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Do you like this?
Yeah it's REALLY Good! I can't wait for it! 0%  0%  [ 0 ]
It's cool. 75%  75%  [ 3 ]
It's okay, not really my thing. 25%  25%  [ 1 ]
Total votes : 4
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Lux - The Guardian
 Post subject: Re: Marked For Death
PostPosted: Thu Aug 30, 2007 3:39 am 
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You're very risque when you're writing, just so you know it *gaspeth*

Anyways, well thought-out story, some spelling mistakes, but nothing big, pretty good grammar, and almost nothing to pick on. Overall, a good story. I do think, however, that you should work on your environmental descriptions ;)

Otherwise, a nice story, and I thoroughly enjoyed reading it.

9.7/10
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