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PostPosted: Sat Nov 11, 2006 3:24 pm 
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Okay I just made Dingo's story so heres Saba's.

Story:I'm not sure yet.I'm making it up as I go.

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Saba(c)Universal
Willow(c)CarribbeanLady
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Aleu(c)Universal
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My first memory I can remember was on the beach.I was still in puppy-hood when Mama was taking us down to the beach to meet Papa for the day.I was so excited because I loved my Papa and the beach!

I jumped up and down as we trotted towards the beach."Mama whats a bird?Why can they fly?Why can't we fly?"I asked her but she told me to shush and ask my father.I nodded and kept following her.

Finally I felt the breeze of the ocean and the smell of the sea."Yahooo!"I yelled as I ran ahead of my mother.My brothers and sisters followed and we ran down to the warm beach.I rolled in the sand and laughed as everyone did the same.

Dingo jumped on me and we playfully fought barking at each other happily.Then I looked over to see Papa on the beach.I barked and ran over to Papa and my brothers and sisters followed."Hey pups.Good to see you too,"Papa said as we jumped on top of him."Hey watch it now that tickles,"he laughed as I pulled on his ear.

Then we all stopped to watch my sister Aleu growl and run off.We barked and followed her laughing.Then we jumped all over each other as Mama and Papa talked.I was wondering what they were talking about until Kodi jumped on top of me.I growled and we barked at each other.

Then we heard a voice yell,"Puppies!Come to uncle Boris!"

"Uncle Boris!"we yelled as we jumped on him.He cried out in pain as we pulled him along the beach."My wing!"he yelled as we pulled him through the waves.Then we threw him down again and he yelled,"Let go!"

Soon Mama had left and Papa was walking over as Uncle Boris yelled,"no kidding."

"Come on now,"Papa said,"Uncle Boris isn't a chew toy."We barked happily and ran off.I jumped up to catch the piece of paper stuck to the stump.I looked over to see Aleu with Papa.Then Aleu was finally running over.I laughed as we played with the stump then Aleu climbed on top of it.She started to howl like we heard dogs do on television so we barked as she howled.

After Papa told her not to howl like that.We were confused why he said this but we began playing again.

Soon the day was over and he took us back to Mama.My brothers and sisters ran inside the house while I nuzzled Papa."Night night Papa!See you tommorow,"I said as I licked his nose.

"Bye sweet heart,"he said sadly as we nuzzled.With that I went into the house where we ate our dinner and went to sleep.I dreamed of tommorow and what we would do.I smiled as I saw us running along the beach.

The next morning I woke up and saw Papa was here.I barked happily as I jumped out of the basket and pawed at his nose.He nuzzled me and I licked his nose."What are we doing today Mama?"I asked Mama happily as I ate my breakfast.

"Oh you'll all be getting humans,"she said smiling.

"Cool!"I said looking up at her,"my very own human!"As soon as my brothers and sisters woke up and had their breakfast we set out for who know's where.

It was a cool summers day in Nome as we walked.I looked around in awe as the town was so busy.We stopped by a box and Papa picked me up and put me in.Aleu was the last in and soon we were all in the box.

We all looked around sniffing every inch of the box.I barked as I spotted a television set.It was out favorite program so we all barked happily.Soon the hero Sir Barksalot came on the screen and began howling.Aleu began howling as well and we all barked along.Soon we all covered our ears."Aleu hunny,"Mama said,"please don't howl like that."

"Oh sorry Mama,"Aleu said as I uncovered my ears,"but it happens that I'm excited."

"I'm excited too,"Dingo yelled as he pounced on Aleu."I can't wait to get a human and chew on their socks!"Then Aleu jumped on him and they playfully fought while I jumped up at Papa."Papa!,"I said,"Are you gonna get a human too?"

"Nah,"he said after a small pause,"See humans like cute little puppies like you.Not old grizzly grownups like me."He patted my head as a human came by."These are Rosies puppies daddy,"he said,"Jenna had em.I like this one."He picked up Dingo and we all said good bye.

Soon we were all waiting as Nakita my sister left as well.We waved goodbye as a little boy and girl ran up to us.Soon a little boy named Marc picked me."Oh I love you,"he said hugging me.I waved goodbye to Kodi and Aleu hoping they too would get good homes as me and Willow were being taken home.I nuzzled my little boy so happy that he picked me.

Willow and I found out we could stay together as our humans were brother and sister.I also found out his father was a musher for the mail team so I always wanted to be on the team.Each morning I sat out in the snow watching the mail team come in then leave.I sighed thinking of how much I wanted to be on that team like Papa.

A few months later I grew into a beautiful teenage husky my red fur redder than ever.My sister Willow grew too and her paws were much larger than mine so she could run faster than me so I envyed her for it.

One day I was walking along the street my green collar swinging around my neck.I had just got it once I turned 3 months old yesterday.Willow got a brown one not as fancy as mine.I looked at the bakery window as it reflected of it like a mirror.I smiled as I puffed out my chest to see mu lisence sparkle in the sunlight.I laughed and fluffed my tail.

I perked up my ears and looked behind me on the window.I saw the reflection of a brown husky staring at me.I turned around faced him batting my eyelashes.His tounge stuck out and his tail was going a mile a minute.I smiled as I fluffed my tail.Then I turned and walked off my tail to his face.I loved teasing boys with my good looks.

"Me?"I asked surprised at another window,"Oh you."I smiled imagining a boy dog in the window complimenting me.Then I trurned and walked away laughing.

I stopped when I saw a dog was getting hitched up to the mail sled.It was a different dog I had never seen before.I walked towards the sled as the other dogs on the team noticed me.With my nose in the air they whistled and howled at me.I didn't cause how could I waste my time with them?Those...those...dirty things?

I got to the musher and he patted my head."Hey there Saba,"he said,"you must have come over here to say congrats to the new mail dog."Highly unlikely I thought rolling my eyes as he waked away.

The dog turned around and I gasped."WILLOW?!"I barked angerly.

"Hi Saba!I made the team!Is'nt that great?"she said happily.

"You did what?"I growled."I wanted to be on the team!"

"Well thats too bad,"she growled back.

"Saba!"the musher called,"come on we've got to go.Go find Marc."I backed away my ears low."Mush Willow!"he yelled.She smiled evily at me one last time before they ran off.I growled at the sled as it exited Nome.

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Fantastically written,I really enjoyed reading it,and am looking forward to chapter two. :wink:

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Very awsome. ^^ I love it so far!! ^^

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Why did she get to be on the team?It was I who wanted it the most!It was those ***** paws of hers!I growled and walked away staring at the ground angerly.

I walked home and lay down in my basket.I looked over at her basket.I smiled evily and walked over to it.Then I ripped it apart.I ripped the blankets and pulled apart the basket.Once I saw I had done as much damage as I could I smiled and lay down in my basket feeling better about myself as I closed my eyes.

I woke up to a growling in my ear.I looked up to see Willow growling at me."What did you do to my basket?"she growled.

"It needed some work done to it,"I smiled evily.She growled and walked away out the door.I laughed and lay down again.Then I heard a ripping sound.I ran to see what was wrong and I gasped when I saw Willow ripping my favorite blanket apart."What are you doing?!"I barked.

"It needed work,"she smiled put it down.I ran up to my blanket and picked up the pieces in my mouth.I ran to my basket and put them down carefully in my basket.I growled and ran back into the living room and saw Willow was gone.

I perked up my ears to the sound of my boy and his sister playing outside."Go and get it!"he yelled as I looked out the window.I gasped again when I saw my boy...my boy hugging Willow!She looked at me and smiled."This means war,"I growled.

The next morning I woke up to think some bad things.I walked to my breakfast and ate it happily.I saw Willows bowl was empty already so I knew where she would go.Willow always went to the hill to watch the sun rise for some reason.

I looked out the window and saw the sun was almost up.I had to hurry if I wanted to do what I needed to do.I jumped out the front door and down the street towards the beach where the hill was.I turned the corner to see Willow was walking back.I hid behind the house and got ready to pounce.

I know its only a little but its updated right? :lol:

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Ooh!! Suspence! I can't wait for more. ^^

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Chapter two is also very exciting,keep up the good work. :wink:

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Finally I saw Willow walk past so I pounced.I pushed her down we fought.Not like we did as pups...not playing...we fought.She screamed and pushed me off.I fell into the snow and shook my head.I looked up again to see Willow running towards the beach.She was gonna tell Papa!I thought.

I jumped up and growled running after her.I thought of running on the mail team after she was gone so I ran faster.I managed to catch her tail.She tripped as I bit into her tail."Stop it!"she barked as I pinned her.

"You've ruined my life,"I growled.Her eyes widened in fear."Please Saba!"she barked as I lowered my teeth to her neck,"I'll leave town!Just don't hurt me!"

"Oh ya?"I asked pulling my head back up as she struggled,"and where will you go."

"I'll got to..."she said.

"Too late,"I growled.She screamed as my teeth sunk into her neck.Then the struggling stopped as her head fell back.I bared my red fangs and spit out her blood.I moved off her and looked at her closed eyes.

I knew that Papa would wonder who killed her and would vow revenge on whoever did it so I brushed my pawprints away.Then since her paws were wolf like I put them around her.I growled once more before I left her there.

The sun had risen in the blue sky.Before I went into town I ate some snow,making sure it wasn't yellow,to clean my fangs to white again.I smiled in the ice to make sure they were clean then I entered the town.

Everyone smiled and patted my head as I walked in.I smiled back and happily trotted home.I got home and lay down in my basket.I closed my eyes and smiled once more before going to sleep.

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Gasp! Saba's a murderer! I never saw that coming! Gasp twice! Amazing story so far Carribbean Lady! I'm loving it so far! Gasp thrice! What's the outcome gonna be? I'm so excited to read more!

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I woke up to nudge."Mmmhhh,"I said turning away.
"Saba get up,"I opened my eyes to hear papa growling at me.I sat up and looked up at him trying not to look guilty."Yes Papa?"I asked sweetly.
"I have some bad news sweetie,"he said.
"What is it Papa?"I asked trying to act confused.
"Your sisters dead,"he said sadly his ears low.
"No!"I gasped."Who would do such a thing?"
"I don't know.But we found...uh...wolf prints around her,"he said looking away.I knew Papa didn't like to talk about wolves for some reason."What will the mail team do?"I asked.
"Well I think since your her sister you should take her place,"he said.
"Oh but Papa would she really want that?"I asked stirring him up.
"Yes of course she would,"he said begging me to do it,"your her sister.You were best friends."
"Yes,"I sniffed acting to cry,"I guess she would."
"Thats my girl,"he said nuzzling me.

That morning Papa introduced me to my new team mates.Including another girl dog called Dusty and two other boy dogs called Ralph and Kirby.I fluffed my tail at the boys saying sweetly,"hello."They didn't move a muscle.Ralph was too busy talking to Dusty and Kirby was staring at Mike the fire dog.I growled quitely to myself.Why don't they swoon before me?

"Come on girl.Lets get you hooked up,"the musher said.He clipped me on to the lead."Okay guys mush!"the musher yelled and we flew forward.

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The snow was cold and wet as we ran."Hurry up!"I growled to them.
"We're going as fast as we can!"Dusty snarled.
"Then go faster!"I snarled back.

We made it to White Mountain late."We're late!"I growled at them.
"We were never late when we had your sister as our lead,"Dusty said.
"Well shes gone and I'm here.So live with it,"I snarled.Dusty grunted and stared at me angerily.I didn't care.She slowed us down anyway!

Shaking my head and rolling my eyes I waited until we go again.Soon the musher came back out putting the bag on the sled."Mush!"he yelled and I pulled them forward."Move faster!"I growled.

Soon enough we were half way from Nome.The snow was getting in my eyes and my paws kept slipping.Suddenly a tree fell down in front of me inches from my paws.I screamed and jumped back falling into Kirby."Get off me!"he yelled pushing me off.We looked up at the tree that had falllen.There was no wind so how could it hav fallen and right in front of me!

Something starnge is going on I thought as we continued running.Something strange was near and it was targeting me.

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WOW!,It gets more and more suspenseful with each update. :lol:

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