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This fan fiction that i am writing is about a young wolf pup who wishes she could be part of a pack


Chapter 1
The pup is born
One bright sunny day a mother white wolf named Avalanche,who was pregnet was seraching for the father of her babys. She serached in the woods and did not find him she was heartbroken. How could the pups survive without a father it was sad.

A good first start at chapter 1. I do have a suggestion though see if you can work in more detail in your story. It sounds intereasting, keep up the good work.