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I start story... About my character, Oxy. Scene of action - Russia and Nome in 1922-25... What do you think about beginning of story? Is it necessary to continue? Or that's stupid?
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The war was in those years. Civil War. It surely and now goes. Russia always was the restless country. But in those years especially. My former master was the officer of the Red Army, tsar exiled him into Siberia.There, in Vladivostok, where he was exiled, he found me: small, silly and defenseless. It was somewhere 1922.
At the owner I have lived about three years. Also would live and now in Vladivostok, but - the malicious destiny does not spare - master killed by his enemies. My God, as to me it was much terrible! I was with him this evening. We went in home in the dark when three unknowns have thrown on us... I attempted to protect Andrey - so this name of my master, have made noise, people came running, but it was too late - Andrey has already died. He kill one of unknowns, the second gripped by the arrived people, and the third...although he run away, but I for all life have remembered his face... I have sworn to find him!


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Sorry if you find mistakes, I'm from Kazakhstan, my English is not good:)

I like the plot and conflict you've already established.
Yes, there are some verb errors, but nothing that will keep me, or anyone else, from understanding this.
Keep writing!

-LWf

YEY! I can't wait for the rest

I have already written this story in russian, but I translate now it in English.

it sounds cool. Keep going, and dont worry about your english. it is good enough for most things. Dont worry about it!