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 Post subject: RUN TO YOU: Saba can't banish her attitude TEASER
PostPosted: Sun Jul 08, 2007 2:31 pm 
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Here's a story about my Saba and how she had to deal with her own attitude towards a dog who has changed to gain her friendship.

Saba's puppy/teenage love. Saba joins a dog training school where she meets the dog that changed her life. She hates him at first, but then, when he's changed, she can't conrol her old attitude towards him though she wishes to tell him she forgave him. Will she be able to do this? Will she accet the fact they're in love? Read to find out! Story a bit based of the song called "Run To You" by Whitney Houston.

Lyrics:
I know that when you look at me
There's so much that you just don't see
But if you would only take the time
I know in my heart you'd find
A girl who's scared sometimes
Who isn't always strong
Can't you see the hurt in me?
I feel so all alone

I wanna run to you (oooh)
I wanna run to you (oooh)
Won't you hold me in your arms
And keep me safe from harm
I wanna run to you (oooh)
But if I come to you (oooh)
Tell me, will you stay or will you run away

Each day, each day I play the role
Of someone always in control
But at night I come home and turn the key
There's nobody there, no one cares for me
What's the sense of trying hard to find your dreams
Without someone to share it with
Tell me what does it mean?


(chorus)

I need you here
I need you here to wipe away my tears
To kiss away my fears
If you only knew how much...

link to youtube video with the song:
http://youtube.com/watch?v=5cnWIHj2gh8

I hope you all will like it so far, tell me what you think of it.
Enjoy!

Teaser

The night was getting cold, me, Sharon and Taka were going now our ways. Sharon and Taka were going the same way, talking all the way home. I, however, had plenty of time to think the day over. You wouldn't believe that we were enemies before. Oh yes, me and him... Everything started back then when I was new to the team.....

CHAPTER 1: "First Time, First Day, First Impression"

I'll never forget that day I first came there. I was 7 months old. The weather was cold, the leaves from trees were falling down covering the ground, and shining like a new carpet making the world colorful. I had no idea I'll meet them there. I didn't know that staying there will make my life different.


I wasn't happy that my owner made me go to the dog training school, being away from her made me feeling nervous, alone and sad. Yes, I could go home after few hours but still this didn't make me feel as happy as it was before I was send there. She walked me to the humans and other dogs.


Yes, first training was hard. I didn't know what's going on at the beginning but with my new friends I could cope with it. Sharon was one of them. A grey husky mix with a brown and yellow fringe. She was my real friend. To tell the truth, she was the only friend there at that time. She showed me everything around.


Break. Finally some relief. I was about to start a conversation with Sharon when that dog came. They called him Taka. He made that stupid smirk on his face like some dogs do when they don't really mean to smile and said hello to me. I replied though what he did didn't satisfy me at all. He turned Sharon's attention off me. I stood there looking at them laughing at each other. My attitude towards him wasn't good from the beginning. I'm not a selfish dog, but rather, I pay attention to the rudeness some show. But this wasn't that bad, what he did later made me hate him for long time...

CHAPTER 2: "Non - existing Dog"

The other day we were preparing for the next training. I cleaned the place around me from dropping leaves. Sharon's place was already tidy, because she stood further away from the tree, as I was standing under. Everything seemed to be going fine, until he came in once again.


My smile towards Sharon automatically changed. I looked at him, he looked at me. I didn't say a word. The training was about to start. He turned away from me, pretending he's leaving, while tossing the dirty leaves mixed with mud on me and my tidy place. He shocked me, but decided not to fight with him as my mum teached me always to be a respectful lady.


I moved the dust and leaves away and cleaned my place once more. He noticed it and did the same again. I approached to him calmly " Could you stop it? You're spoiling my work, I've just tidied my place" He turned to me, and instead of stopping, he did the same again. I was even more shocked, I've never met such rudeness before. My mum also taught me about those animals who do everything to get someone's attention, and so I did the opposite he wanted. That day I decided, from now on, I'll never say a word to him. I decided that since this moment he is a non-existing dog. As he went away, seeing I was blowing off what he did, I cleaned my place again.


This day we were practicing team work. Each one of us had gather small group of 3 to 4 dogs. I went with Sharon. We were looking for another partner but there was no free dogs. Sharon cheered me up, though I wasn't sad, and said we'll find somebody. She looked around once again, nobody, I looked once again, nobody, but...wait, there's a dog! "Whose that?" I thought. Oh no! Not him! Just take Sharon's attention so she won't see him! No! Don't look there! NO!


"Oh look Saba, Taka's there, let's take him. It appears that he's looking for group as well-"
"No, no, no, I think he's very busy with his group, maybe his the leader in his group, we better leave him, we can manage by ourselves anyway"
"Nonsense Saba, what's wrong with havin' him? He'll just help us. Taka!"
Great! That's what I need right now, the non-existing dog around me, helping me to learn how to cooperate.


Taka turned around and looked at us. I just hoped he'll refuse. She asked him if he'll join us. He said....."YES". I said to myself "NOO!!" I turned around but Sharon turned me back. She wanted me to be nice to him. She never noticed what happened, and why I didn't want him anywhere near me. I was in big trouble....

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This is a very beautiful and touching teaser about Saba.

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