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Should I continue writing this fic?
Yeah! 75%  75%  [ 3 ]
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I'm just voting for the heck of it! 0%  0%  [ 0 ]
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S.L.D.M.
 Post subject: Trouble In Paradise- My First Fanfic!
PostPosted: Sun Nov 19, 2006 10:10 pm 
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Okay, this is my first fanfic, so I might not be very good, but please feel free to give me tips and constructive criticism. No saying, "You suck! You shouldn't be allowed to write fanfics!" :lol: :wink: Also, if you do actually think I'm making a good start, go ahead and post your compliments, or PM them to me if you don't want to seem like a suck up.

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Aleu has become the leader of the pack she joined about a year ago, but a new wolf has joined the pack. His rank is a Hunter, which is the lowest rank in the pack. Other higher ranking members of the pack look at him as a stupid kid, who had no business joining. Though, Aleu doesn't feel hostility towards this wolf, she almost feels, love. What is to become of her feelings?

Rating: PG

I'll post the Prolouge soon, but first I want to hear your comments on this idea. :wink:
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It looks to me like you're off to a really good start,I wish you the very best in writing the fanfic. :wink:

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Sounds good
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I like it, definitely continue with your fic. :wink:
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Yesh! Continue on! Its sounds really Really Good! Whoo! Go! *Cheers* Whoo! 0.o sorry, alittle hyper today.

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I think you should continue. The summary is great and it sounds like a great story line. Have fun writing it.

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Thanks everybody for your comments! :) I really appreciate it. Please vote in the poll! 8)
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Are you gonna write more?

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Just my guess, but she might still be working on the plotline, and working out a rough draft. She's one of my friends at school, and that's the way she normally does things when she writes a story. :wink:
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Oh. Thanks for telling me. I love her summary so far. Do you write stories?

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Yeah! If you want to check out my fanfic gallery, here's the link. :)

http://baltosource.timduru.org/balto.ph ... 2&numg=361
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