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This story is about water and oil once they are mixed we know many animals die so...dedicated to stopping the threat..here is a story. If you like it I'll post chapters daily.

Prolouge:
The seagulls swooped into the water. It wasn't blackened. As the gulls went into the water. a ship had been ripped in the side. The water had turned black at this point. The gulls didn't even notice. One came up to the shore his once white fur was a now dirty black color. He was having trouble and he was dying slowly. He collapsed down. The gull was dead a few minutes later.

is this a fan-fic? Will this have Balto in it? If it doesn't have wolves, Dogs, or balto and company in it, you won't be able to bost it on Balto Source, I think... Bu anyway, I'd like to hear more on this story.

It won't have Balto in it...anyway I am going to post the chapters in each post. I am stealing a name from a book I read XD.
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Chapter 1:
The seagulls looked at the water which was now "pelted" in black as they called it. One seagull a young one named Kiya was awaiting her father's return her father was dead now. "Mama will daddy ever come back?" she asked. Kiya's mother looked down. "Someday." she lyed. Her mother's name was Chanhassen (Tree Sweet Juice or Maple sugar). Chanhassen was smart to keep her baby from the sea at blackpelt (yeah this is what they really called it.).

Um, I hate to be a pain in the butt, but this really doesn't have anything to do with Balto, so I'm not too terribly sure that it belongs here. Maybe if you could insert some Balto chars into it, but other than that, I think you might have the wrong forum.

That notwithstanding, the plot is kinda interesting, albeit a bit abrupt. Things feel rather clipped, but I guess I just prefer stories where stuff unfolds slowly and lets me get to know the characters. That way, I care when one of them dies. I dunno, continue the story if you like to, but don't be shocked if a mod comes and shuts it down for you.