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ok i didn't think this would fit in the fan fic section because it isn't wolf related in anyway at all so i thought it wolud fit here.So far i've got 4 chapters done so i'll post them tell me what ya think.Oh and the story was based on Black Beauty.

Chapter 1
My first home.

When I was a filly I would roam around the grasslands with my sister and my friend,Blondie.Us fillies had much fun in those days.I, a small black filly with a star on my forehead, was named Lost Legacy.Blondie was a medium sized american walker.She was a beatiful gold and had a white muzzle.My sister, who looked just like me, was named Star eyes.Our mother was a white arabian with a black mane and tail.Our father,a black mustang with a star on his forehead.Our parents say we got our body shapes from our mother and personalty and that we got our looks from our father.Blondie's mother, a tall white american walked with a black muzzle,was a good friend of our mother.They had known eachother for a long time.

Blondie looked at Star eye and smiled lightly.She got up and walked to her.
"Did you hear?"Asked the golden filly.
"About what?"
"The new colt"
"What about him?"
"They say when his father is gone he will be lead male"

Star eye's eyes widened.She couldn't believe that the little immature colt could ever be leader.He would probaly lead the herd right into a cougar attack or maybe a coyote attack!Blondie trotted off to catch up with her mother.Star eye watched her leave then turned to me."Woah,How could he out of all horses be leader?"I asked in a light voice like my sister's."I don't know"replyed my sister.We both sighed and galloped off to find our mother and father.

We finally found them at dawn.They put us to bed.My sister fell asleep shortly after all the others did,but I did not.I couldn't go to sleep with what I had over heard.I tryed to get my mind off of it by thinking i'm sweet grass but that just made me hungry and more awake.I looked around scanning the area for anyone watching.After decided nobdy was,I got up and started to graze on some sweet grass.I soon found the area bare.Still full of hunger like a bear who hadn't ate in 7 days,I ventured off eating patch after patch of sweet grass.I fell over as I found something on my neck.I looked up to see a man with a odd look on his face.He had brown hair and blue eyes.He picked me up I was surprised by how strong he was.He set me down in some type of stall.I turned around and saw him shut the gate.I looked to my right to see a Black arabian with a white stripe running down her face,the end of her muzzle was golden and her hooves were the same color.She looked at me confused."What never been in a trailor?"she asked."A trailor?"I asked.She didn't reply for a while."Oh and by the way i'm Golden Flower"She said smiling."i'm Lost Legacy"I said.

Chapter 2
My new home

I woke up to find myself still in the trailor.The door started to open and I got up and walked out into a holding pen.I saw Golden Flower and four other horses infront of me.I man was following us all pushing us foward herding us into different pens.After getting into the pens he put us all in stalls.There was 6 stalls in all 8 stables.I wondered what they wanted with a colt like me.I sighed as my stall door started to open.I looked up to see a little girl holding a carrot."Hi there"she whispered.She held out the carrot.I slowly ate it has she stroked me.I was about the size of this girl but not as tall."Melissa time for dinner"A man yelled.The girl named Melissa walked out of the stall locking it as she stepped out.I put my front hooves agaist the wall and peered over it.I saw a black stallion and a white mare.The mare slowly turned her head and looked at me then back at her food.The stallion igored me completly and kept staring across at the gelding in the other stall.

It started to become night.The day has been boring.They didn't put us out to pasture or have us do any work.I didn't like this.For pity sake i'm a colt I need to spend my energy doing something!I hated this place just after one day.Putting my front legs up on the stall door I pushed agaist it trying to knock the latch open.I woke the old chestnut mare in the stall across from me.She looked wise."That will not work.If it does they will find you and sell you to better or worse home"she spoke in a odd tone.I looked at her with a confused look.She slowly drifted back into slumber.I started to push again but I tryed to be silenter.The latch soon came un-done and I ran out.I pushed the stable door open and ran out into the cold night.I heard a loud barking sound and looked to see a large hound tied up near the house.The man who owned the stables ran out of the door and looked at me with a cold glare.He hushed the hound and went back inside and walked out with a whip.I glared at him but he could not tell I was glaring.He smacked me across the back with it and dragged me back inside.

Chapter 3
Off Again

I woke up and heard foot steps.The man who had whipped me opened my stall quickly and dragged me out.After leaving the stables he pushed me into a trailor.I felt the trailor start to move and I sat down on the cold floor on it.I sighed wondering what the next place would be like.I heard the knicker of another horse.It sounded young like mine but it was also weak.I didn't bother replying to it.I didn't really acre that moment about any horse or anything else except this new place I was going to.It was night time I could tell because there was a window in the side of the trailor and it showed the moonlight shining into the cold scary place.I fell asleep knowing that where ever I was going I had to survive it.

I got up my legs sore from sleeping on the cold metal floor.I turned as the trailor door opened.I saw a girl with a kind face open it.She led me out and into a large pasture.I looked around and saw some other colts about my age,some older.I jumped around wildly and freely.It had been a while sence I had done that.I soon was tired and it was almost dawn.The girl who I discovered was named Christine led us all out of the pasture and into the stable.She gently put us in stalls.She then put food in each stall and walked out of the stable.I looked around.I liked this place way better than the first one.I ate some hay.I could hear other horses around me but I was too tired to peer over ot stall and see them.I slowly drifted off into slumber.

I woke up.Christine was putting us into pasture again.She then looked at me and smiled.She grabbed a lead rope and tied it to my halter.She led me into a small area and led me running around.I soon stopped to catch my breath.I enjoyed this home so much just after two days!I was put out to pasture and for several months we continued this patern of me traning going out to pasture,then going to the stable at night.

Chapter 4
Different Training

I had grown into a fine mare as my owner would say often to her friends and family.I was the perfect horse for riding and showing plus I had a kind heart.One day Christine put a new kind of thing on me.It was called a bridle.She slipped it other my head and then put a metal thing in my mouth called a bit.Oh how much I hated the bit sliding in-between my tounge and bottom of my mouth.She then put a saddle on my back.It was heavy.The worst part of it was the strapes running under your stomach holding the saddle on.