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 Post subject: One Litter Too Much FanFic Teaser
PostPosted: Fri Dec 29, 2006 10:49 am 
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As some people probably saw, in my fan art gallery there is a lot of teaser pictures for one fan fiction. I finished part of it and so I decided to put it here.

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Diane: Jenna and Steele's pup
http://baltosource.timduru.org/affArt-l ... ong-1.html
Balto
Jenna
Steele
Anna (c)DrewTheWolf
Sitka: Diane's mate
(picture coming up)

Short Summary:
Spring time starts and Balto can't wait to see Jenna. He comes back from Aleu and meets Jenna. But this time Jenna's behavior is different. Jenna tells him her secret which she couldn't hide from him. She's expecting Steele's puppies. What will Balto do? What future will these puppies have?

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That story shows what dogs would feel if they would think like humans. An important detail is that in this story Steele is the same breed as Jenna.

Finally Spring time came. Balto couldn't wait to see Jenna. He was very happy with Aleu but then when the spring time came he wanted his visiting Aleu bring to the end. He said good bye to her and quickly ran home.
While Balto was running home, Jenna's behavior was different. When Balto came to Jenna's home, she wasn't there. Balto was worried about her. He went into his boat to ask Boris if he knows where his mate is. He didn't have to ask him because Jenna was already there, sitting and waiting for him. Balto hugged and kissed her and said how much he missed her. Boris went out. Balto looked at Jenna and saw sadness on her face. "What's wrong?" he wondered. He asked her that question but she said:
"No, nothing...just little bit....tired."
But Balto knew that something is wrong. Jenna was with him long time so he knew when she's alright and when something worries her. He said:
"Are you sure Jenna? You know that you can tell me everything...I can see that something is wrong..."
"Yes.....you're right....and I came here to talk to you about it..." Jenna replied.
"Well...what is it?" Balto asked.
" I....uhm...I'm.......I'm pregnant Balto..." Jenna said and BAlto did allow her to finish and said:
"That's great news Jenna! I'm so happy that we will have puppies..."
"But these are not your puppies Balto....." Jenna interfered. Balto stopped his smile and looked surprised at Jenna. Jenna said:
" I know it is a shock for you and I understand if you will not want me anymore but I have to tell you the whole truth Balto...and it is hard for me as well, so please listen to me until I finish....."
Balto sighed and said:
"....ok....go on...."
"Well....it happen when you were with Aleu. Rosie's mum got very serious sickness. She had to go to hospital, but they didn't have any spare money for the operation. Someone told them that they could sell my pups because I am a pedigree dog, and that they just have to find a good male for me. I got really scared when I heard it. I couldn't imagine any other dog near me but only you. They had a problem with finding cheap price for dog for me. They called Steele's man and made an agreement. Then Steele told me how the agreement works: his man allow Steele to get near me, and that man takes one pup for free......" Jenna stopped there and started crying. Balto was groggy. He was trying to make decision. Jenna, his only love, was unfaithful to him, but he still loved her. She said:
"I allowed that to happen only because of Rosie, I hate Steele, I love YOU Balto!" Jenna cried. Balto finally said:
"Jenna, honey, don't cry, everything will be alright....I love you too"
"Oh Balto, thank you!!" Jenna said.
"As you are part of me, and I am part of you, the puppies are part of me as well, so I will adopt them, Jenna"
" Oh Balto...." Jenna replied and hugged Balto.

After some time Jenna looked like a balloon, and was hardly moving. Balto was looking after her very well, she even sometimes thought that he's exaggerating a little bit, but Balto didn't really care what she thinks about it, because he wanted her and the pups to be safe. When the moment of birth came, Jenna and Balto were sleeping. Balto was right next to her being aware that the moment can come any time. Jenna started feeling that they want to come out. She said to Balto:
" Balto!!! Auch....they're coming!!"
"Who? Puppies?.....ugh, tell them to wait until my dream is finished...." Balto barked sleeping.
" Oh!" Jenna groaned and Balto recognized what she said to him and said:
" Jenna! Don't worry! I'm calling people!! Stay here, don't move!!" Balto started panic.
"Don't worry Balto...ugh...I'm gonna stay right where I am...even if I would like, I can't move...." Jenna replied.
After short time five little heads were stick to Jenna's belly making little noises. Balto and Jenna were glad and proud parents. As each time when they had pups, they were happy, until...The door opened, Balto and Jenna heard some voices laughing and talking. Then steps were heard louder and louder....Suddenly the door opened. They saw a man and a black and white husky, Steele. Balto and Jenna's faces were changed instant. Steele made stupid smirk and came closer to Jenna. He sat behind her and looked through her back to see the pups.
"My little puppies...Jenna, I'm so proud that we have them...You made right decision....They're beautiful" he said. Jenna didn't answer. She looked at Balto who was getting angry at Steele. She finally said:
"Well Steele, you can go now, you saw the pups, you happy, so go."
" No Jenna, not yet. They need to get to know me better, I'm their father, you can't tell me to go, I need to be near them and their mother, we are family now" Steele replied. Balto couldn't stand that anymore. He said:
" Jenna asked you to leave so don't make her upset in any way. She doesn't want you here anymore."
" You better remain silence, Balto! These are MY pups, not yours! Jenna, I have to stay anyway because my man wants to see our pups, and choose the one which gonna go with us later" Steele said. Jenna was also getting angry because she hated that he always remind her that these pups are his, not Balto's. Steele put his head on Jenna's back, pretending that is looking at pups, but in the same time he snuggle up to her. Jenna got angry and said hardly:
" Can you get away from me?! You can watch the pups from a distance!"
One pup which was eating, was stooped from doing that by Steele's face moved closer to him. Steele licked him. Jenna wanted humans to come quicker to get rid of him. She said to Steele:
" Would you stop it?! Leave the pups alone, and don't touch them! They need to get some energy, and you are stopping them!!"
"Ok, ok, don't be so excited! I agree, they need to get energy, my sons need to be as strong as me" Steele replied.
" These are only girls, Steele, there is no boy" Jenna said.
"What?! Oh, sorry I didn't know" Steele said.
Finally the man came. He couldn't decide yet what pup does he want so he decided to wait until they will be older to see how do they look. Jenna and Balto at least could have some rest from disturbing Steele.

Two months went so quickly that Balto and Jenna didn't notice that the pups will soon get new homes. Flora and Jenna were sold to a lady who lived in Mexico. Sara was sent to London. The 4th pup, Samantha, was bought by a French couple. The 5th pup, Diane, she was the chosen pup by Steele's man. Diane was a beautiful husky, she remind Steele Jenna. That's why Anna was jealous. When Diane came to Steele's home, each Anna's visit was disrupted by her. Everything went wrong because of her. Susie also got jealous because she, as a pup, never got as much attention from her dad as she does. However, Balto couldn't stop thinking about her. He treated her as his daughter, he missed her. Meeting herwas impossible because of Steele who kept her away from him. What he couldn't stand was that Steele was using Diane as a reason to meet Jenna. Balto never left Jenna alone with them. He knew that when he would be gone, Steele wouldn't take care of his daughter but take a chance to get closer to Jenna. Jenna however, she couldn't stand Steele's presence while the time of Diane's visit.

The next spring time came. This time Balto was right next to Jenna, he didn't left her even for a second. Though he knew that last unfaithfulness of Jenna was because of Rosie's mum's operation, he didn't want cause another similar situation. That made Steele mad, because that took from him occasion to get closer to Jenna again. He thought that if Jenna agreed last time, there would be no problem this time as well, but...now his another problem again was Balto. Because of that Steele wanted Jenna, Anna was also getting mad. She noticed that Jenna is becoming her enemy. She was glad that Balto was 'stuck' to Jenna, because that gave her a chance to get close to Steele. Steele had also problem with his young daughter, Diane who also felt in love. He had to keep an eye on her because her beloved one was not a dog, but a wolf. That made Steele even more mad. That spring time was very stressful to everyone.
One day Steele met Jenna walking on the beach alone. He thought 'yes, she's finally alone, that's my chance'. He went in her direction to talk to her.
" Jenna!" He called. Jenna turned around.
" Hi, how are you? What are you doing here alone?" Steele asked.
"What? Me? I'm walking" Jenna replied shortly giggling.
"Alone? Are you looking for someone? May be...me?" He said and started nuzzling.
" Stop it!" Jenna shouted at him. Steele was surprised and quickly took his head off her. " I'm having a walk, so please excuse me, I need loneliness for that moment, and then I'm gonna go to someone else who can accompany me."
"I can accompany you all the time...." Steele replied.
"No, thank you, I need someone calm to accompany me because while I'm expecting puppies I can't be stressed" Jenna said and went away.
Steele was surprised, and then realized why she was walking alone. He reminded himself that he has a meeting with Anna. He ran quickly to her. She was waiting for him quite a while so she was angry at him. When he arrived she said to him:
"Where have you been?! I was waiting here so long, sitting here alone! Even some dog were wiggling around me, and that's not nice! I don't want to stay here any longer!!!"
Anna went away, then Steele ran behind her. He stood opposite her to stop her and said:
"Anna! I'm sorry, I didn't want to hurt you...I love you"
Anna couldn't go away because she loved him so much. She hugged him. They spend whole evening together.
Steele came back home very early morning, leaving Anna at her home. He didn't think about anything else but sleep. His thoughts were telling him: 'sleep...sleep...sleep' STOP! Suddenly his thoughts about sleeping went away when he saw empty bed of Diane. 'Where is she?!Where is she?!' his thoughts were telling him.
"Oh NO!!!Not the wolf!!!" Steele called out. He ran outside to check if she's somewhere there. No track of her! He ran to the forest to look for her, no track! He came home exhausted in the evening. He went to bed and sack out.

"d.......d........"
Steele heard some voice calling him. He opened his eyes, and there Diane was standing before him.
"Dad, I brought you some water...here....are you ok?" Diane said.
"D...Diane....baby...where have you been....I was worrying about you..." Steele barked.
" I was with my mum and uncle Balto. Why?" Diane replied.
"..oh...good....good daughter.......thank you for water..." Steele said.
" Right, I'm gonna leave you now, you need some rest...bye dad"
Diane said.
"b..." Steele didn't finish and fall asleep again.
Diane went away chuckling. She knew why her dad was worried about her. He didn't allow her to go to the wolf which she loved, but he didn't know her secret.....
" Sitka! Sitka! Where are you?" Diane called her mate.
" Diane..." Sitka said while he saw her.
"Oh Sitka, how good to see you again" Diane said nuzzling him.
The couple went together for a dinner which was prepared by Sitka. They sat opposite each other and started eating. Sitka also took care about the background. He took some most beautiful flowers, and put around the meal. The atmosphere was stunning. Sitka took some flowers and put around Diane's neck.
"You look so beautiful" Sitka added. Diane left the food and went around 'the table' and sat next to Sitka. They spend a wonderful time together.


Update:

Here is another part of the teaser. The picture of Sitka is still coming up. Enjoy!

After some time Jenna gave birth to four little puppies. Balto and Jenna were very happy again. They had one girl which they called Anyu because her outlook had a lot in common with Balto's mother, Aniu. The other 3 were boys: Boston was the one who looked like Balto with yellow belly, Barrow was red one and Denver was another one who inherited Balto's outlook.
While Balto and Jenna's pups were growing day by day, little bit later, Anna also gave birth to four puppies. They had 2 girls. One of them looked more like Steele and she was called Misha, and another one, with beautiful shiny tan colored fur was called Alice. Rex was a black and white boy with creamy patches on his eyes. Their last son was called Roy, who inherited Anna's outlook and Steele's character.
Both couples supposedly were very happy. However, Steele still was thinking about Jenna. He loved Anna very much but Jenna couldn't get of his mind. He loved both of them. He still hated Balto, and he didn't want him to be Jenna's mate. That's why Diane was his beloved daughter, who was part of him and Jenna.


That day, Steele spend whole day with Anna and a week old pups. He went home. He saw his daughter Diane laying down in her bed. He didn't bother to say hello to her, because the tiredness was coming out of him.
"Hi dad..I want to show you something" Diane started.
"Diane, please, not now, I'm tired...." Steele replied and sack out. He tried to get some sleep but he heard squeaky voices coming from Diane. He asked:
"What's that noise, Diane?"
"That's what I wanted to show you. Come here..." Diane said quietly.
Steele got up and came to Diane's bed. There, next to Diane's belly, were laying down seven little globules pushing each other to get to their mommy's belly. Steele couldn't believe his own eyes. He was stuck and couldn't say a word. He was shocked. He was getting mad and angry inside but outside he couldn't say even a word. He turned away and looked at the door, he looked again on the pups, he looked again on the door, and bad thoughts came to his mind. He wanted to through outside little puppies and lock Diane inside. 'No it wouldn't work' he thought. He was very angry.
"Dad, what's wrong?" Diane asked. She saw his strange behavior and for the first time, she was afraid of him. She put her head on the pups to protect them. While Steele was going to make a move, Anna arrived.
" Steele, is there something wrong?" she asked. She then realized that he's going to make something very bad, she could see it on his face. Anna saw the pups, and Diane very scared. She stood up before Diane to protect her.

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I like this! Good writing! Keep it up! :D


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Great job so far, Beauty_Jenna.
I'm not a big fan of Steele/Jenna, but it works for me when things go wrong a bit. :wink:
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Thank you very much everyone! :D
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Great job so far, Beauty_Jenna.
I'm not a big fan of Steele/Jenna, but it works for me when things go wrong a bit.
Keep it up!
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Me too, but I wanted to see hw their pups would look like and the story cameup itself :lol: But I wouldn't destroy Jenna's relationship with Balto :wink: And so far, I've never seen similar fanfic.[/code]

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That was a great story. Write more. I want to read more.

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great job!!!!!!!!!!!!!


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Good job! I can't wait untill the full thing is released. Seems like a great plot.


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I love the plot! Great idea, Beauty_Jenna!

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I like it so far! I liked the idea you had for Jenna and Steele to have pups, that it was like inevitable XD Very cool!


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I love the second part! Normally I get pissed off when people writht about Jenna dumping Balto and going after Steele but you have me very interested^^


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Thank you everyone! Steele and Jenna having pups thingy was in my mind for a long time, but I couldn't hurt Balto's feelings that much, and by the way, most of the fan fictions about them having pups have in common that Jenna loves Steele. Here, she still doesn't :D Balto and Jenna are still a great couple for me, but as I wanted to see how Steele and Jenna's pups would look like, I wouldn't just leave those pups without mentioning them anywhere. That's just me :lol:

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Hey, Is your Sitka a different one then mine? Just wanted to know, becuase you are usually good about copyrights and such.


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Hey, Is your Sitka a different one then mine? Just wanted to know, becuase you are usually good about copyrights and such.


Kelev, yes, he is different. I adopted him :D Don't worry, I'd ask you for permission if I'd like to use your Sitka in the fan fiction. And I also know that he's got an awesome mate already, so it still would be impossible for Diane to have him :lol:

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