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hi everyone
would any of you like to read my first fanfic?

i'll be putting more up soon but i just want to see what people think.
here's the link: http://baltosource.timduru.org/fanfic.php?ici=1&num=2650&lang=2&nsite=1

thanks

This topic seems kinda pointless. Why not wait til yer fanfic is up, and so you can just POST a link for us?

well excuse me, but i tried that. besides i'm kinda new here and still haven't figured everything out!
by the way, i only put this up when i found out my fanfic was on the site. i wanted people to read it to know what they think and in case they could help me to improve it for future fics.
i'm sorry if i sound a bit rude but you sounded a bit rude yourself

Well, it really IS a pointless topic. I am not being RUDE. XD.. (Although I get this alot, you get used to it. ;])... I am just saying that you wrote this:



And when I read it last night, I assumed it was not up yet.

And just because you are 'new' does not make it so you dont understand the concept of linking if you dont...

Simply copy the URL of yer Fic, and Paste it here.

Its simply a PAIN to go and look for it, because my eyes are terrible at finding peoples names.

well sorry but i did try it that way and it didn't work so i just got rid of it

i know, let's just say either we're friends or aquaintances and leave it at that
if you don't like this then don't come to it anymore ok?

ok, i fixed it. happy?
sorry, but I'm a little slow at things sometimes and when i'm trying to be polite i take it the wrong way if others aren't the same.
i am extremely sorry to you guys.
can we be friends?

First I must say... BRAVO!

I like the stories. They are well written. The only thing I would say is that they could stand to be a bit longer, expand on your ideas a bit, pulling some additional characters in there and mixing them up a bit with the events of your stories should help with that. You've got a good set of characters there, and I enjoyed reading about them. Keep up the great work, and if you have any questions or want someone to proof read for you... or anything really, don't hesitate to e-mail me. Nothing pleases me more than to help out a fellow writer, especially one that's new to our family here at Balto source. Have a great day and write, write, WRITE!

- RTW

P.S.

My e-mail address is: [email protected]

Well aren't you crabby?

Hey, can we stop picking on the guy (or gal...) please?
... he (or she) asked for help and all that we can do so far is put him (or her) down for this stupid ******.... STOP!

Please ignore them H-R hybrid.... keep writing and don't let ANYONE discourage you... remember, write, write, WRITE!

- RTW

thanks rtw, i appreciate your help

lordlion you don't have to post anything if you don't like it. all i wanted was someone to read my fanfics for a bit of help. that's all.