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sleazye
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Post subject: Excerpt from my new chapter. Posted: Wed Oct 25, 2006 5:19 pm |
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Here's a small excerpt from my new chapter in Love Hate and Dog Racing.
Dusty, even though her eyes fluttered with exhaustion, still sat in front of the boiler thinking about what had happened in the previous days. Her face was now dry as a desert and twice as warm, which went along with the rest of her body. Several times she had almost fell forwards into the hot metal of the boiler - which would have left a nasty looking scar on her face. But each time she neared the heat she’d awake and sit bolt upright.
“I got to lie down before I hurt myself.” She chided herself in an upbeat, almost comical, manner. But the drollness died as her mind drifted back to the events that had changed the team. In some way she felt that all this had been her fault. Maybe I didn’t let him know that I liked him well enough, maybe I should have come right out and said it to him? She thought. But yet she knew that none of this was at her fault; this was just some arrogant rambling from a dog she used to love. Yeah, used to love. There’s nothing that can change a male dogs mind; and if that’s how he sees me, then so be it. She thought.
Then from across the room a loud expulsion of flatulence emitted from Kirby’s sleeping form. Dusty turned and looked at him just as a deep-sleep smile crossed his face. “Oh,” Dusty winced. “That’s so gross.” She watched Kirby for a moment more as he rolled over away from her and emanated a pleased groan.
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KrazyArc075-cwp
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Post subject: Posted: Wed Oct 25, 2006 9:08 pm |
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That's it?  , Please more!
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