This is a fanfic I started today about my rp char's history. This would be the second fic I've ever uploaded on the sight if I don't finish
Betrayed faster. I hope you enjoy the first 'chapter'
summary: GingerStorm is the unfortunate daughter of balto and Jenna's 2nd litter. She was stolen and it beaten ever day. She had barely any contact with the dogs around her. One day she snaps and attacks her owner only to end up being Talon's secret! The sly German shepherd has to hide her from Samuel and the rest of his gang. Not only that but Talon's hiding more thongs than it seems!
note: It switches from Talon to Ginger view of things
Enjoy!!!!!!
GingerStorm, preferably called Ginger, winced in pain as the whip lashed at her back. She yelped as the 'master' kicked her near the ribs. She had no idea why he did this but he did it to all the dogs. He set food near his legs and he whipped you if you where not fast enough to get the food. If you didn't try you still got hit.
Ginger hated these beatings. None of the dogs liked them. She was stolen from her mom, Jenna, 2 weeks earlier than she was supposed to be even adopted. So hear she was, panting and sweating, all to get whipped by some man for food. The older dogs called it animal cruelty but she called it hell.
Finally the man left and took the food. She was bleeding and only got 2 bites of the dog food. It was punishment for no reason. Her head was throbbing a bit and she wanted out. Ginger wished her dad, Balto, was here. He could do anything!
~*The next day*~
TalonClaw's smokey black figure crept through the edge of the woods. He heard a puppy yapping loudly and peeked through the dense bushes. There was a man beating a dog with food. "Easy prey. . ." Talon snarled and smirked. He decided to wait for the man to leave until he looked closer at the black and ginger pup.
Ginger was so sick of this and so full of anger and rage she launched herself at the man. She chomped on his hand and seeing the whip in midair being flung across the fenced area she launched for that next. She felt it snap in her mouth and tumbled on the dirt covered ground.
She was laying in shock on the ground with the whip and blood in her mouth. She was panting heavily now. She yelped again as she was flung across the area with one kick of the man's boot.
Coughing up blood she launched another attack. This time she had his arm in full grip and was clawing at his chest. She didn't care if the other dogs where watching or if the man died, she knew he had to pay for the torched she had endured over the past 2 months.
The man tripped over his own foot and knocked down part of the fence. Seeing her freedom GingerStorm ran across the 'yard'. She paused to catch her breath on a hill side. Only then did she hear a defiant snarl coming from behind a rock. Out crept a smokey black german shepherd/ wolf. "Nice work pup . . ." He smirked. "I just have one question, you amuse me somewhat, so should I kill you now?"
Critique is welcome and I know I have errors so tell me if there are any!
Rude comments will be ignored
Picture teasers:
Im working on some but for now you have the possible cover:
http://baltosource.timduru.org/affArt-lang-2-nsite-1-numart-410-no-87-st-0-ong-1.html
. I like your writing style and the picture teaser. Keep it up!!