balto_lover101 wrote:
read my Kodi and Jamie fanfic series? They are only about 2 pages long each and I reely want some more feedback on them.
Your fics are okay, and longer than most I have seen. I say keep writing. But I think its more of a 'Romeo and Juliet' romance thing going on. Okay, well not really. But don't you think puppies are more worried about playing around than 'love'? I'd think they'd be a bit older before they worried about it. 'Cause if I was a puppy, I would rather beat up all the males, insted of feel all 'lovey dovy' inside. XD