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Post subject: .:Runaway:. (Topic now named my little drawing pile! xD)  Posted: Wed May 16, 2007 4:28 pm |
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Yes, it has been named my Drawing Pile. Just for all to see if I have been improving and or tell me crits. That would be very nice of you!
Totally isnpired by Linking Park's Runway. I really like the way this picture turned out. So yeah >> Alittle bit aboot it (XD) ---> It took me about.. hmmmm... maybe about 3 and 1/2 hours. It is Topaz. It's based off of some of the expiriences in my life, but I'm not looking at them, but the picture itself. I actually think I can see emotion in this picture xD I tried some kinda of shading... don't know what type... soft shadow, cell, gradient even maybe? xD I can't tell, its probably a mixtured of gradient and soft shadow... So0o0o yeah xD I don't know what else to say, oh yeah I almost forgot! I changed Topaz's look. (again xD) Yaa she has barb wire of her leg, and instead of three bangles on her wrist, she has three strands of barb wire, and yes, she does now have black paws/ wrists. xD Ya and if I change her again , you'll know. XP Okay so0o0o, if you see anything you like/dislike about the picture PLEASE tell me. Critiques too, as long as the are resonable. THanks for viewing, and post advice for further information ;D
( I hate JPEG formatt, it always ruins the quality T-T )
So enough dumb rambling from me, heres the picture xD---> 
FOR THOSE WHO CANNOT VIEW THE ABOVE IMAGE: http://img299.imageshack.us/img299/1987/runawayxq0.jpg
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WhiteWolf--(WSP)
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Post subject: Posted: Wed May 16, 2007 4:40 pm |
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Thanks ChocoKitten ;D
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Post subject: Posted: Wed May 16, 2007 8:36 pm |
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It's pretty good, whitewolf. I have some critiques:
Firstly, the hind legs kind of look odd to me. I can't really explain it, but the anatomy is slightly off. I think the knee (i think) is a bit too high up.
Secondly, she's very skinny. Now, this isn't a problem is you meant for it to be like this, but wolves are generally thicker (that sounded weird XD).
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Post subject: Posted: Wed May 16, 2007 8:42 pm |
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Quote: Oh yea, a part of its chest is missing but i do love the wolf! It looks like it has no chest, but your art is Awsome on the computer
It does look like part of it's chest is missing. Maybe you forgot to add it in XD.
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WhiteWolf--(WSP)
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Post subject: Posted: Thu May 17, 2007 1:24 pm |
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SilverFangWolf wrote: Oh yea, a part of its chest is missing but i do love the wolf! It looks like it has no chest, but your art is Awsome on the computer  xD It was meant to be like that to show off the fluffiest part of her neck. And thanks Ashur, I'm glad someone critiqued. Her knee was suppost to be up like that showing the was running/jumping or whatever motion involves that xD And the skinniness was actually somewhat of a blooper I guess. When I was smudging to fix the background and well, you can see the mistake. xD But thanks for the anatomy tips. I know I'm not the best at anatomy, so I am trying to improve. Thanks for the tips! =D
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Post subject: Posted: Thu May 17, 2007 2:55 pm |
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Pretty nice image.
Though I agree, the chest looks... strange, so does his/her hind legs. Also, the colouring looks a bit like you're a pro (no, seriously, it looks like you know Paint well) paint user, but that may just be me.
Love the image however. Practice makes perfect, and you're closing in.
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Post subject: Posted: Thu May 17, 2007 6:30 pm |
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Thanks Alot! xD I am no coloring pro I just practice alot. I'm coming out with another picture, so If ya want Crit on that. I'll post it in this topic too. It'll kinda be my picture topic xD Well, Ive been practicing anatomy today so maybe I'll have SOMETHING improved xD Thanks for posting!
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Post subject: Posted: Thu May 17, 2007 6:53 pm |
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-WhiteWolf- wrote: SilverFangWolf wrote: Oh yea, a part of its chest is missing but i do love the wolf! It looks like it has no chest, but your art is Awsome on the computer xD It was meant to be like that to show off the fluffiest part of her neck. And thanks Ashur, I'm glad someone critiqued. Her knee was suppost to be up like that showing the was running/jumping or whatever motion involves that xD And the skinniness was actually somewhat of a blooper I guess. When I was smudging to fix the background and well, you can see the mistake. xD But thanks for the anatomy tips. I know I'm not the best at anatomy, so I am trying to improve. Thanks for the tips! =D No problem 
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Post subject: Posted: Thu May 17, 2007 7:41 pm |
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Okay, here's another picture. It's not my best but I was bored and just decided to do something in photoshop. Not my best work, but at least its something, tell me what ya think!
http://img502.imageshack.us/img502/9711 ... opyqc2.jpg
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Post subject: Posted: Thu May 17, 2007 8:52 pm |
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Aww, that's so cute!!
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Post subject: Posted: Fri May 18, 2007 1:57 pm |
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Thanks so much you guys! I'm glad you like it! ;D Any crits? Thanks again! ;D
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