Okay, I am writeing a story called One Day,Tomarrow. It's About my charry and her life. Her name is Whitey*incase u didn't know* tell me wutt u think. Lol, I can sometimes mispell words So umm yeah XD I would really like for you to tell me what you think

Yes I know it's short but I will be adding more tho XD Here is the intro:
An eerie howl ringed across the forest and plains. It was heard throughout the wild Montana skies. Stepping out into the dawn sun was a warming feeling. Whitey Inhaled and exhaled the pure morning air. "A Pleasent Day...Whitey?" A voice sounded behind her. She new it was the voice of the annoying male wolf, Bider. Rolling her eyes she answered "Yes, But my morning ALONE time was just shattered."
"Who, By me? Oh I'm sorry. Anything I can do,For you?" He said with a mischeviouse smile on. She sighed. "No, but thank you for asking." She said politely not showing her lack of enthusiasm to his question.
It was very early, So Whitey had alot of time to be by herself....and Bider. The Breeze tickled Whitey's face and she began to smile. "That feels so nice."
"And It looks nice on ya too." Bider said snickering.
She turned with a
Can't you just enjoy the morning face. He motioned slower towards her. She backed up a little. "So Whitey, you found a mate yet?" He said slowly and cousiously.
"No,Bider, and I don't think I will soon." She said rolling her eyes. Bider motioned toward her again, swaying his tail back and forth. She sat still, watching with precaution. He looked at her handsomly, trying to mood her. It didn't fase her. He sat down next to her prushing his tail up against her back and tail-section. He put his paw next to hers. She watched as he continued his moves.....