Attempt at Comic Page

Everlasting · **Posted:** Mon Mar 19, 2007 5:24 pm

DakotaWereWolf wrote:

Yeah, I've tried to doodle another comic again, this is a revised editon of my older one, which I only posted one teaser. It's called "Murderer" (don't worry, it ain't as bad as it sounds)

Well here's the first page. I like it but the rain is horrible -_-

http://baltosource.timduru.org/affArt-lang-2-nsite-1-numart-991-no-403-st-0-ong-1.html

Nice...! All it needs is a bit more of dialog. Also the wolves are hard to see... try to use lighter backgrounds/colors next time.

Overall, awsome!

Everlasting · **Posted:** Mon Mar 19, 2007 5:29 pm

DakotaWereWolf wrote:

Katja The WhiteWolf wrote:

DakotaWereWolf wrote:

Yeah, I've tried to doodle another comic again, this is a revised editon of my older one, which I only posted one teaser. It's called "Murderer" (don't worry, it ain't as bad as it sounds)

Well here's the first page. I like it but the rain is horrible -_-

http://baltosource.timduru.org/affArt-lang-2-nsite-1-numart-991-no-403-st-0-ong-1.html

Nice...! All it needs is a bit more of dialog. Also the wolves are hard to see... try to use lighter backgrounds/colors next time.

Overall, awsome!

Well, the only reason its dark is because its rainin' but I'm glad you're tellin' me, although things are supposed to seem vague at first but then it develops. :wink:

Thanks for your comment. This is my first attempt so I'm not fully experienced with writin' comics as I am with stories.

Glad to help!

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