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Would you read the finished product of Golden Howling?
Poll ended at Thu Mar 15, 2007 1:23 am
Heck yes! 60%  60%  [ 3 ]
Mm, probably 20%  20%  [ 1 ]
Maybe 20%  20%  [ 1 ]
Probably not 0%  0%  [ 0 ]
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PostPosted: Sat Mar 10, 2007 1:23 am 
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In advance: Yes, the writing style is rather clumsy, and when I've finished writing the story, I plan on going back and editing. It was much better, but my computer kept on shutting down while I was writing, so I had to re-write in some places. Thank you.

Golden Howling is about King, a Golden Retriever who gets lost in the wilderness one day. He finds Aleu's pack, who agree to give him shelter until he is strong enough to return home. However, King soon sees Aleu's beauty and wants to stay with her - even if it means turning wild...

A short description of the (new) characters:

King - The main character of the story, King is a friendly, happy-with-life Golden Retriever. His interests include food. His dislikes include not eating. He is a rich yellow-gold in colour, and his eyes are brown with a white aura.

Huntley - One of the Huskies always having to run around after King, Huntley is the red-muzzled pup from Balto and Jenna's litter. He likes running, but not in a team - only in a small group. Huntley is shy, but with a small group of friends he speaks with confidence. His coat is dark red and white, and his eyes are very dark blue, almost purple.

Ambrosia - Ambrosia is another of King's personal sled team. She is intolerant, has an attitude and delivers a hard bite - but she is hard-working. She is black with a cream face, chest, underside and legs. Her eyes are teal with a yellow aura.

Blitz - Although not "chunky" like some characters, Blitz is a Husky of a solid build. He's usually happy and heaps of fun, but when driven he can be pretty mean. His coat is white with a grey patch around both eyes, a tip of grey on both ears and six grey spots on his back. His eyes are light brown and white.

Radar - Radar is a wolf - and, unfortunately for King, has a crush on Aleu. He's tough, he's mean, he's sarcastic, and no male will go near Aleu as long as he lives. He's grey in colour, with silver markings. His right eye is blue and his left eye is brown.

More characters will be added as the story progresses :)

Official characters appearing in the story:

Aleu
Nuk
Yak
Sumac

More characters will be added as the story progresses :)

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Prologue:

If a wolf had been singing his mournful song at that time, then it wouldn’t have been for long. Every other sound in the Alaskan wilderness was shattered by loud, obnoxious barking - barking that could only come from the fun of standing on the back of a dogsled, towed along by three Huskies not enjoying the trip so much.
King was a Golden Retriever. His breed was famous for a sound temperament, and long, flowing golden coat, but a dog like King was not so useful in Nome, Alaska, where a “real” dog was a dog that pulled sleds and didn’t ride them. King took no notice of this, and neither did his young owner. They enjoyed life, and wide open spaces to run around and be stupid all they liked were plentiful.
King could easily be described as a happy dog. Not clever, but at least happy. And that was all he wanted.

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Like I said before, I will edit the story later, so if you don't like it now, then try reading it again later.

I want opinions from the readers before I post updates. Comments on the plot, characters, anything! Please no harsh crits, however - I don't take them well :P

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PostPosted: Sat Mar 10, 2007 3:02 pm 
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I like it. It kind've reminds me of the book "Call of the Wild." Please continue.

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Nice story finish it!

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sounds cool :wink:

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that was brilliant I can't wait to read more and I will deffo read the full story when its finished :D please continue it was cool 8)


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