I couldn't help it!

I had to make a fanfic about two sisters. But you'll never guess who they are, and why they... Never mind, I'll tell you!
Background Info:
Lightning and Hawaii are sisters. They are absolute opposites in every way possible. Lightning is Black, Hawaii is white. Lightning is good, Hawaii is, evil, (well, she pretty much acts like it). This didn't happen on purpose. It was because their parents were complete opposites. Their mother was black, and soft spoken, and good. Their father, was a bad boy, and he was white. Now, Lightning is NOT soft spoken, she got her loudness from her father. But, Hawaii, although she's mean, she's very soft spoken. But when you get her angry, you better run away, cuz' it's kick butt time!
Plot:
Lightning and Hawaii are forced on a journey with one another. They have to complete tasks, and learn to respect,, and like one another. They meet many obstacles along the way, and only together can they overcome them. You could say it's a diary of their journies together. Their brother, Raleigh, is sent along a few days later, to trail behind them, and make sure they don't kill each other. The rest.. I'm leaving out because I like to torture you people.
Rating: PG
Post all your comments and critique! I'd be glad to hear them! Oh, and I'll be drawing updated pictures of both Hawaii and Lightning soon, so, I'll edit this post once I scan them.
Reminder: Look out, because I'll be posting a contest in Fan Art for the cover of this fic! I'm still decind the prizes, so check back soon!
