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PostPosted: Fri May 18, 2007 1:16 pm 
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What do you think of my new picture? It started off an ms paint doodle then I started fiddling around with the effects. Any tips on how I could improve? What do you think?

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It looks nice. Although I have a thing about the bubbles. The dark spot on the bubbles seems in consistent with the lighting and makes them look like eyeballs. When I mean consistent, I mean that light travels in one direction, unless if you have multiple light sources.

The rest looks cool though. 8)

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Its quite nice. Keep up the great work! :wink:

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It looks nice. Although I have a thing about the bubbles. The dark spot on the bubbles seems in consistent with the lighting and makes them look like eyeballs. When I mean consistent, I mean that light travels in one direction, unless if you have multiple light sources.


mmm I see what you mean. Hehe trust me to do something stupid lol. Oh well I'm still learning and I was only fiddling around. Thanks for the tip.

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mmm I see what you mean. Hehe trust me to do something stupid lol. Oh well I'm still learning and I was only fiddling around. Thanks for the tip.


Nah not stupid at all. You're just experimenting. At least you don't draw simple white circles for bubbles. You're aware that bubbles have shading.

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I love your art XD! Really nice!

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Thats a nice drawing. Do more! :wink:

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I like that picture very much, if you are exepting crits, here is one from me, when making the neck, strech it out just a bit longer, it looks like the wolf has no neck, but don't give up, that picture is really good! You are really great at drawing, keep it up. I think that you will be a famouse artist one day! (Like Silver Deni, Drew all those people I admire xD)

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Thanks so much you guys! :D

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I like that picture very much, if you are exepting crits, here is one from me, when making the neck, strech it out just a bit longer, it looks like the wolf has no neck, but don't give up, that picture is really good!


I'll take on your advice. Thanks for the tip.

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Uh thanks...I don't know what to say. You've made me so happy XD :D

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Aw, no problem. I really believe that ;D

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It's really good.^^ nice shading

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It's really good.^^ nice shading


Thanks ^^ I tried quite hard on the shading 'cause I need some practice.

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