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 Post subject: I Had No Choice(SneekPeek)
PostPosted: Mon Dec 18, 2006 2:07 pm 
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Title:I Had No Choice
Plot:Aniu as a young teen meets her true love but will her father approve?And what was Aniu's life before Balto?What was she like?Well heres what I think her story was.
Rating:PG-13

Aniu(c)Universal
Chinook(Aniu's Father)(c)CarribbeanLady
Galileo(Aniu's Younger Brother)(c)CarribbeanLady
Sheen(Aniu's mother)(c)CarribbeanLady

More parts coming soon!Enjoy!

Aniu yawned as she woke up by her sisters side. The sun rose outside the den making her lazy pack members fur shine. She shook her head and looked around. But she raised her eyebrow to see her father missing from the wolves. She pulled herself to her paws and shook her white fur. Then she tip toed out the den careful not to step on anyones tail.

Finally she emerged from the den. She squinted as the sun caught her eyes. Soon she was fine to look around at the beauty around her. The den sat on a hill over looking the ocean.The were the first of the wolf packs to see the sun rise. She breathed in the Arctic air before padding down the hill.

She found the small stream leading to the ocean. The northern glaciers had been melting in the summer sun making this freash water stream. She licked up some water before noticing something glinting up on the hill. She lifted her head to look at it as water dripped down her muzzle. Her smile crept across her face as she began running back up the hill.

As she came closer to the glinting white object a voice was heard by her ears. "Aniu, my daughter, you are up before the sun rises."Her father, Chinook, said as he stared at the sun. She sat down beside him as she smiled. Her father always knew what she was thinking or doing. "Please don't embaress me,"he smiled at her. She giggled as she tried to clear her mind. "You always knew what I was going to say,"she giggled.

"Of course,"he said, "your my daughter. But it seems you have questions?"

"Well," Aniu said quitely,"I do. Will I become the next alpha?"

"Yes,"he said,"it is your responsiblity as a part of our family."

"But father,"she said,"what if I'm not ready when you are?"

"You will be,"he said still looking at the sun,"I can feel it."

"But father Alpha's have to be able to know the future like you do,"she said,"I only know when someone wants to pounce on me."

"Well,"he said looking at her,"thats a start."She smiled as she nuzzled her father."Hold on,"her father said turning stern as he turned to look behind them.

Galileo, Aniu's younger brother,was running up to them. "Father!"he said,"humans are invading our territory." Chinook ran past him saying," I know." Together Aniu and Galileo followed their father.

By the time they had caught up, their father was already talking to the warrior wolves."Dad!"Galileo said running up to his father,"I'm coming too!"he said pumping up his chest.

"No son,"he said bluntly as the warrior wolves nuzzled their mates.

"But Dad!"Galileo said,"I can do it! I can beat those humans up good!"

"I told you Galileo,"Chinook said nuzzling their mother,"you will stay here until I think your ready."

"But..."Galileo started to said but stopped when Chinook gave him a grim look. Galileo's ears went down and his tail went between his legs. "Don't disobey me son,"Chinook said. He nodded his head in the direction of the woods and started to run as the others followed. "Too bad Galileo. Maybe next time," Aniu said walking up to her brother.

"Shut up!"he growled."Dad always favored you."

"Galileo,"Aniu started to say. She was only trying to help. "He'd probley let you go if you wanted to as much as I do,"he snarled.

"Well I'm much older than you! Besides you should'nt be talking to me that way!"she yelled at him.

"So?"he yelled,"I wish you wer'nt my sister because you know why? I'd be the next alpha and I'd get to do and go anywhere I want to go!" Aniu was about to scream something back when their mother stepped. "Thats enough you two!"she growled. Galileo grunted and ran off down the hill to the beach. Aniu looked back to her mother. "Don't tamper with him Aniu,"she said walking away.

Aniu looked back to the beach to see her brothers shadow had disspeared. Not wanting him to get hurt she set out to find him. Running down the hill she slid into the cool sand.

She padded down the shore careful not to get wet by the small waves. "Galileo?"she asked the empty beach. No answer was heard as she stopped. Her ears straightned as she looked around alertly. Something was going to happen.

Suddenly she ducked low to the ground as another creature flew over top of her hitting the sand with a loud bang. Right away Aniu got into attack mode ready for anything...except the eyes that met hers.

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PostPosted: Thu Dec 21, 2006 4:14 pm 
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It seemed to be a boy wolf with brilliant blue and brown eyes. But wait her had a tail that curled upwards. Anyway she had never seen a wolf with a curly tail and one blue eye and one brown eye. She cocked her head at him. He did the same as he watched her closley.

They stood there as the water sparkled with the sun beside them. It felt like the time had gone so fast because as soon as Aniu came back to her senses the sun was halfway across the sky. The animal shook his head to also get back to his senses. "Your a..."he started to say.

"Yes I'm a wolf. Now what are you?"she asked cuorisly.

"Why I'm a husky,"he said straightning into a pose showing off his slender husky body,"the fastest there is."

"Oh,"Aniu said giggling as she had never giggled before. She didn't even remember that dogs and wolves were pure enimies because of humans. "I'm Aniu by the way,"she smiled at him.

"Aniu,"he said thinking about it,"I like that name. My names Jones. "She giggled again like she could'nt control them. He laughed and smiled at her. "So uh you live around here?"Jones asked.

"Yes I do.Right over there.We are the first wolf pack to see the sun,"she said proudly."Where is your pack?"

"My pack? I don't have one,"he said.

"Oh are you a loner?"she asked him sadly.

"Well I uh,"he started to say.

"You can join my pack,"she said quickly.

"Oh I uh,"he started to say.

"Come on!"she said grabbing his paw and pulling him up the beach. "I want everyone to see how nice you are. Uh its so hard to find a nice wolf around here you know?"

"Uh I,"he started to say again.

"I mean ya they all want to alpha but you want a good looking guy who's nice,good with kids and thinks your the best thing in the world ya know?"she said quickly.

"Well ya but,"he said.

"We're here!"she interupted. They had indeed climbed the hill and were now looking at the den. The pups were jumping around and it seemed Galileo had come back because he was sitting with the pups a very bored expression on his face. Aniu giggled at this as he looked up to see them. "Whos he?"one of the pups asked running over to them. Soon a whole crowd of pups were sitting around them. "His name is Jones,"Aniu told then.

"Where'd he come from?"one asked.

"From around here,"she told them.

"Are you gonna marry him?"a girl pup asked.

"Oh!"Aniu said blushing. They sat in silence as Aniu thought of something to say. "Come on guys we just met,"Jones said laughing. The pups whispered for a while then..."Attack!" They all screamed with laughter as they bounced on top of him. He laughed and rolled over as Aniu giggled and walked out the way to watch them. "Now watch it there!"he laughed as they pulled on his ear. One of her friends walked up to her,"Oh Aniu!He's so charming!"In her mind Aniu checked off a list. He had good looks,he was great with kids now all he needed was to show her how much she meaned to him.

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PostPosted: Mon Dec 25, 2006 6:06 pm 
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(sorry for third post.Does no one like it or is it too good for words?!! :lol: )

That afternoon the pack was still waiting for the warrior wolves to come home. Aniu was sitting on the hill watching the forest as the sun was disspearing over the other side of it. She looked over to see Jones was walking up to her. "Hi Jones,"she said sadly."I thought you were with the pups?"

"They're going to sleep,"he said."What are you doing out here?"he asked her sitting down.

"My father,"she said keeping her eyes on the forest. He looked at his paws. "I'm sure he's fine,"he said.

"I know,"she said,"I just get worried." She looked at the ground sadly.

Suddenly a barking was heard. She looked up and saw a white blur and other brown and grey shadows following it."Their home!"she yelled and jumped past Jones. The other wolves came out of the den to see what was going on. Then they too started running towards the wolves.

Aniu reached them first. "Dad!"she cried nuzzling her father.

"I'm fine,"he whispered.

"But dad,"she said looking at him."You have cuts and bruises."

"Yes they gave us a beating,"he said.

"Did you retreat dad?"she asked him as the mates around her reunited.

"Of course we did. I don't want anyone hurt,"he said. Aniu's mother,Sheen,came over and nuzzled Chinook. Aniu slowly breathed a sigh of relief. They were safe from the two leggeds...for now.

Suddenly her father growled and ran past her. Aniu lifted her head and turned to see him growling at Jones. "Dad!"Aniu yelled running towards the two growling males. Jones's fur was standing on end as he snraled at Chinook. "Dad,"Aniu said stopping beside her growling father,"Its okay he's a friend.His name is Jones." Chinook kept staring at him, Jones doing the same back.

Finally Chinook straightned up and glared at Jones. He looked at Aniu, grunted then walked towards the den. The rest of the wolves followed glaring at Jones as he was now staring at them. Aniu's mother looked at Aniu as she stood outside the den. Aniu nodded telling her mother by her actions that she'd be fine. Her mother nodded and walked into the den. Galileo was the last in the den as the pups kept running away from him. As soon as everyone was gone Aniu walked up to Jones.

"Sorry. My dad can be such a pain sometimes,"she said smilind and rolling her eyes.

"Ya,"he said glaring at the den."He's some kinda work."

"Well I guess the den is a no no for sleeping tonight,"she said.

"I got a place we could...I mean I could sleep,"he said blushing.

"Oh really?"she said raising her eyebrow and smiling.

"Uh ya,"he said blushing."This way."He turned and began walking towards the beach. They slid down the hill and on to the soft sand. He then began walking down the beach towards the dying sun. They kept walking as Aniu stared at him.

Finally they turned a corner and he stopped. Then he turned towards the hill but they couldn't climb it because it was too steep. Then Aniu noticed a small hole in the side of the hill big enough for a wolf to fit in. He stood back and waved his paw towards the entrance. "Ladies first,"he said smiling. He giggled and smiled at him as she squeezed inside.

It was quite tight as she traveled through the zigzagged tunnel. Her nice white coat began to turn brown as the dirt rubbed on to her body. Soon she found herself in a much bigger cave like area. She could lift her head up and walk around normaly as she looked around. It was dark and damp except for the light through the hole she had just come. Soon the light was gone and Jones appeared. "Jones is that you?"she asked squinting to see through the darkness.

"Yes its me Aniu. Don't be scared I'm here,"he said. Then she felt his fur rub against hers. She backed away. "Jones aren't you taking this a little too fast?"she said. What was she saying? She loved him since she first saw him. "I'm sorry,"he said quickly as he too backed away. "I wasn't thinking.I'm sorry Aniu."

They stood there in the darkness for some time before Aniu sighed. She walked towards him (or what she thought was him). She then felt his soft fur and beating chest and she knew she was right. She nuzzled his chest. He moved away from her. "Aniu are you sure? I'm not forcing you to...love me,"he said to her through the darkness.

"No,"she whispered nuzzling him again,"I do love you." She felt him nuzzle her back and they stood there nuzzling and kissing each other. Aniu knew her father would disaprove of this but she didn't care. Besides this could do no long term damage.

That night they sat there nuzzling and kissing each other. Aniu had never felt so happy as the two teen's sat there together in the darkness. Then she slept beside him in the dark damp cave for the rest of the night.

The morning came quickly as she awoke in the cave. He smiled as her drowsy eyes fluttered open. She looked over to see Jones was gone. "Jones?"she asked franticlly."Jones?" She quickly zigzagged her way out the hole and into the bright sun light.

She jumped around looking everywhere. Did he leave her already? "Jones!?"she yelled.

"What?" Jones asked as he came from around the corner. She ran over to him and and kissed him and nuzzled him. "Woah whats wrong?"he asked her.

"Oh I just love you,"she said as she kissed him again.

"Well if your done with the kissing,"he laughed,"we've got to eat."

"Oh come on,"she said walking down the beach,"the hunters have probabley brought back a caribou or two." Together they walked down the beach the sun rising over the water. She looked out at the ocean."Don't you ever wonder,"she asked him still walking.

"Wonder what?"he asked.

"What its like beyond here?"she asked nodding her head towards the rising sun.

"Nope not for me,"he said,"I'm fine right where I am."She smiled at him and looked back out at the ocean as she sighed.

Soon they reached the hill. They walked up it to see the den and the other wolves walking around. They looked at it for a few minutes. Suddenly someone was calling her name. She turned to see Galileo walking towards her. "Where have you been?"he growled.

"What do you care?"she asked him.

"You were supposed to look after the pups last night,"he snarled.

"So? Its not that hard for you,"she said.

"Well mom was worried. I'm gonna go tell her. Your gonna get Aniu, your gonna get it good,"he said running towards the den. Aniu growled to herself and started walking towards the den. How was she gonna tell dad about her little nuzzle game with Jones?

Suddenly she stopped dead. Her eyes widened, her claws came out, and her fur stood on end. Before her eyes was a picture with faded edges. It was a picture of the pack coming back with two caribou. She shook her head and came back to her senses. Her claws returned to her paws, her eyes closed and her fur flattened out. "Whoah,"she whispered.

"Aniu!"Jones yelled running towards her,"you okay?"He nuzzled her as sweat pored down her head. "Ya,"she said breathing heavily,"ya I'm fine."

Her ears perked up to hear howling and barking. She gasped when she saw the exact same picture of the pack pulling back the caribou. She shook her head again and breathed slowly. Nothing was wrong... she was just doing...weird stuff. Ya! Thats it! Its happens to everyone...right?

That evening Aniu was on the hill nuzzling with Jones. She had stayed clear of her father the whole day by staying with Jones. But she had more fun than she thought she would with him. He really did love her! She smiled as they nuzzled their tummies full of caribou meat. Luckily she had gotten some time to steal a bit of meat for them since the pack wouldn't allow Jones to eat with them.

She looked at him and into his eyes. Then she heard a voice in head. 'I wonder if she really does like me?'the voice said.

"What did you say Jones?"she asked him.

"What?"he asked,"I didn't say anything."

"Didn't you just say...uh never mind,"she said looking away. Then the voice came again.'Uh I really wanna go the next level with her,'the voice said. She smiled when she heard those words. So he did feel the same way as her! But she knew she was the one who had to say it. "Jones,"she said looking at him.

'Is this it?'the voice asked.

"I have to tell you something,"she said.

'Please be you love me, please be you love me,'

"Its just,"she said.

'Take it easy Jones. Let her do it,'

"I want to go the next level,"she said smiling.

'YA HOOO!!!!'

"Aniu thats wonderful!"he said jumping around her.

"I realized that we belong together,"she said nuzzling him. He nuzzled her back as they walked down the hill and on to the beach. The moon shone over the glittering waves as they stared at each other. Soon they found themselves outside their new 'den'. She squeezed in first and found herself in the dark damp area again. This time it felt like...home. Jones ended up next to her as they nuzzled her. That night they mated for the first time in both their lives.

For the next few weeks the new couple spent every moment with each other. Never had their eyes left each others. Her father still did not approve but let them be. Aniu had not told anyone in her pack that she had mated with Jones who was a dog. But what did she care that he was a dog or what her family thought? Her heart told her that they belonged together.

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PostPosted: Tue Dec 26, 2006 12:15 pm 
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It's good Caribbean Lady. I can't wait to read the whole thing. I like how you have written it and how Galileo is jelious of his sister Aniu.

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Its finished!Hope you all like it.

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