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Okay, i have been planning on wrtiing (well, typing...XD) Toska's story. Toska is MY character from my version of Balto and Jenna's second litter, and she is more wolf than everyone thinks...believe me, try living with her...XD

okay, i'm just going to put down a short intro to get things started, and then go on from there. This may not be as active as other fics on the forums, due to hectic days in school and tennis matches, but i'll tend to this fic as much as i can.

okay, here we go! (this is in Toska's point of view. so when it says 'I', that means that Toska is telling the story.

Prolouge:

They say the best days of your life start out when you're born into a loving family. Everyont thinks so, but it's not always true. My puphood started okay, but grew worse and grousom as the days passed. It all started when my mother gave birth...

The day was a cool seventy three degrees in the town of Nome, Alaska. The townspeople were tending to their everyday lives and jobs that kept them awake from dawn until dusk. Butone couple was calm and happy, doingnothing but nuzzling and comforting one another.

Balto, so called the town hero, sat beside his life long love, Jenna. The purebred husky layed in a basket fit for her and a new litter of pups. I was one of them, but I was different. I wasn't the one to cuddle with the bunch. No, I squiggled to my mother's hind legs by myself away from my siblings. I didn't really know why I was like that, but I was just a pup.

Ever since our eyes and ears finally gave in to open up to the new world, my siblings and I romped around and played in the sun on the beach. I, fortunately, stayed to the side as to not get picked on and used as a chew toy. I was the runt, the small fry, the shrimp of the bunch. Oh, God I hated those names. Each time my oldest sister, Kaylin sneered at me, my nech fur shot up and my puny puppy fangs bared her in the face.

She always backed down, but one day, she grew immune to the threats, and took me on. "Hey Toska, why are you all alone over here away from all the action?" Kaylin yipped sarcasticly as she circled my eight week-old body.

"Stayin' away from you. that's why." I growled back, arching my shoulders upward in response to her circling ritual.

"Aww, Toska. You always have an excuse for everything. That is why I'm going to end it all, right here, right now... Dartic, Gento, Anana, Kaya, Killex! It's time..." Kaylin barked as she stared down at me with a toothy grin. Soon the rest of my siblings came crawling behind the scrawny mutt, the so called loving sister of mine.

I ducked down and arched my back like I've seen many cats do to scare off dogs around allies and bared my fangs as I've done before. But Kaylin went right through my intimidations, and went right for me, along with my other brothers and sisters. They all circled me like ants scrambling around a defensless bug.

"Stay away from me, Kaylin or I'll bite your head off!" I snarled in her face, but she just smacked me square in the face. A cold sting tingled right above my left eye, and a wet feeling ran down my muzzle. Kaylin had struck blood, and I had this feeling that she was going to do more than just claw cuts.

I was right. Kaylin jumped at me and landed on my back, teething at my ears and scruff. Dartic, Gento, Kaya and Killex came next, each grabbing a leg to gnaw on, drawing more blood. I yelped and yowled in agony, and no response from an elder, or even my parents. That was when it happened. That was the moment I snapped.

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more to come soon, so stay tuned^^ please, tell me what you think, and what you think will happen next! ;D

yay^^ thanks! i just hope i'm not opying too much from you ._. i'm trying to be as different as i can, but they are from different litters, so that's a bit different...XD

i may type up more tomorrow, but i'm afraid not all that much...maybe...i don't know yet...XD

and now i must run. must go to bed to get up early and type more of this fic. g'night buddeh! ;D

Oh snap, another crazy

Cool! I like this! Must read more!

I don't why but I dwell in suffering stories. Let's just say I have a hard background myself. Stories such as yours empower me. In a good way obviously. Must read MORE!!!

good...phew....XD and i'm glad you like it...so far....lol alright, here's a bit more...

Prolouge continued...

That day I thought I had died. A sense of tranquility overwhelmed my body, even though my siblings were savagely bitting and clawing at me. Time seemed like it had froze forever, until I felt this new feeling...a feeling that sucked the tranquil sensation right out of me. This was the feeling that now plagues me...

My hind legs built up enough tension to lift out of my brothers' jaws and kick them across their faces. They rose into the air from impact, but only a few inches. Kaya hled ahold of my front left leg, dangerously close to my jaws. They were lucky, out of my blind fury I was after the 'leader' of the bunch...Kaylin. That little traitor was the one who always ganged up on me, picked on me, and treated me like I was her property to toy with.

Kaylin then moved down my back to my hind legs, where a few good teeth holes had been made. A good amount of blood leaked from every cut, bite, and tear on my body, and Kaylin aimed for the biggest on my hind left leg. She bit hard, sinking her tiny fangs into the same holes as Dartic had snapped onto me.

My head began throbbing and spinning, causing me to wobble side to side. The power of the rage inside me was building up, almost to the point I had the urge to rip whatever laid one paw on me. It wasn't then until Kaylin started pulling my leg back. I could feel her fange grinding against my leg bones through the tiny layer of skin and fur. I hut my eyes, trying to concentrate on how to escape from this nightmare. Nothing worked, and the raging sensation grew to the point where I turned around and snapped my jaws around Kaylin's nose.

Kaylin widened her eyes as she looked at my fangs around her muzzle, the liquid of life pushing outward to the cool air that dripped from her chin and onto the sand. A yelp screeched through my blood thumping ears, but I didn't let go. It was almost as though I was being used, controlled by someone as to not release my victim. My pupils descented adn were almost completely swallowed by aqua green irises. My paws began to tremble, claws sheathing as the bitter taste of blood tingled my tasetbuds. The crimson liquid woke a side of me and began taking effect of my feelings.

I started tugging and twisting at Kaylin's upper jaw, growling and snarling in the process. My sister yelped and squealed as I had done, and the same results have followed. No yells or barks of stopping this fight came to my ears, so I continued my attempt at revenge. My jaws adding pressure to my sister's mouth, digging in her skin. Her nose completely covered by the inside of my mouth, as though to suffocate her.

Kaylin never gave in without yowling and pawing at my scrunched up face. But I was unstable, unable to quit. Of course I couldn't break her snout, but I could crack it if I really tried...and I did. I squeezed as hard as I could, blood rushing doun my chin and neck. Some into my mouth, rising my bloodthirst to high levels. I was blinded, all I could see was the sky, nothing else. Not the ocean at my side, not even Kaylin's terrified face.

The traitorous sister of mine yelped louder, still no response from our parents or any other dogs around. Dartic, Gento, Kaya, and Killix stood at the side, along with Anana, who had been watching with wide and terrified eyes. She was the one I was closest to, my best friend, my sister. She was in shock, but I couldn't see her expression in the state I was in. Suddenly I could feel my fange rubbing against bone, grinding and scraping the surface. Kaylin began to inhail large amounts of air through her mouth, since I covered her nose with my jaws.

Kaylin started wobbling and stumbling to stay standing. I didn' care, all I thought about was to get the revenge I desserved.

"Toska, stop, STOP!" Gento barked at me, laying down on his side, remaining in the same position from which he landed after I kicked him. A small cut ran from above his right eyebrow, down the bride of his nose, and ending under his left eye. Gento was almost as close a friend as Anana, but he wasn't at all as nice.

"Yeah Toska, stop! Or I'll go get mom and dad!" Dartic yipped as he stood up with his tail held high. He was the second oldest, next to Kaylin, so he held as much responsibility as Kaylin did. But he didn't take his chances at showing anything towards mom and dad. Kaya stood beside Dartic, growling at me, but I couldn't hear anything other than Kaylin's scared screams.

I had almost forgot about my teeth around Kaylin's face that I just crunched and tugged, until I heard a sound that will be most familiar to me in the near furture, 'Snap'.

XD becuase i'm still planning this whole thing out...allthis so far is off the top of my head, and i elaborate, and then i kinda planned it out as i went alog...adn i just love leavin' you guys hangin' on...XP cuz i'm evil...muahahaha....>XD

XD we sure are...especially us Aleu haters....XP and more of this 'teaser' will be up later today, or in a few minutes...i have no clue, but i must go eat lunch...brb

All right! Go Toska! Must read more! I'm loving this!

WOOT! Toska rocks, but what about Kaya?

i was going to make Kaylin Kaya, but all of the characters are going to die, even Anana...Toska kills all of her sibling except Anana, but Anana dies off of something else....i think...that's Balto Sis's chracter, so se gets to decide if she dies of Toska by accident, or something else..XP i'll add Kaya in there if you want. but i'll have to say like, she went with Jenna somewhere with Rosie...XD

Oh, ok, well, um Toksa is gonna kill all of her siblings?

yes....but, i'll pm another thing she could do...>:D

new updated continuation is in darkblue
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They say the best days of your life start out when you're born into a loving family. Everyont thinks so, but it's not always true. My puphood started okay, but grew worse and grousom as the days passed. It all started when my mother gave birth...

The day was a cool seventy three degrees in the town of Nome, Alaska. The townspeople were tending to their everyday lives and jobs that kept them awake from dawn until dusk. Butone couple was calm and happy, doingnothing but nuzzling and comforting one another.

Balto, so called the town hero, sat beside his life long love, Jenna. The purebred husky layed in a basket fit for her and a new litter of pups. I was one of them, but I was different. I wasn't the one to cuddle with the bunch. No, I squiggled to my mother's hind legs by myself away from my siblings. I didn't really know why I was like that, but I was just a pup.

Ever since our eyes and ears finally gave in to open up to the new world, my siblings and I romped around and played in the sun on the beach. I, fortunately, stayed to the side as to not get picked on and used as a chew toy. I was the runt, the small fry, the shrimp of the bunch. Oh, God I hated those names. Each time my oldest sister, Kaylin sneered at me, my nech fur shot up and my puny puppy fangs bared her in the face.

She always backed down, but one day, she grew immune to the threats, and took me on. "Hey Toska, why are you all alone over here away from all the action?" Kaylin yipped sarcasticly as she circled my eight week-old body.

"Stayin' away from you. that's why." I growled back, arching my shoulders upward in response to her circling ritual.

"Aww, Toska. You always have an excuse for everything. That is why I'm going to end it all, right here, right now... Dartic, Gento, Anana, Kaya, Killex! It's time..." Kaylin barked as she stared down at me with a toothy grin. Soon the rest of my siblings came crawling behind the scrawny mutt, the so called loving sister of mine.

I ducked down and arched my back like I've seen many cats do to scare off dogs around allies and bared my fangs as I've done before. But Kaylin went right through my intimidations, and went right for me, along with my other brothers and sisters. They all circled me like ants scrambling around a defensless bug.

"Stay away from me, Kaylin or I'll bite your head off!" I snarled in her face, but she just smacked me square in the face. A cold sting tingled right above my left eye, and a wet feeling ran down my muzzle. Kaylin had struck blood, and I had this feeling that she was going to do more than just claw cuts.

I was right. Kaylin jumped at me and landed on my back, teething at my ears and scruff. Dartic, Gento, Kaya and Killex came next, each grabbing a leg to gnaw on, drawing more blood. I yelped and yowled in agony, and no response from an elder, or even my parents. That was when it happened. That was the moment I snapped.



That day I thought I had died. A sense of tranquility overwhelmed my body, even though my siblings were savagely bitting and clawing at me. Time seemed like it had froze forever, until I felt this new feeling...a feeling that sucked the tranquil sensation right out of me. This was the feeling that now plagues me...

My hind legs built up enough tension to lift out of my brothers' jaws and kick them across their faces. They rose into the air from impact, but only a few inches. Kaya hled ahold of my front left leg, dangerously close to my jaws. They were lucky, out of my blind fury I was after the 'leader' of the bunch...Kaylin. That little traitor was the one who always ganged up on me, picked on me, and treated me like I was her property to toy with.

Kaylin then moved down my back to my hind legs, where a few good teeth holes had been made. A good amount of blood leaked from every cut, bite, and tear on my body, and Kaylin aimed for the biggest on my hind left leg. She bit hard, sinking her tiny fangs into the same holes as Dartic had snapped onto me.

My head began throbbing and spinning, causing me to wobble side to side. The power of the rage inside me was building up, almost to the point I had the urge to rip whatever laid one paw on me. It wasn't then until Kaylin started pulling my leg back. I could feel her fange grinding against my leg bones through the tiny layer of skin and fur. I hut my eyes, trying to concentrate on how to escape from this nightmare. Nothing worked, and the raging sensation grew to the point where I turned around and snapped my jaws around Kaylin's nose.

Kaylin widened her eyes as she looked at my fangs around her muzzle, the liquid of life pushing outward to the cool air that dripped from her chin and onto the sand. A yelp screeched through my blood thumping ears, but I didn't let go. It was almost as though I was being used, controlled by someone as to not release my victim. My pupils descented adn were almost completely swallowed by aqua green irises. My paws began to tremble, claws sheathing as the bitter taste of blood tingled my tasetbuds. The crimson liquid woke a side of me and began taking effect of my feelings.

I started tugging and twisting at Kaylin's upper jaw, growling and snarling in the process. My sister yelped and squealed as I had done, and the same results have followed. No yells or barks of stopping this fight came to my ears, so I continued my attempt at revenge. My jaws adding pressure to my sister's mouth, digging in her skin. Her nose completely covered by the inside of my mouth, as though to suffocate her.

Kaylin never gave in without yowling and pawing at my scrunched up face. But I was unstable, unable to quit. Of course I couldn't break her snout, but I could crack it if I really tried...and I did. I squeezed as hard as I could, blood rushing doun my chin and neck. Some into my mouth, rising my bloodthirst to high levels. I was blinded, all I could see was the sky, nothing else. Not the ocean at my side, not even Kaylin's terrified face.

The traitorous sister of mine yelped louder, still no response from our parents or any other dogs around. Dartic, Gento, Kaya, and Killix stood at the side, along with Anana, who had been watching with wide and terrified eyes. She was the one I was closest to, my best friend, my sister. She was in shock, but I couldn't see her expression in the state I was in. Suddenly I could feel my fange rubbing against bone, grinding and scraping the surface. Kaylin began to inhail large amounts of air through her mouth, since I covered her nose with my jaws.

Kaylin started wobbling and stumbling to stay standing. I didn' care, all I thought about was to get the revenge I desserved.

"Toska, stop, STOP!" Gento barked at me, laying down on his side, remaining in the same position from which he landed after I kicked him. A small cut ran from above his right eyebrow, down the bride of his nose, and ending under his left eye. Gento was almost as close a friend as Anana, but he wasn't at all as nice.

"Yeah Toska, stop! Or I'll go get mom and dad!" Dartic yipped as he stood up with his tail held high. He was the second oldest, next to Kaylin, so he held as much responsibility as Kaylin did. But he didn't take his chances at showing anything towards mom and dad. Kaya stood beside Dartic, growling at me, but I couldn't hear anything other than Kaylin's scared screams.

I had almost forgot about my teeth around Kaylin's face that I just crunched and tugged, until I heard a sound that will be most familiar to me in the near furture, 'Snap'.

All went silent, and my brothers and sisters looked at me with horrid eyes and gaping mouths. My sight suddenly returned to me, and I could finally see what I had done. My pupils moved towards my mouth, to Kaylin's broken jaw.

That little traitor desserved every bit of my revenge, and Mother and Faher couldn't do anything to stop me. They haven't even came when Kaylin tortured me, picked on me, treated me like her very own chew toy. I had my revenge, but it wasn't over. It was far from over. Kaylin screamed, I could feel the loose part of her broken jawbone lingering from her skull.

I gave in from her screeching cry and released my grip. Fur matted with the crimson blood of life and the bitter taste in my mouth made me smirk. It controlled me, changed my ways of life. I growled at my sister and she recoiled to the rest of the group. She couldn't run, no, I wouldn't let her.

"Toska...what have you done?" Dartic growled at me, but I just snarled louder at him and bared my fangs.

"I have finally taught that ***** something...how it feels to be toyed with, to be tortured!" I snarled, lashing my small tail side to side like a metronome. But then the thought of what Mother and Father would do to me came to mind. I would've gotten in so much trouble, but I had an idea. "If you don't say a word about this that I did it to you, I won't break your other jaw off..."

Kaylin squealed and shook her head frantically, still in shock and scared to death. I smirked once more, and ran towards the water on teh shore to wash off the blood. Kaylin padded after me, taking her time coming near my body. I rolled in teh water until the crimson liquid completely washed off, now drenched with saltwater. Kaylin did the same, still a scared expression on her pitiful face.

A new ste of paws came upon the beach, larger and browner paws. It was dad, Balto. He came up to us as the blood dissapeared into the ocean. He noticed the look on Kaylin's face, and her upper jaw looking horrible.

"Kaylin, what happened?!" Balto asked, standing in front of Kaylin with a worried face. Before Kaylin opened her mouth, I steped in front of her.

"She was attacked by a...a...another dog. He came up and grabbed her by her mouth and snapped it."

"Is that so? I can't believe anyone would do that to my little angels..." He nuzzled Kaylin and I. I pinned back my ears. 'Angels'? Kaylin, and angel? I don't think so.

"Yeah, it's true! I saw the whole thing! Even the others saw it happen!" I looked back at Dartic, Gento, Kaya, Anana, and Killix with a glare, and they all nodded. Balto sighed and looked back at Kaylin and I.

"Alright, but enough of that now. Jenna and I need to get you pups ready to be adopted today. Now, off to Mother's house." Balto whispered in his old voice before he grabbed Kaylin by the scruff and started walking over to Mother's house. I smirked with my ears still remaining pinned back, and I followed behind all of my siblings and my father.

KAYA?! man you have some good ideas!