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Shall i continue?
yes! 60%  60%  [ 3 ]
no 40%  40%  [ 2 ]
maybe 0%  0%  [ 0 ]
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SilverFangWolf
 Post subject: Without You*TEASER*
PostPosted: Sat May 19, 2007 4:58 pm 
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Kodi and Dusty now have a litter of pups togerther but while starting a new family, Dusty gets seriously sick as Kodi worries about her. How will he make her well?

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Aw come on, please read my fanfic??????????

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Thank you wearedoomed! I'll start shortly :wink:

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SilverFangWolf wrote:
Aw come on, please read my fanfic??????????


Fanfic?
I apologize, but what I see is a summary.
Look, you even said so:
SilverFangWolf wrote:
Summary:Plot:


The summary sounds interesting, but honestly you shouldn't expect much commentary on a summary. Post some of your fanfic, and then see who leaves a note.

Also: In your summary, you say, "Will Kodi ever fall in love again and find a new mother for the pups?"
This, to me, implies that Dusty dies, and that ruins alot of suspense.
I might take that part out, if I were you.
Just a suggestion.

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I rewrote the summary....... :wink: Lonewolf

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Good summary you should make the fanfiction it would be great the summary was a good eye catcher

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