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This is the sequal to my story Balto: Cold War I hope you like it this is a lttle preview well here u are

Prologue
The windiest night ever in Nome Maro was walking to the woods.
He sat by a small beautiful stream where he communicated with his parents some how. “Father you have told me that every moment everything changes.” He got no reply “My time is coming soon father I’ll join you soon but please my life loves this beautiful husky she is smart kind considerate my heart won’t leave her but my life will.” Father I’m lost at this point. “In my dream I saw a black husky exactly same one in the town his name is Maliki he is the one I’m looking for father but please tell me how much more time do I have to complete my mission my wish my dream in this world?” Maro said looking up to the sky……… To Be Continued

Love them!!!!!!!
After reading cold war, I can't wait to read your new one

(I'm gonna write one too--i had this idea that i'd do a roleplay to get ideas. It's called: Balto and Kodi:An Adventure of Father and Son--check it out!)

Your Fan Fics are really cool, I love them. Keep up the good work!

Rusty

Balto: Heart Broken

Shadow, Timbre, Dash, Melody, Shasta, Talkeet, Sheikh, Lima, Thunder, Blaize, Likea, Sheae, Drake and Gemini are all Anthony Rotramels Characters
Band and Biety are Cyberwulfs Characters
Angel, Mamoru, Kyle, Maliki, Shani, Maro, Jade, and Jane are Dingowolf’s Characters
Steele, Balto, Jenna, Aleu, Dingo, Dusty, Kodi, and Saba are all Universal and Amblin Production

Prologue
The windiest night ever in Nome Maro was walking to the woods.
He sat by a small beautiful stream where he communicated with his parents some how. “Father you have told me that every moment everything changes.” He got no reply “My time is coming soon father I’ll join you soon but please my life loves this beautiful husky she is smart kind considerate my heart won’t leave her but my life will.” Father I’m lost at this point. “In my dream I saw a black husky exactly the same one in the town his name is Maliki he is the one I’m looking for father but please tell me how much more time do I have to complete my mission my wish my dream in this world?” Maro said looking up to the sky. Still he didn’t get a reply. Maro sighed the wind blew harshly in Maro’s face. He began walking away from the stream in the town called Nome. He knew these were his last days. “What should I tell Saba?” He said to him self. While he was walking he saw Balto approaching “Hi Maro right? Balto asked Maro nodded respectfully. “Pleased to meet you.” Maro said, “We’ve met before.” Balto said, “I’ll catch you later there Maro.” Then ran off
“Good Bye.” Maro said and ran off to find Mamoru…….


Chapter1

Back in the cave Aleu was looking over a cliff the pasture was beautiful. She smiled about couple of weeks ago her father and mother met face to face with their enemy Steele it filled her with disgust but she was relived that he was dead. She was terribly worried that a war would break out between her clan and the Alva clan. They had attacked Shadow and his team during a hunt for food. Yet she had to see more. “Maybe I should send messenger and see why they attacked us.” She thought. She heard footsteps coming from her chamber they were a lot of them. She turned around to see Dash he didn’t look too happy.
“Dash what’s the matter?” Aleu asked going over to Dash. Dash pointed his head toward the chamber. Aleu gave him a strange look and walked to the cave. She saw Shadow lying there. SHADOW! She yelled. ‘What happened?” She asked turning around even though she didn’t want. Dash sighed “We were attacked and he hit a boulder.” He said “Let me guess who we were attacked by the “Alva Clan”?” She said. Her brother nodded solemnly. “Is he going to be okay?” She asked. Dash nodded solemnly again. Aleu heart was a little relived. Dash left the cave and Aleu was left with Shadow. She laid down beside him and cried softly in his shoulder……….

Back in Nome Maro was making his way to Mamoru’s. He reached there walked over to the door and scratched it. Mamoru heard a scratching noise “Jane I have to go somewhere!” He said “Alright!” She said. He walked through the doggie door to see Maro “Hey buddy shouldn’t you be sleeping at this time of your life.” Mamoru said. Maro knew that Mamoru cared about him dearly. “Yeah I know but I need to talk.” He said looking to the ground. “Oh about how your going to tell her?” Mamoru said Maro nodded. Maro sighed. “So what’s on your mind buddy?”……………TO BE CONTINUED

( This is my next story hope you like it so far what I’ve done any way.)
Yours Truly DW

This one is great so far! Keep it up!
Only one thing, and this is just a suggestion, but you really should format your works like Rotramel said. I do, and it really does add pages. Formating also makes dialogues MUCH easier to differenciate from descriptions.

Example:

"Balto, what's going on?" Jenna asked.
"It's nothing for you to worry about," he replied. Jenna gave him a questioning look, but he held her gaze.
"Be careful, Balto."

You don't need to put 'she said' or 'Jenna said' after the last speech because it is an ongoing dialogue between just two characters and it is easy to tell who is speaking.

I look forward to the next installment of Balto: Heartbroken!

Balto: Heart Broken

Shadow, Timbre, Dash, Melody, Shasta, Talkeet, Sheikh, Lima, Thunder, Blaize, Likea, Sheae, Drake and Gemini are all Anthony Rotramels Characters
Band and Biety are Cyberwulfs Characters
Angel, Mamoru, Kyle, Maliki, Shani, Maro, Jade, and Jane are Dingowolf’s Characters
Steele, Balto, Jenna, Aleu, Dingo, Dusty, Kodi, and Saba are all Universal and Amblin Production

Prologue
The windiest night ever in Nome Maro was walking to the woods.
He sat by a small beautiful stream where he communicated with his parents some how. “Father you have told me that every moment everything changes.” He got no reply “My time is coming soon father I’ll join you soon but please my life loves this beautiful husky she is smart kind considerate my heart won’t leave her but my life will.” Father I’m lost at this point. “In my dream I saw a black husky exactly the same one in the town his name is Maliki he is the one I’m looking for father but please tell me how much more time do I have to complete my mission my wish my dream in this world?” Maro said looking up to the sky. Still he didn’t get a reply. Maro sighed the wind blew harshly in Maro’s face. He began walking away from the stream in the town called Nome. He knew these were his last days. “What should I tell Saba?” He said to him self. While he was walking he saw Balto approaching “Hi Maro right? Balto asked Maro nodded respectfully. “Pleased to meet you.” Maro said, “We’ve met before.” Balto said, “I’ll catch you later there Maro.” Then ran off
“Good Bye.” Maro said and ran off to find Mamoru…….


Chapter1

Back in the cave Aleu was looking over a cliff the pasture was beautiful. She smiled about couple of weeks ago her father and mother met face to face with their enemy Steele it filled her with disgust but she was relived that he was dead. She was terribly worried that a war would break out between her clan and the Alva clan. They had attacked Shadow and his team during a hunt for food. Yet she had to see more. “Maybe I should send messenger and see why they attacked us.” She thought. She heard footsteps coming from her chamber they were a lot of them. She turned around to see Dash he didn’t look too happy.
“Dash what’s the matter?” Aleu asked going over to Dash. Dash pointed his head toward the chamber. Aleu gave him a strange look and walked to the cave. She saw Shadow lying there. SHADOW! She yelled. ‘What happened?” She asked turning around even though she didn’t want. Dash sighed “We were attacked and he hit a boulder.” He said “Let me guess who we were attacked by the “Alva Clan”?” She said. Her brother nodded solemnly. “Is he going to be okay?” She asked. Dash nodded solemnly again. Aleu heart was a little relived. Dash left the cave and Aleu was left with Shadow. She laid down beside him and cried softly in his shoulder……….

Back in Nome Maro was making his way to Mamoru’s. He reached there walked over to the door and scratched it. Mamoru heard a scratching noise “Jane I have to go somewhere!” He said “Alright!” She said. He walked through the doggie door to see Maro “Hey buddy shouldn’t you be sleeping at this time of your life.” Mamoru said. Maro knew that Mamoru cared about him dearly. “Yeah I know but I need to talk.” He said looking to the ground. “Oh about how your going to tell her?” Mamoru said Maro nodded. Maro sighed. “So what’s on your mind buddy?” Mamoru asked his best friend. “Mamoru…I don’t know how I’m going to tell her.” Maro said looking at the ground. “I mean I really love her but my love won’t last a lifetime with my…… he paused there to stop the tears from coming out, “my……. Heart Problem.” Maro finally finished. “Come on buddy it’s okay I’m sure you can do it again.” Mamoru said putting a paw on his friends shoulder. Maro looked up at his friend and said “What do you mean by that?” Maro said. “Remember if you can put me and Jane together then you can put Saba and Maliki too.” Mamoru said. Maro smiled at his friend. “Yeah I better talk to Maliki and then maybe to Saba.” He said getting up and ran. “I wish you luck buddy.” Mamoru said and disappeared in his home.

Maro was running as fast as his legs could carry him. He panted, he slid through the road and bumped into the stairs of Maliki’s home. Maliki was inside when he heard a thump. He went outside to check it out. He walked through the doggie door and saw Maro rubbing his paw on his head. “Oww I have to be more careful.” Maro said making his way to Maliki came down the steps. He laughed at Maro’s comment. “so what’s up?” he said. Maro looked at the ground. “What’s wrong?” Maliki asked making his paces faster to Maro. Maro sighed “Here is a question I want to ask you?” He said looking at Maliki “Uh…… Okay what is it?” Maliki asked “I’ve been noticing that you look at Saba a lot how come,”
“Do you like her?” Maro said “ I don’t like her I love her I guess you found out . Maliki said, “No tell me how you feel about her?” Maro asked. “I feel she is the most beautiful husky in the whole wide world.” Maliki said smiling, “Oh really you must really love her.” Maro said. Maliki nodded. “Yes he loves her know all I have to do is get Saba to love him.” Maro thought, “Look buddy I have to go we will talk later alright?” Maro said. Maliki nodded and left to his home. Maro dashed to find Saba “I knew it….. he loves her!” Maro said as he ran dodging everybody in his way. He stopped at a house he smiled Saba as lying on the porch sleeping. “Should I disturb her?” he said, “But I have to tell”. He thought He walked hesitantly to her. He walked to the steps. He gently nudged her awake “Saba wake up.” Maro said in soft tone. Saba opened her eyes to see Maro. “Hey…… she said yawning …….Maro.
She sat got to her feet. Why did you wake me up?” Saba asked looking at Maro. “Saba…. I need to talk to talk to.” Maro said looking to the ground then at Saba. “What is it Maro?” Saba asked him……… To Be Continued

(Sorry but I’m going rite more maybe any way hope you enjoy so far of it)
D W

Love it!!!!!

Keep writing DW...i can't wait to read more!!!

lto: Heart Broken

Shadow, Timbre, Dash, Melody, Shasta, Talkeet, Sheikh, Lima, Thunder, Blaize, Likea, Sheae, Drake and Gemini are all Anthony Rotramels Characters
Band and Biety are Cyberwulfs Characters
Angel, Mamoru, Kyle, Maliki, Shani, Maro, Jade, and Jane are Dingowolf’s Characters
Steele, Balto, Jenna, Aleu, Dingo, Dusty, Kodi, and Saba are all Universal and Amblin Production

Prologue
The windiest night ever in Nome Maro was walking to the woods.
He sat by a small beautiful stream where he communicated with his parents some how. “Father you have told me that every moment everything changes.” He got no reply “My time is coming soon father I’ll join you soon but please my life loves this beautiful husky she is smart kind considerate my heart won’t leave her but my life will.” Father I’m lost at this point. “In my dream I saw a black husky exactly the same one in the town his name is Maliki he is the one I’m looking for father but please tell me how much more time do I have to complete my mission my wish my dream in this world?” Maro said looking up to the sky. Still he didn’t get a reply. Maro sighed the wind blew harshly in Maro’s face. He began walking away from the stream in the town called Nome. He knew these were his last days. “What should I tell Saba?” He said to him self. While he was walking he saw Balto approaching “Hi Maro right? Balto asked Maro nodded respectfully. “Pleased to meet you.” Maro said, “We’ve met before.” Balto said, “I’ll catch you later there Maro.” Then ran off
“Good Bye.” Maro said and ran off to find Mamoru…….


Chapter1

Back in the cave Aleu was looking over a cliff the pasture was beautiful. She smiled about couple of weeks ago her father and mother met face to face with their enemy Steele it filled her with disgust but she was relived that he was dead. She was terribly worried that a war would break out between her clan and the Alva clan. They had attacked Shadow and his team during a hunt for food. Yet she had to see more. “Maybe I should send messenger and see why they attacked us.” She thought. She heard footsteps coming from her chamber they were a lot of them. She turned around to see Dash he didn’t look too happy.
“Dash what’s the matter?” Aleu asked going over to Dash. Dash pointed his head toward the chamber. Aleu gave him a strange look and walked to the cave. She saw Shadow lying there. SHADOW! She yelled. ‘What happened?” She asked turning around even though she didn’t want. Dash sighed “We were attacked and he hit a boulder.” He said “Let me guess who we were attacked by the “Alva Clan”?” She said. Her brother nodded solemnly. “Is he going to be okay?” She asked. Dash nodded solemnly again. Aleu heart was a little relived. Dash left the cave and Aleu was left with Shadow. She laid down beside him and cried softly in his shoulder……….

Back in Nome Maro was making his way to Mamoru’s. He reached there walked over to the door and scratched it. Mamoru heard a scratching noise “Jane I have to go somewhere!” He said “Alright!” She said. He walked through the doggie door to see Maro “Hey buddy shouldn’t you be sleeping at this time of your life.” Mamoru said. Maro knew that Mamoru cared about him dearly. “Yeah I know but I need to talk.” He said looking to the ground. “Oh about how your going to tell her?” Mamoru said Maro nodded. Maro sighed. “So what’s on your mind buddy?” Mamoru asked his best friend. “Mamoru…I don’t know how I’m going to tell her.” Maro said looking at the ground. “I mean I really love her but my love won’t last a lifetime with my…… he paused there to stop the tears from coming out, “my……. Heart Problem.” Maro finally finished. “Come on buddy it’s okay I’m sure you can do it again.” Mamoru said putting a paw on his friends shoulder. Maro looked up at his friend and said “What do you mean by that?” Maro said. “Remember if you can put me and Jane together then you can put Saba and Maliki too.” Mamoru said. Maro smiled at his friend. “Yeah I better talk to Maliki and then maybe to Saba.” He said getting up and ran. “I wish you luck buddy.” Mamoru said and disappeared in his home.

Maro was running as fast as his legs could carry him. He panted, he slid through the road and bumped into the stairs of Maliki’s home. Maliki was inside when he heard a thump. He went outside to check it out. He walked through the doggie door and saw Maro rubbing his paw on his head. “Oww I have to be more careful.” Maro said making his way to Maliki came down the steps. He laughed at Maro’s comment. “so what’s up?” he said. Maro looked at the ground. “What’s wrong?” Maliki asked making his paces faster to Maro. Maro sighed “Here is a question I want to ask you?” He said looking at Maliki “Uh…… Okay what is it?” Maliki asked “I’ve been noticing that you look at Saba a lot how come,”
“Do you like her?” Maro said “ I don’t like her I love her I guess you found out . Maliki said, “No tell me how you feel about her?” Maro asked. “I feel she is the most beautiful husky in the whole wide world.” Maliki said smiling, “Oh really you must really love her.” Maro said. Maliki nodded. “Yes he loves her know all I have to do is get Saba to love him.” Maro thought, “Look buddy I have to go we will talk later alright?” Maro said. Maliki nodded and left to his home. Maro dashed to find Saba “I knew it….. he loves her!” Maro said as he ran dodging everybody in his way. He stopped at a house he smiled Saba as lying on the porch sleeping. “Should I disturb her?” he said, “But I have to tell”. He thought He walked hesitantly to her. He walked to the steps. He gently nudged her awake “Saba wake up.” Maro said in soft tone. Saba opened her eyes to see Maro. “Hey…… she said yawning …….Maro.
She sat got to her feet. Why did you wake me up?” Saba asked looking at Maro. “Saba…. I need to talk to you Maro said looking to the ground then at Saba. “What is it Maro?” Saba asked him.
Maro looked at the ground “Should I tell her that Maliki loves her.” He thought, “But I have to try.” Maro swallowed hard. “Saba, I…..I think Maliki…… likes you.” Maro said, “There I said it.” Maro thought. “How do you know?” Saba asked looking at Maro. “He told me.” Maro said. “Oh really what did he say?” Saba said raising an eyebrow. “Look Saba what ever I’m going to tell you have to believe me please.” Maro said looking at Saba. “Okay just tell me what he said.” Saba said. Maro nodded and began. “Saba these are the exact words he said He said that “I love you. I love you when I die and after that. On my last wish is to love you. I love you Saba I love you I love you. Maro finished. Saba was amazed for what Maliki told Maro. “Who do I like Maro or Maliki?” She thought. “Saba are you okay?” Maro said. Saba nodded. “Okay I should be leaving now.” Maro said. Saba nodded again. Maro walked downed the steps and disappeared. “I lied to her I told her my feelings. But I hope she doesn’t find out” Maro thought.

Chapter2
Aleu was still crying Shadows shoulder. “Shadow please be okay.” Then she remembered the first time she meet with him.
She drifted back to the past………..“Are you okay Aleu?” She heard a raspy voice say.
She turned around and stood up. It was the wolf.
“Yes,” she said. “That was quite brave of you,”
“It was nothing,” he said, “just my duty to the pack.”
“You're one of the more quiet ones aren't you?” she said.
“Yes, I [b]guess I am. I don't say much. Aleu….” he asked, “could you tell me something”
“What is it?” Aleu said.
“Could you tell me how bad it is?”
“What is?” Aleu said.
“Me,” he responded, “I'm kind of afraid to look.”
“Nava said that it didn't look really bad. He said you might have a limp but as far as death is concerned. He doesn't think you have anything to worry about,” said Aleu.
“Oh, I've never been too much afraid of death myself,” he said. “I don't really have anyone to grieve me or anything. My mother and father were both killed by hunters when it was winter. One of them I think it was my dad was part husky like you. I'm not…”
Here he stopped and winced in pain. “
I'm not sure about him but I remember my mother. She was snow white, and had this warm reassuring voice that let me know I was safe. I had two other siblings, I think. I don't know what happened to them, but I was separated from them shortly before they were killed. Nava found me about a year ago. I was almost frozen solid. He took me in and has been a kind of father to me.”
Here he paused.
“I…. .I have something to tell you. I was just scared of death for the first time in my life. I've helped lead patrols and been attacked before but I never feared death.”
“That's okay,” Aleu said. “Lot's of people are scared of death when it seems about to hit them.”
“No, you got my meaning wrong there,” he said. “I wasn't afraid of my death. I was afraid of yours. I'm not suicidal or anything. I just don't fear my death. I wouldn't have done that had it not been you that he was taking aim at.”
“I owe you my life,” Aleu said. Then she was brought back to the [/b]present. “Oh, Shadow.” Aleu said burying her face in his shoulder and crying again. To Be Continued

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Balto: Heart Broken

Shadow, Timbre, Dash, Melody, Shasta, Talkeet, Sheikh, Lima, Thunder, Blaize, Likea, Sheae, Drake and Gemini are all Anthony Rotramels Characters
Band and Biety are Cyberwulfs Characters
Angel, Mamoru, Kyle, Maliki, Shani, Maro, Jade, and Jane are Dingowolf’s Characters
Steele, Balto, Jenna, Aleu, Dingo, Dusty, Kodi, and Saba are all Universal and Amblin Production

Prologue
The windiest night ever in Nome Maro was walking to the woods.
He sat by a small beautiful stream where he communicated with his parents some how. “Father you have told me that every moment everything changes.” He got no reply “My time is coming soon father I’ll join you soon but please my life loves this beautiful husky she is smart kind considerate my heart won’t leave her but my life will.” Father I’m lost at this point. “In my dream I saw a black husky exactly the same one in the town his name is Maliki he is the one I’m looking for father but please tell me how much more time do I have to complete my mission my wish my dream in this world?” Maro said looking up to the sky. Still he didn’t get a reply. Maro sighed the wind blew harshly in Maro’s face. He began walking away from the stream in the town called Nome. He knew these were his last days. “What should I tell Saba?” He said to him self. While he was walking he saw Balto approaching “Hi Maro right? Balto asked Maro nodded respectfully. “Pleased to meet you.” Maro said, “We’ve met before.” Balto said, “I’ll catch you later there Maro.” Then ran off
“Good Bye.” Maro said and ran off to find Mamoru…….


Chapter1

Back in the cave Aleu was looking over a cliff the pasture was beautiful. She smiled about couple of weeks ago her father and mother met face to face with their enemy Steele it filled her with disgust but she was relived that he was dead. She was terribly worried that a war would break out between her clan and the Alva clan. They had attacked Shadow and his team during a hunt for food. Yet she had to see more. “Maybe I should send messenger and see why they attacked us.” She thought. She heard footsteps coming from her chamber they were a lot of them. She turned around to see Dash he didn’t look too happy.
“Dash what’s the matter?” Aleu asked going over to Dash. Dash pointed his head toward the chamber. Aleu gave him a strange look and walked to the cave. She saw Shadow lying there. SHADOW! She yelled. ‘What happened?” She asked turning around even though she didn’t want. Dash sighed “We were attacked and he hit a boulder.” He said “Let me guess who we were attacked by the “Alva Clan”?” She said. Her brother nodded solemnly. “Is he going to be okay?” She asked. Dash nodded solemnly again. Aleu heart was a little relived. Dash left the cave and Aleu was left with Shadow. She laid down beside him and cried softly in his shoulder……….

Back in Nome Maro was making his way to Mamoru’s. He reached there walked over to the door and scratched it. Mamoru heard a scratching noise “Jane I have to go somewhere!” He said “Alright!” She said. He walked through the doggie door to see Maro “Hey buddy shouldn’t you be sleeping at this time of your life.” Mamoru said. Maro knew that Mamoru cared about him dearly. “Yeah I know but I need to talk.” He said looking to the ground. “Oh about how your going to tell her?” Mamoru said Maro nodded. Maro sighed. “So what’s on your mind buddy?” Mamoru asked his best friend. “Mamoru…I don’t know how I’m going to tell her.” Maro said looking at the ground. “I mean I really love her but my love won’t last a lifetime with my…… he paused there to stop the tears from coming out, “my……. Heart Problem.” Maro finally finished. “Come on buddy it’s okay I’m sure you can do it again.” Mamoru said putting a paw on his friends shoulder. Maro looked up at his friend and said “What do you mean by that?” Maro said. “Remember if you can put me and Jane together then you can put Saba and Maliki too.” Mamoru said. Maro smiled at his friend. “Yeah I better talk to Maliki and then maybe to Saba.” He said getting up and ran. “I wish you luck buddy.” Mamoru said and disappeared in his home.

Maro was running as fast as his legs could carry him. He panted, he slid through the road and bumped into the stairs of Maliki’s home. Maliki was inside when he heard a thump. He went outside to check it out. He walked through the doggie door and saw Maro rubbing his paw on his head. “Oww I have to be more careful.” Maro said making his way to Maliki came down the steps. He laughed at Maro’s comment. “so what’s up?” he said. Maro looked at the ground. “What’s wrong?” Maliki asked making his paces faster to Maro. Maro sighed “Here is a question I want to ask you?” He said looking at Maliki “Uh…… Okay what is it?” Maliki asked “I’ve been noticing that you look at Saba a lot how come,”
“Do you like her?” Maro said “ I don’t like her I love her I guess you found out . Maliki said, “No tell me how you feel about her?” Maro asked. “I feel she is the most beautiful husky in the whole wide world.” Maliki said smiling, “Oh really you must really love her.” Maro said. Maliki nodded. “Yes he loves her know all I have to do is get Saba to love him.” Maro thought, “Look buddy I have to go we will talk later alright?” Maro said. Maliki nodded and left to his home. Maro dashed to find Saba “I knew it….. he loves her!” Maro said as he ran dodging everybody in his way. He stopped at a house he smiled Saba as lying on the porch sleeping. “Should I disturb her?” he said, “But I have to tell”. He thought He walked hesitantly to her. He walked to the steps. He gently nudged her awake “Saba wake up.” Maro said in soft tone. Saba opened her eyes to see Maro. “Hey…… she said yawning …….Maro.
She sat got to her feet. Why did you wake me up?” Saba asked looking at Maro. “Saba…. I need to talk to you Maro said looking to the ground then at Saba. “What is it Maro?” Saba asked him.
Maro looked at the ground “Should I tell her that Maliki loves her.” He thought, “But I have to try.” Maro swallowed hard. “Saba, I…..I think Maliki…… likes you.” Maro said, “There I said it.” Maro thought. “How do you know?” Saba asked looking at Maro. “He told me.” Maro said. “Oh really what did he say?” Saba said raising an eyebrow. “Look Saba what ever I’m going to tell you have to believe me please.” Maro said looking at Saba. “Okay just tell me what he said.” Saba said. Maro nodded and began. “Saba these are the exact words he said He said that “I love you. I love you when I die and after that. On my last wish is to love you. I love you Saba I love you I love you. Maro finished. Saba was amazed for what Maliki told Maro. “Who do I like Maro or Maliki?” She thought. “Saba are you okay?” Maro said. Saba nodded. “Okay I should be leaving now.” Maro said. Saba nodded again. Maro walked downed the steps and disappeared. “I lied to her I told her my feelings. But I hope she doesn’t find out” Maro thought.

Chapter2
Aleu was still crying Shadows shoulder. “Shadow please be okay.” Then she remembered the first time she meet with him.
She drifted back to the past………..“Are you okay Aleu?” She heard a raspy voice say.
She turned around and stood up. It was the wolf.
“Yes,” she said. “That was quite brave of you,”
“It was nothing,” he said, “just my duty to the pack.”
“You're one of the more quiet ones aren't you?” she said.
“Yes, I guess I am. I don't say much. Aleu….” he asked, “could you tell me something”
“What is it?” Aleu said.
“Could you tell me how bad it is?”
“What is?” Aleu said.
“Me,” he responded, “I'm kind of afraid to look.”
“Nava said that it didn't look really bad. He said you might have a limp but as far as death is concerned. He doesn't think you have anything to worry about,” said Aleu.
“Oh, I've never been too much afraid of death myself,” he said. “I don't really have anyone to grieve me or anything. My mother and father were both killed by hunters when it was winter. One of them I think it was my dad was part husky like you. I'm not…”
Here he stopped and winced in pain. “
I'm not sure about him but I remember my mother. She was snow white, and had this warm reassuring voice that let me know I was safe. I had two other siblings, I think. I don't know what happened to them, but I was separated from them shortly before they were killed. Nava found me about a year ago. I was almost frozen solid. He took me in and has been a kind of father to me.”
Here he paused.
“I…. .I have something to tell you. I was just scared of death for the first time in my life. I've helped lead patrols and been attacked before but I never feared death.”
“That's okay,” Aleu said. “Lot's of people are scared of death when it seems about to hit them.”
“No, you got my meaning wrong there,” he said. “I wasn't afraid of my death. I was afraid of yours. I'm not suicidal or anything. I just don't fear my death. I wouldn't have done that had it not been you that he was taking aim at.”
“I owe you my life,” Aleu said. Then she was brought back to the present. “Oh, Shadow.” Aleu said burying her face in his shoulder and crying again.

Saba was still thinking “Maro doesn’t love me dose he?” She said. Saba was trying to figure out why Maro told her. “If he loved me he wouldn’t tell me or he just wanted to let me know what is the deal here!” Saba said with frustration coming in her tone
“I need to talk to Mom she is the only person who can help me.” Saba as she headed for Jenna’s house.

Maro was lying on the sand he was staring at the pasture. “It’s so beautiful.” “Yeah I kind of think it is to.” A voice said from behind him. As he turned he saw Saba. “I was passing by I thought I should see you.” Saba said walking forward to Maro…………………
“Hey Saba have you ever felt like you like some one but… they don’t like you back? Maro said standing up. Saba didn’t know how to respond to that. “Maro please tell me do you really love me?” Saba said with tears filling her eyes. “ Forget this discussion tomorrow may not be.” Maro thought, “Saba… listen to me laugh have fun in your life and smile because tomorrow may not be.” Maro said looking at Saba. Saba smiled she knew Maro would say something like that. “Maro, but I need to know.” Saba said……… To be continued

Balto: Heart Broken

Shadow, Timbre, Dash, Melody, Shasta, Talkeet, Sheikh, Lima, Thunder, Blaize, Likea, Sheae, Drake and Gemini are all Anthony Rotramels Characters
Band and Biety are Cyberwulfs Characters
Angel, Mamoru, Kyle, Maliki, Shani, Maro, Jade, Jane, Julie, Amaroq, Naka, Silver, Nails, Jello, Kapugen, Kapu and Miyax are all Dingowolf’s Character’s
Steele, Balto, Jenna, Aleu, Dingo, Dusty, Kodi, and Saba are all Universal and Amblin Production

Prologue
The windiest night ever in Nome Maro was walking to the woods.
He sat by a small beautiful stream where he communicated with his parents some how. “Father you have told me that every moment everything changes.” He got no reply “My time is coming soon father I’ll join you soon but please my life loves this beautiful husky she is smart kind considerate my heart won’t leave her but my life will.” Father I’m lost at this point. “In my dream I saw a black husky exactly the same one in the town his name is Maliki he is the one I’m looking for father but please tell me how much more time do I have to complete my mission my wish my dream in this world?” Maro said looking up to the sky. Still he didn’t get a reply. Maro sighed the wind blew harshly in Maro’s face. He began walking away from the stream in the town called Nome. He knew these were his last days. “What should I tell Saba?” He said to him self. While he was walking he saw Balto approaching “Hi Maro right? Balto asked Maro nodded respectfully. “Pleased to meet you.” Maro said, “We’ve met before.” Balto said, “I’ll catch you later there Maro.” Then ran off
“Good Bye.” Maro said and ran off to find Mamoru…….


Chapter1

Back in the cave Aleu was looking over a cliff the pasture was beautiful. She smiled about couple of weeks ago her father and mother met face to face with their enemy Steele it filled her with disgust but she was relived that he was dead. She was terribly worried that a war would break out between her clan and the Alva clan. They had attacked Shadow and his team during a hunt for food. Yet she had to see more. “Maybe I should send messenger and see why they attacked us.” She thought. She heard footsteps coming from her chamber they were a lot of them. She turned around to see Dash he didn’t look too happy.
“Dash what’s the matter?” Aleu asked going over to Dash. Dash pointed his head toward the chamber. Aleu gave him a strange look and walked to the cave. She saw Shadow lying there. SHADOW! She yelled. ‘What happened?” She asked turning around even though she didn’t want. Dash sighed “We were attacked and he hit a boulder.” He said “Let me guess who we were attacked by the “Alva Clan”?” She said. Her brother nodded solemnly. “Is he going to be okay?” She asked. Dash nodded solemnly again. Aleu heart was a little relived. Dash left the cave and Aleu was left with Shadow. She laid down beside him and cried softly in his shoulder……….

Back in Nome Maro was making his way to Mamoru’s. He reached there walked over to the door and scratched it. Mamoru heard a scratching noise “Jane I have to go somewhere!” He said “Alright!” She said. He walked through the doggie door to see Maro “Hey buddy shouldn’t you be sleeping at this time of your life.” Mamoru said. Maro knew that Mamoru cared about him dearly. “Yeah I know but I need to talk.” He said looking to the ground. “Oh about how your going to tell her?” Mamoru said Maro nodded. Maro sighed. “So what’s on your mind buddy?” Mamoru asked his best friend. “Mamoru…I don’t know how I’m going to tell her.” Maro said looking at the ground. “I mean I really love her but my love won’t last a lifetime with my…… he paused there to stop the tears from coming out, “my……. Heart Problem.” Maro finally finished. “Come on buddy it’s okay I’m sure you can do it again.” Mamoru said putting a paw on his friends shoulder. Maro looked up at his friend and said “What do you mean by that?” Maro said. “Remember if you can put me and Jane together then you can put Saba and Maliki too.” Mamoru said. Maro smiled at his friend. “Yeah I better talk to Maliki and then maybe to Saba.” He said getting up and ran. “I wish you luck buddy.” Mamoru said and disappeared in his home.

Maro was running as fast as his legs could carry him. He panted, he slid through the road and bumped into the stairs of Maliki’s home. Maliki was inside when he heard a thump. He went outside to check it out. He walked through the doggie door and saw Maro rubbing his paw on his head. “Oww I have to be more careful.” Maro said making his way to Maliki came down the steps. He laughed at Maro’s comment. “so what’s up?” he said. Maro looked at the ground. “What’s wrong?” Maliki asked making his paces faster to Maro. Maro sighed “Here is a question I want to ask you?” He said looking at Maliki “Uh…… Okay what is it?” Maliki asked “I’ve been noticing that you look at Saba a lot how come,”
“Do you like her?” Maro said “ I don’t like her I love her I guess you found out . Maliki said, “No tell me how you feel about her?” Maro asked. “I feel she is the most beautiful husky in the whole wide world.” Maliki said smiling, “Oh really you must really love her.” Maro said. Maliki nodded. “Yes he loves her know all I have to do is get Saba to love him.” Maro thought, “Look buddy I have to go we will talk later alright?” Maro said. Maliki nodded and left to his home. Maro dashed to find Saba “I knew it….. he loves her!” Maro said as he ran dodging everybody in his way. He stopped at a house he smiled Saba as lying on the porch sleeping. “Should I disturb her?” he said, “But I have to tell”. He thought He walked hesitantly to her. He walked to the steps. He gently nudged her awake “Saba wake up.” Maro said in soft tone. Saba opened her eyes to see Maro. “Hey…… she said yawning …….Maro.
She sat got to her feet. Why did you wake me up?” Saba asked looking at Maro. “Saba…. I need to talk to you Maro said looking to the ground then at Saba. “What is it Maro?” Saba asked him.
Maro looked at the ground “Should I tell her that Maliki loves her.” He thought, “But I have to try.” Maro swallowed hard. “Saba, I…..I think Maliki…… likes you.” Maro said, “There I said it.” Maro thought. “How do you know?” Saba asked looking at Maro. “He told me.” Maro said. “Oh really what did he say?” Saba said raising an eyebrow. “Look Saba what ever I’m going to tell you have to believe me please.” Maro said looking at Saba. “Okay just tell me what he said.” Saba said. Maro nodded and began. “Saba these are the exact words he said He said that “I love you. I love you when I die and after that. On my last wish is to love you. I love you Saba I love you I love you. Maro finished. Saba was amazed for what Maliki told Maro. “Who do I like Maro or Maliki?” She thought. “Saba are you okay?” Maro said. Saba nodded. “Okay I should be leaving now.” Maro said. Saba nodded again. Maro walked downed the steps and disappeared. “I lied to her I told her my feelings. But I hope she doesn’t find out” Maro thought.

Chapter2
Aleu was still crying Shadows shoulder. “Shadow please be okay.” Then she remembered the first time she meet with him.
She drifted back to the past………..“Are you okay Aleu?” She heard a raspy voice say.
She turned around and stood up. It was the wolf.
“Yes,” she said. “That was quite brave of you,”
“It was nothing,” he said, “just my duty to the pack.”
“You're one of the more quiet ones aren't you?” she said.
“Yes, I guess I am. I don't say much. Aleu….” he asked, “could you tell me something”
“What is it?” Aleu said.
“Could you tell me how bad it is?”
“What is?” Aleu said.
“Me,” he responded, “I'm kind of afraid to look.”
“Nava said that it didn't look really bad. He said you might have a limp but as far as death is concerned. He doesn't think you have anything to worry about,” said Aleu.
“Oh, I've never been too much afraid of death myself,” he said. “I don't really have anyone to grieve me or anything. My mother and father were both killed by hunters when it was winter. One of them I think it was my dad was part husky like you. I'm not…”
Here he stopped and winced in pain. “
I'm not sure about him but I remember my mother. She was snow white, and had this warm reassuring voice that let me know I was safe. I had two other siblings, I think. I don't know what happened to them, but I was separated from them shortly before they were killed. Nava found me about a year ago. I was almost frozen solid. He took me in and has been a kind of father to me.”
Here he paused.
“I…. .I have something to tell you. I was just scared of death for the first time in my life. I've helped lead patrols and been attacked before but I never feared death.”
“That's okay,” Aleu said. “Lot's of people are scared of death when it seems about to hit them.”
“No, you got my meaning wrong there,” he said. “I wasn't afraid of my death. I was afraid of yours. I'm not suicidal or anything. I just don't fear my death. I wouldn't have done that had it not been you that he was taking aim at.”
“I owe you my life,” Aleu said. Then she was brought back to the present. “Oh, Shadow.” Aleu said burying her face in his shoulder and crying again.

Saba was still thinking “Maro doesn’t love me dose he?” She said. Saba was trying to figure out why Maro told her. “If he loved me he wouldn’t tell me or he just wanted to let me know what is the deal here!” Saba said with frustration coming in her tone
“I need to talk to Mom she is the only person who can help me.” Saba as she headed for Jenna’s house.

Maro was lying on the sand he was staring at the pasture. “It’s so beautiful.” “Yeah I kind of think it is to.” A voice said from behind him. As he turned he saw Saba. “I was passing by I thought I should see you.” Saba said walking forward to Maro…………………
“Hey Saba have you ever felt like you like some one but… they don’t like you back? Maro said standing up. Saba didn’t know how to respond to that. “Maro please tell me do you really love me?” Saba said with tears filling her eyes. “ Forget this discussion tomorrow may not be.” Maro thought, “Saba… listen to me laugh have fun in your life and smile because tomorrow may not be.” Maro said looking at Saba. Saba smiled she knew Maro would say something like that. “Maro, but I need to…….Saba said but Maro cut her off “No Saba you already know that.” Saba kept her self quiet. “I have to go Maro.” Saba said with haste. Maro nodded. He saw Saba disappear from his sight and he trailed off to the woods.

Saba ran toward her mothers house “Why wouldn’t he tell me.” Saba thought “does he love me really with his heart?” Saba said running. Saba saw house coming to her view. She picked up her speed until she saw the house becoming bigger. She came to stop she walked to the house. There was porch with steps she climbed the steps and came to the doggie door. She scratched it. She saw Sheae’s head pop out of the door. “Sheae,” Saba said. “Hi there sis!” Sheae exclaimed but her happiness came in to sadness as she saw look on her sisters face, “What’s wrong?” She said coming out of the house to her elder sister. Saba gave a heavy sigh, “Is mom here?” Saba said sitting down on the porch, “No, Mom and Dad went for a walk in the woods.” Sheae said replying to Saba. “ Oh okay.” Saba said with a disappointed tone. “You wanna talk just you and me?” Sheae asked Saba sighed again. “Yeah sure why not.” “So anything new?” Sheae asked lying down beside her older sister. “Yeah.” Saba said quietly, “Why are you in a such a bad mood?” Sheae asked again. Saba was completely quiet should she tell her sister? Should she revile her secrets to her younger sister to feel good? Questions ran through her mind vividly. She shook her head to take out those disturbing questions. “Sheae here it goes……….”

Chapter3

Shadow felt pain arose in the back of his head. He slowly opened his eyes. To see Aleu lying beside him. Then he was actually Aleu sleeping next to him but tears were on her face. Like she had been crying. Shadow tried to get up but fell down. Aleu felt something move she opened her eyes. To see Shadow “Are you okay?” She asked getting up and yawning. Shadow nodded “Yeah just a little bump that’s all.” Shadow said. “Oh Shadow I thought…. I… lost…you.” Aleu said having tears rolling down her face again. “Hey come on this is me you’re talking about.” Shadow said getting up slowly. Aleu smiled, “Beside how many did we lose?” He asked Aleu. Aleu sighed “Well it’s not good though we don’t have an exact count somewhere between twenty.” Aleu said
“What? Shadow said shocked. Aleu nodded “Afraid so”, Aleu said

To Be Continued

(As you see I added more characters well anyway I’ll be posting the end very soon this might the shortest story I wrote I’ll try to make it long as possible but I have to end it don’t I? I’m a little tied up with school but I’ll finish the story don’t worry)

Yours Truly,
DW

Sweet! Can't wait for the rest!

One thing though....
Amoroq, Silver, Nails, Julie, Jello, Kapu...? Those are from a book duo. Julie of the Wolves and Julies Wolf Pack. I guess as long as you're only using the names it's okay, but otherwise you shouldn't be taking credit.

ya I'm just using the name not the porsnalities and ect...

Great fanfic.Umm......you think JennaWolf can be in your fanfic Dingowolf?