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Which Pack Do You Think Will Win In the End?
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 Post subject: Fire & Water The Epic War *FINISHED*
PostPosted: Sat Feb 17, 2007 11:59 pm 
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Name: Fire & Water The Epic War
Rating: PG-13
Characters So Far ( © Me ): Aedan, Kato, Nia, Neo, Aron, Aithne
Summary: The Fire Pack and the Water Pack have been at each others throats since time began and now it's time for them to meet in battle.
Link On Balto Source: http://baltosource.timduru.org/fanfic.php?ici=1&num=2337&lang=2&nsite=1

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Click links below to read the different parts,
http://baltosource.timduru.org/fanfic.php?ici=1&num=2337&lang=2&nsite=1 - Part 1
http://baltosource.timduru.org/fanfic.php?ici=1&num=2354&lang=2&nsite=1 - Part 2 & 3
http://baltosource.timduru.org/fanfic.php?ici=1&num=2384&lang=2&nsite=1 - Part 4 & 5
http://baltosource.timduru.org/fanfic.php?ici=1&num=2401&lang=2&nsite=1 - Part 6 & 7
http://baltosource.timduru.org/fanfic.php?ici=1&num=2433&lang=2&nsite=1 - Part 8 & 9
http://baltosource.timduru.org/fanfic.php?ici=1&num=2489&lang=2&nsite=1 - Part 10 & 11 & 12
http://baltosource.timduru.org/fanfic.php?ici=1&num=2555&lang=2&nsite=1 - Part 13 & 14
http://baltosource.timduru.org/fanfic.php?ici=1&num=2628&lang=2&nsite=1 - Final Parts!


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Aedan Of The Fire Pack
Fire erupted in the forest lighting up the tall dark trees in the moonlight sky. It crackled menacingly burning all the leaves until they fell to the floor as nothing but black ashes.
Below the burning tree tops stood a wolf looking up at the flames not at all worried about them. When animals would flee from fire for the fear of death he would stay and watch them because it was mostly he who caused them and that’s the way he liked it.
He was Aedan son of Aron and Aithne and lived in a huge land that was dominated by his pack or rather his pack to be. His fur was black and a dark shade of red. He bore the fire symbol above his eyes which clearly stated him as a wolf of fire. Fiery orange eyes reflected the flames in the sky as hot ambers fell all around his large black paws not affecting him at the slightest.
On one side of his face he bore a scar where someone had dug their claws deep into him scaring him for life but that was another story.
His land was the land of the Fire wolves an elite group of wolves who in this new world had mastered the strongest element so they could control it at their own biding.
Slowly but steady Aedan walked away from the burning tree tops back towards the den area where he knew his pack was waiting for him, they had a meeting that night and he already knew he was late but they could hold it for him he thought smirking as he walked leaving behind the disaster he had caused.

Aedan of course had brothers and sisters whom he cared for but never showed much emotion towards them. His single sister Nia was the closet to him and when they were pups he enjoyed her company much more then with his others brothers.
Nia was his faithful sister and she to had the flame symbol on her forehead (all siblings of the Fire Alpha’s had them), but was much smaller then her brothers. She was more delicate and smaller then her brothers and they all felt strongly for her and would all protect her with their lives. Her coat is more red then black her eyes are orange like Aedans.
Growling to himself at the thought of his two younger brothers made him sick, they had always been jealous of him and his right for power. Their names were Kato and Neo and they were much different then he was.
Kato was the fiercest one of the siblings, his size dwarfed Aedan and even his father wasn’t as big at Kato. With powerful jaws and legs he was a born fighter and knew it and used this to his advantage. Unlike himself Kato was completely black except for the symbol of the fire pack also marked on his forehead in a deadly red color. Kato’s eyes were red like the lust for Aedans blood.
His other brother Neo wasn’t as big as Kato but had something that made him unique from everyone else. He also had the symbol of the flame on his forehead but his was the color a dark blue that was barely visible in his smokey grey colored coat. It has long been known that blue part of a flame is the hottest and that’s what the elders believe had been symbolized on Neo’s forehead. Out of all his siblings Neo was the most skilled with flames and Aedan believed this was because of the blue mark.
That was his family, and although they all seemed very different they had one thing in common and that was the fact that they were all siblings of the Fire leaders of their pack.

Breaking through some undergrowth Aedan looked at all the wolves who had gathered at a large clearing, none turned towards him as he walked forward his head held high as he walked towards the front to sit beside his siblings and parents.
There were at least fifty other wolves all gathered their watching them. The fire wolves all had dark coat colors, you never saw any of them sporting many different colors. The colors ranged from black, grays, reds, oranges and the occasional dark blue like that was on Neo.
His mother and father stood tall as they watched their son walk up and sit down beside his father, they were in order of the oldest sibling to the youngest. Adean was the oldest followed by Kato, then Nia and Neo being the youngest.
Kato looked coldly at his brother with his blood red eyes before turning back around to look at all the wolves gathered.
‘My brothers and sisters we are glad to see you have made it today and what a glorious day it is’
Aron boomed at all the wolves who looked up at him, none of them saying a word.
‘Our sister pack the Water Pack’s Alpha has died and now it’s the time to attack when they are at its weakest!’
All the wolves cheered including Aedan who smiled to himself, he was dying to get in to battle. The Water and Fire pack had always had an unsteady truce between them, and war had not be broken out for centuries but the fire wolves always believed they were stronger but weaker Fire Alphas were to weak minded to attack and destroy them, but not Aron.
Aron was a powerful Fire Alpha and was going to destroy the water pack once and for all and standing beside him would be his eldest son Aedan.
Another cheer broke out as Aedan looked down to his siblings who all looked pleased except for Nia who seemed to look a little angry but didn’t say anything. Ignoring her Aedan joined in a howl as everyone howled a cry of battle.

Afterwards when everyone had left except for Aedan and his siblings Aedan slowly walked up to Nia and stood beside her looking down at her.
‘Why didn’t you join in our battle cry?’
Aedan said looking down at her as she looked up at him.
‘I don’t feel right with the destruction of the water pack and I’m not going to kill them’
She said honestly looking up at him.
‘Don’t ever speak like that again Nia, we have a right to serve our father and our pack and I don’t think you understand that’
‘I am loyal to him it’s just that…’
‘Not another word’
Aedan said in a low voice as he turned away from his sister and disappeared in to the trees holding all his anger inside. Finally once he was well clear of the clearing he let out a yell of angry and a fireball erupted and slammed in to a nearby tree almost snapping it in half. Aedan knew that if his father ever found out about treachery from his only daughter he’d kill her, but he didn’t understand was why she felt sorry for the Water Pack they were weak compared to the Fire Pack.

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Next Chapter: Kyndra Of The Water Pack

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So what does everyone think so far :?: Please post your thoughts they are much appreciated. This is going to be quite a long Fan-Fic But i hope to make it exciting, thrilling and suspenseful with twists and turns no one will expect :D

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This sounds very interesting. ^^ This fic will definalty be one that I'll have to read when you have it finished. ;)

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Sounds very interesting. I want to read more.

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:shock: Wow! That was really good! I look forward to the Water pack's side and the rest. Keep up the good work! howl.gif


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Thank you very much for all the comments they are really appreciated :D

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Kyndra Of the Water Pack
A lush land that was soaked with morning due shone brightly in the sun as a single wolf sat alone beside a huge river. Her name was Kyndra and her coat glistened in the sunlight as she looked down in to the river watching the water slowly flow past.
Her coat was a mix between silver / white and blue and her eyes were as blue as the crystal clear water she was looking in to. She was part of the Water Pack who’s pack land was beside the Fire Pack who she knew were dangerous and would most likely attack them soon. Everyone heard the howls of the Fire Pack the night before but everyone was in too much disappear to do anything about it, because the Water Alpha had died.
Kynrda was not the Water’s Alpha daughter but that didn’t mean that they weren’t close, the entire Water Pack were all close, they looked out for each other and made sure each other were safe. They shared what they managed to find as food and took turns babysitting the young, it was a peaceful time of bliss.
The Alpha Male Sagar had died of old age and thankfully he died in a time of peace because at a time like this when war loomed so close he would not have liked to see a war break out between his beloved pack and the enemy.
Sagar and his mate had, had three sons and one of them was her father Koren who was second eldest of the three sons. Tahoe who was the eldest son was now going to take over the pack lands and be the new Water Alpha of the pack in a time which made the future for everyone look unclear.
A small tear slipped down her face and as it fell in to the water the water seemed to turn dark blue for a moment before returning to normal as she stood up and turned around towards the forest.
Her land was covered in beautiful lakes and the mountains in her land were capped with snow that melted in the summer and filled the valley below creating a lake which lasted nearly until winter before completely disappearing.
Slowly she walked down a small path that many had followed towards a small clearing where she knew most of the wolves were going to meet. Her blue eyes held back any emotion not wanting to be upset for the sake of the pups who seemed devastated that their leader they had come to know and respect had died.
When Kyndra walked in to the clearing she instantly saw her father who quickly walked over to her and nuzzled her affectionly before sighing.
‘Are you alright Kyndra?’
He asked looking down at her with his own blue eyes that matched her.
‘I’m alright…’
She said smiling a little looking up at him.
‘Thats my girl always being strong for the sake of others’
Koren looked down at the ground and Kyndra watched him for a moment before asking.
‘What about you dad? Are you alright?’
‘I’m fine but I think Tahoe is feeling the worst because he is now going to be the new leader in a time where the future looks so unclear. He is scared he won’t live up to his father’s name’
Kyndra turned to look at Tahoe who was standing solemnly in front of a crowd of about fifty wolves who all looked said as they looked up at him, none of them saying a word. Her heart sank at how sad he looked. She hated to see her family’s members in pain especially her uncle who she’d grown quite close to.
‘You’ll always be there to help him dad’
She smiled as he smiled a little back before quickly looking at Tahoe and saying.
‘I better go will you be alright?’
Kyndra quickly nodded understanding that the brothers needed to be strong together at a time like this.
She watched as her father walked up and sat down beside Tohoe. They were almost identical to each other, the only difference was that Koren was a darker silver then Tohoe who looked more white then anything else. Another thing that they had in common was the symbol of the water Pack on their foreheads. Both had it and the third brother did also, it meant that they were Alpha’s children and rightful rulers of the water pack.
Kyndra didn’t have one on her forehead because her father was only the second sibling which meant the line of Alpha’s followed Tohoe’s family line, so any pups he would have would have the sign on their forehead.
‘Hi Kyndra…’
Someone said as she turned around to see a wolf who was a little bigger then her and sported a light grey with blue streaked coast walk up to her.
‘Hello River’
Kyndra sighed as she looked back up at him. They were good friends and had always been since they were pups.
‘I’ve never seen everyone look so sad’
River admitted as he looked at the group of wolves where the pups huddled near their mothers who were comforting them.
‘Times are hard, but we’ll make it’
Kyndra admitted looking at him, his green eyes looking back.
‘I love how you always think so positive Kyndra, not like me…’
He laughed but quickly stopped when he realized that Kyndra didn’t find it funny at all. Hearing a voice they turned to see an elder wolf walk up to Tohoe.
‘With the death of our beloved leader Alpha Sagar we now entrust the safety and protection of our pack to his eldest son, Tohoe’
Everyone bowed slightly as Kyndra looked up at her uncle the new Water Alpha who was about to take command of a pack that faced certain destruction.

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Next Chapter The Plan

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Both packs have now been introduced so let the story begin

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Chapters Now Up On The Site!

Part 2 Kyndra Of the Water Pack & Part 3 The Plan ---> http://baltosource.timduru.org/fanfic.php?ici=1&num=2354&lang=2&nsite=1More

Part 4 - Water Training & Part 5 - First Contact ---> http://baltosource.timduru.org/fanfic.php?ici=1&num=2384&lang=2&nsite=1

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FINISHED
Click links below to read the different parts,
http://baltosource.timduru.org/fanfic.php?ici=1&num=2337&lang=2&nsite=1 - Part 1
http://baltosource.timduru.org/fanfic.php?ici=1&num=2354&lang=2&nsite=1 - Part 2 & 3
http://baltosource.timduru.org/fanfic.php?ici=1&num=2384&lang=2&nsite=1 - Part 4 & 5
http://baltosource.timduru.org/fanfic.php?ici=1&num=2401&lang=2&nsite=1 - Part 6 & 7
http://baltosource.timduru.org/fanfic.php?ici=1&num=2433&lang=2&nsite=1 - Part 8 & 9
http://baltosource.timduru.org/fanfic.php?ici=1&num=2489&lang=2&nsite=1 - Part 10 & 11 & 12
http://baltosource.timduru.org/fanfic.php?ici=1&num=2555&lang=2&nsite=1 - Part 13 & 14
http://baltosource.timduru.org/fanfic.php?ici=1&num=2628&lang=2&nsite=1 - Final Parts!

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