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I'm definetly gonna read this! Good title and good plot. Discrimination is an ugly word isn't it. Guess it's sorta easy for me to relate to your older character, the father, Monty and maybe even the 'daughter', Dana.

Anyway, nice introduction. I, for one, thank you for putting this up! Good luck with this story and the 'Play Your Cards Right' trilogy.

This is good! Monty is a good like father to Dana. He really cares about her and being the elder he should. Dana is really fiesty but she also has a kind heart.

I like this a lot. Keep up the good work!

Nice conclusion to the chapter. I look forward to more from this story! Keep it up Dakota, you're doing great!

Good ending. I like Dana a lot! Well done with this chapter. It was good. I look forward to chapter 2. (I'm glad you like my new username. I needed a change.)

Good chapter! So some black dogs or wolves are running loose and now other black dogs, those who are innocent must flee their homes to safety. This is gonna be interesting. Well done on the chapter!

Well done on this chapter! This is the first part? I'll be looking out for the rest. Nice work!

Nice part. Monty has every reason to be protective of Dana. Nice job Dakota.

Nice job! I feel bad for Jay, but it seems he wasn't as strong a dog as I thought. At least New Jersey came along and saved Monty and Dana. The Coyote Hunter... good ring! Well they should be safe for the moment. Good chapter Dakota, good chapter!

I can't believe I didn't read this earlier! It's so good! You just love nova scotia duck tolling retrievers named Dana, don't you? At first I thought the Coyote Hunter was a human, and would either confuse Dana and Monty for Coyotes, or shoot them because of the black dog thing. So good! Need MORE!!!!