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Wow! Your good at useing photoshop brushes. hmm, I'm worken on a pic in ps. I'm going to try the brushes.

oh okies =P

* The pic is huge XD, you should resize it

* Might want to work on the nose proportions if you want a realistic style, (nose is too big)

* And the shape of the nose, the nose is more cone like.

*Easy on the photoshop filters, they can make a picture look very messy if used too much.

* mmm, perspective on the eyes is a little wonky, they are kind of close too, and pinch the forehead inward.

* ears also pinch in too quickly

*line art is kind of XP, messy, or too chunky.

Don't be discouraged by all my critique! You are making good progress. =P

I agree with everything Smokey's pointed out and I'd also like to add try to lighten up on using the dodge and burn tools. (I'm assuming that's what you used.) As it is, you've used the burn tool so much it's difficult to see the line art in some places. I'd also avoid using the smudge tool so much. Maybe try a softer brush or try out a cell type shading.

Sketch likely the muzzle is largly out of preportion w ith the face, the perspective is also off, the eyes are extreamly cartoony as Smokey said the ears pinch in to much. Study dog anatomy, thats what I highly advise.

At the top how the pinch tonit a severe triangle.

Note the rounded ears:
http://www.deviantart.com/deviation/41430947/ In Russian sorry but the drawings are good reference.
Here's another of a side view:
http://www.deviantart.com/deviation/36214634/