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I make my own songs too and play the guitar. your song is great. you have very powerful lyrics and has feeling in them.

Here's a few I wrote!


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2.) Universal Mind
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( Music By: Lost Eternity )
( Lyrics By: Lost Eternity )
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( Verse 1 )

Back in the early days
When we were younger and stronger
When we would look at the wonders around us
Looking for love and something to pursue
To get a head start in everyday's challenges
These were the high times early in life

Now here we are 25 years later
Still going strong to this day
And making dreams come true
For the next generation after us
Living out a lifelong dream of fullfillment
Through love, hard times and passion's
Soft caressing grace we've kept together

( Chorus x1 )

25 years ago when we first met
From the very moment we first met
And I found you had that magic touch
I knew that you were the one I've been after
To make the lifelong journey down the long road
And I still feel that same love for you
That I felt 25 years ago to this very day
Back in the those wonderful high times
Keeping a universal mind between the two of us
Is the foundation that made us who we are today

( Verse 2 )

Way back when deep depression struck
I would get so lost within myself
When I needed someone to guide me
Someone to guide me back on track
You were always there and willing to help me
Even when I was inconsolible and lost
You still stood by my side with a love I could never repay

The days get darker, winds gets colder
I know you'll always be there by my side
Still showing the same loving stare that started it all
And I can't ever think of how to return to favor
But I know I'll always have you by my side
And that's all I could ever want or ask for

( Chorus x1 )

25 years ago when we first met
From the very moment we first met
And I found you had that magic touch
I knew that you were the one I've been after
To make the lifelong journey down the long road
And I still feel that same love for you
That I felt 25 years ago to this very day
Back in the those wonderful high times
Keeping a universal mind between the two of us
Is the foundation that made us who we are today

( Dedicated to all of our incredible friends out there!)
( this one's for all of you and your AWESOME support! Thanks guys! )

( Also dedicated to everyone who's supported progressive music )
( here stateside and just about everywhere else in the world! )

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And one more!
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6.) Everything
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Music By: Lost Eternity
Lyrics By: Lost Eternity
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(Verse 1)

Whenever I think back on how crazy this life is
Sometimes I sit and wonder how it's true
Whenever you would look my way
I would laugh and grin sarcastically
Then I'd walk beside you for miles
Even within the darkest storms
I found deep peace and resolve
As long as you're here beside me

( Chorus x1 )

Now I've found the real life's awnsers
Within reality's notice I found sanctuary
And I can't ever describe my feelings
And it seems you bring out the best in me
And for every day I spend here
And for every moment I'd give it all away
For someone to share every detail with
Everything deep within my wondering mind
Everything I could never tell anyone understanding
And just want to let you know I'd give it all for you

( Verse 2 )

Even through the hardest of times
Even when I'm down, depressed and alone
You where always there for me
The beautiful sunset is on the rise
It's peaceful glow radiating through the sky
As I'm here beside you my friend
Again.....

( Inst. Breakdown 1)

Does it all seem too obvious?
Is it written in my words?
Do you feel the sanctity I do?
Or am I just going out of line?
You make me insane in the best of ways
But I'll never get enough of your love

(Chorus x1)

Now I've found the real life's awnsers
Within a reality's notice I found sanctuary
And I can't ever describe my feelings
And it seems you bring out the best in me
And for every day I spend here
And for every moment I'd give it all away
For someone to share every detail with
Everything deep within my wondering mind
Everything I could never tell anyone understanding
And just want to let you know I'd give it all for you

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I don't exactly know why I wrote the last song for. so please kindly don't ask.

Thanks!

Thanks mate! I put in roughly 3 hours between the two of them.

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1.) Holy Rebel
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( Music By: Saint Balto )
( Lyrics By: Saint Balto )
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From the light I see
With my two burning eyes
I leave all my loved ones behind
Through this time I shall come back one day
Until then I’ll be waiting for…you

Though the chains hold me down
I still have my proud
No one will ever stop me
But the holy rebels will never surrender to you

Through the valley of pain
With their swords and their chains
They will find a way
Holy rebels!

With their horses of steel
They will never kneel
To the likes of you
Holy rebels!

Though the god have all the power
This is the hour
That we take that away from you!
Now my brothers and my sisters
We will stay together all for one and one for all

With the souls of the slain
Hidden deep in their brains
They will never give way
Holy Rebels!

The time now has come
Now drink your last rum
The battle has come
Holy Rebels!

*guitar solo*

Now the war is over
100 dead comrades turned over
But the gods were still alive

Only one option left standing
I really hate where this is going
But its time for major deicide

This will be my final moment
I’m enjoying every minute
As I pull my sword made of steel

As I set my eyes on the throne
When I slash all their bones
The gods will be no more
Holy Rebels!

Now I sit on the throne
With their blood on the floor
Now the world is no more
Holy Rebel!

I return to my land
With my wife hand and hand
And we enjoy each others life

Holy Rebel!

Nice. I see you used my layout format. huge props for that!

And they're good solid METAL lyrics as well!

BRING IT ON!

you have some really good material from what I have read!

Really. let me hear what you have if you have something to record vocals with, If the melody lines are smooth I might be able to eventually put a drum track down to it!

Hell. if it's good enough I may ask you to help us with our album's material. Don't worry if you have trouble with the heavier songs as I will provide backups on the final versions of each song! the main question is. are you up to it?

Reply ASAP and I will get back with you ASAP!

But for now BRING ON THE LYRICS!

-Icewind

Thanx, and good luck at the drummers competion!

Heres an example of I want..

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Raise The Knife
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Lyrics by: John Petrucci
Music by: Dream Theater
Notes: This song was cut from Falling Into Infinity.
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Have I thanked you for your time?
Or will your life go unrewarded
Again?
Never asking for a dime
You just gave all of yourself
Until I turned my back on you
My friend

The powers that be made you a martyr
Conspiracy led you to slaughter
I tried to control it but as soon as I showed it
I was shot down again

Once again outnumbered
Appreciation slumbered
You can ask yourself why
But that look in your eye
Doesn't pass the test
You've been laid to rest my friend
Again

Tortured artist bears his soul
Seems the pressure took its toll
Lived a life so punishing
Now he keeps the publishing

Spilling your guts out to a pad and pen
Communication to your silent friend

Raising the knife
To a picture of a life
(I once knew)
There comes a time
Compromising my life
(Just won't do)
I cannot lie
I can't try anymore
(To reach you)
I just can't fight
Raise the knife
Raise the knife
Cut through

I remember once you were the quiet type
Content to sit and watch the motions of your life
With false sensitivity
You cut yourself open so people would adore you

They all bought into your contrived sincerity
And how you wore your heart and soul right on your sleeve
Laughing sarcastically
You turned your back on the people who adored you

Self-absorbed exhaustion
Self-esteem distortion
Self-infused extortion
Self-serving abortion

I'll take the blame for these things that I say
'Cause I had the heart and the will and the courage to stay
Every day
I won't walk away

Reading through all the digests you show me
I notice the way that you think you control me
Doubting my future, you don't even know me
But I never walked out on you

Raising the knife
To a picture of a life
(I once knew)
There comes a time
Compromising my life
(Just won't do)
I cannot lie
I can't try anymore
(To reach you)
I just can't fight
Raise the knife
Raise the knife
Cut through

Raising the knife
To a picture of a life
(I once knew)
There comes a time
Compromising my life
(Just won't do)
I cannot lie
I can't try anymore
(To reach you)
I just can't fight
Raise the knife
And live my life
Without you

Raising the knife
To a picture of a life
There comes a time
Compromising my life
I cannot lie
I can't try anymore
I just can't fight
Raise the knife
Raise the knife
Raise the knife

Raise the knife
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So yes the darker stuff is more of what I want. I would also like a few up tempo songs as well though!

No. sorry. not at the moment anyway. but I will try to look into it ASAP though!

Try using the built in sound recorder that comes with windows if you have windows.

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1.) Romanticide
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( Music By: Saint Balto )
( Lyrics By: Saint Balto )
Guitar by Star
Violin by Jenna
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For a long time I loved you
And you loved me
But one day I shot you
For me to be free

Now i've been withering in my chambers
Remembering what I did
i could'nt take it anymore
"destroy all that you remember"

Romaticide is my name
Ruining lives is my game
If you get in my way
Your fate would be the same

Sleeping im my bed
Dreams of you haunting my head
Remebering all the times we had
but that was before I was raving mad

Romaticide is my name
Ruining lives is my game
If you get in my way
Your fate would be the same

(Violin and guitar solo)

Now I sit near your gravestone
prayed for my sins
gave you a rose or two
It is what it is

Romaticide is my name
Ruining lives is my game
If you get in my way
Your fate would be the same


Romaticide is my name
"For a long time I loved you"
Ruining lives is my game
"And you loved me"
If you get in my way
"But one day I shot you"
Your fate would be the same
"For me to be free"

Romaticide is my name
Ruining lives is my game
If you get in my way
Your fate would be the same

"Im sorry my love"

Here's a new one I just finished... Titled "Systematic Chaos"

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10.) Systematic Chaos
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Lyrics By: Lost Eternity
Music By: Lost Eternity
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Verse 1

Control
Where are now?
Chaos
Is this the way out?
Violence
Struggling to regain control

(Chorus x1)

Has our system of life let us down again
Have we finally fallen to the chaos of war
Has the world finally given in to the violence
Have we no more reason to follow rule
Or has this systematic chaos we designed
Brought us to this hell we've created

Verse 2

Wasteland of hell
Swords of war meet blood
Incontrolable obesession
Into the abyss we charge for the final fight
Hoping to shine some hope through the darkness
And bring some peace of mind back to this world
Never surrendering to the dark ways of violence

( Instrumental Breakdown 1)

Verse 3

Violence
Mass confusion
Controling chaos
System failing
Control slipping farther
Deception of war setting in

( Instrumental Breakdown 2 )

(Chorus x2)

Has our system of life let us down again
Have we finally fallen to the chaos of war
Has the world finally given in to the violence
Have we no more reason to follow rule
Or has this systematic chaos we designed
Brought us to this hell we've created

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Here's one of my song that I've dedicate to Balto 3 WoC, it's called -Ready For The Victory-


(Verse 1):

Go, go, go, ready for the victory,
Go, go, go...


You're in our hearts, just from round to round,
You will be the champion, the king without a crown,
Like a fireball, you'll never, never give up,
Hear the engine call, waiting for a start...

(Refrain):

Can't you see, we're ready for the victory,
You're the hero just for you and me,
We're in the pole-position team,
Oh can't you see it's, like a dream,
From Australia to USA,
And from Italy To Germany,
And from San Marino to Canada,
He is our biggest star...

(Verse 2):

Oh you cannot lose, if you have a lucky hand,
You will be the hero, you have many friends,
Dreams we cannot buy, but you will win again,
Nobody does it better, through passion and through pain...

(Refrain):

Can't you see, we're ready for the victory,
You're the hero just for you and me,
We're in the pole-position team,
Oh can't you see it's, like a dream,
From Australia to USA,
And from Italy To Germany,
And from San Marino to Canada,
He is our biggest star...