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WhiteWolf--(WSP) · **Posted:** Mon Jan 01, 2007 3:26 pm

Mkay this is Avalanch.He is for my story I am writing. So please tell me if what u think on Character,lineart,colors all that stuff XD. Yesh I tryed shading but i am horable at it lol. I am still practicing^^ Tell me what u think^^*Just if you think its horrible please don't be offensive^^* Thank You!^^

http://img329.imageshack.us/img329/1622/avalanchzv7.jpg

devils-angel · **Posted:** Mon Jan 01, 2007 3:33 pm

i was first post

very nice

WhiteWolf--(WSP) · **Posted:** Mon Jan 01, 2007 3:46 pm

Thank you Jodi^^ :wink:

Kaynight · **Posted:** Tue Jan 02, 2007 12:27 am

Very nice I love the green eyes

Silver Snow · **Posted:** Tue Jan 02, 2007 1:06 am

Ill be honest it all needs improving, no offence I think your doing very well and I'm glad you acctually take the time to improve your art but the line art seems somewhat unproportioned the color is very nice I like the graduations in it but I think that you first need to learn how to make colors using simple programs like paint so then you can make kick butt art (with all this effort you'll get there) :wink:

WhiteWolf--(WSP) · **Posted:** Tue Jan 02, 2007 4:02 pm

Silver Snow wrote:

Ill be honest it all needs improving, no offence I think your doing very well and I'm glad you acctually take the time to improve your art but the line art seems somewhat unproportioned the color is very nice I like the graduations in it but I think that you first need to learn how to make colors using simple programs like paint so then you can make kick butt art (with all this effort you'll get there) :wink:

*Sigh* Okay, alright, well thanks for being honost, I apriciate that. And thanks for the other comments on the coloring^^ So, Ill try to improve, thanks for being honost.

And thank you also Kaynight. Im glad u like him^^

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