia

((to be finished))

Interesting plan.
I'd like to see how you give the dogs their separate roles or "jobs." You say that Angel is one-and-a-half years old, but a veteran, so we must be using dog years.
Is this an anthro story or a dogs-with-human-masters story?

Write on.
-LWf

dogs with humans story and yes dog years though I think my conversion from human to dog years is off