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FANFIC SUMMARY: “Kiona and Achak’s lives continue after they first meet! Read as Kiona adapts to the life of a wolf, Achak learns more about acceptance, and the two form a bond stronger than pack members.”

[size=150][color=#FF0000]A DUE DATE HAS BEEN SELECTED. NEXT WEEK, AUGUST 19TH! IF YOU STILL WANT TO ENTER, DO SO AS SOON AS POSSIBLE. THERE WILL BE NO EXCEPTIONS!!!

Here's a small snip of the fanfic that we (Draco and CatWhoHas14Tails) are working on (we have yet to come up with a title for it, we'll decide on that ourselves later) It starts off right where Kiona's fic "The Wolf's Trail" (written by CatWhoHas14Tails) AND Achak's fic "A Wolf's Story" (written by Draco) So if you don't want to be confused, we advise to go to our fanfic galleries and read them BEFORE reading this entry.

Keep in mind that things are more than likely going to change once the finished project is posted, so don't be surprised.

Achak © Draco
Kiona © CatWhoHas14Tails
Kita © CatWhoHas14Tails

The red hybrid and the silver and black wolf stared at each other, both with unknown interest in each other. Thoughts were running rampant through their minds about each other, and they didn't know why. Why were they so intriguing to one another?

The male wolf stared down at the dog, trying his hardest not to seem interested, but he knew that staring at her could not have possibly helped any. His pack was almost as curious as he was, but for quite different reasons. The scent of the dog probably didn't interest them as much as their leader, but they were still in wonder as to why a mere dog would be in their territory alone.

The dog did not feel threatened by the wolves' scrutiny. But she could sense that at least one of them wanted her dead. Studying the black and silver wolf, she could also sense that he had a good mind and knew better than to give his pack a silly order as to attack a lone dog. But she then remembered the previous night when she felt a warm body against her own, keeping her alive from the storm's bitter cold. The scent that belonged to that body belonged to him. She was about to open her mouth to speak, but he spoke first.

"It's not safe for a dog to wander the world alone." he said. "You should run back to your human world and find one who won't leave you for dead."

The dog was taken aback from his first words. Even though his voice sounded gentle, the content of his speech was a bit harsh. She wasn't sure if the harshness was towards her or her human, Thomas. But how did he figure out that Thomas left her behind? She shook her head at the question and decided to try and find out at a later time.

"I...can't do that." she said, lowering herself a bit. "But I wanted to thank you," She paused to think of the right words to use. For some reason she felt that she didn't want to embarrass him in front of his pack. "...for before."

"Thank me?" the alpha thought, cocking his head. "She traveled all this time just to thank me?"

"Than consider yourself thankful." the wolf turned to leave with his pack, wanting to stick to his earlier ways of thinking, by not wanting to deal with dogs or humans.

"Wait!" the dog cried. The wolves turned back to look at her. She paused and swallowed. "I want entry to your pack."

A few of the pack members were heard snickering. The dog's fur bristled in embarrassment and anger, until the leader turned his head to hush them. He turned back to face the dog. As much as he didn't want anything to do with the workers of men, he was amazed as to how much courage she had wanting something like this. She must not want anything to do with man either, seeing that she wanted to stay. So she must not have been all bad. But he knew that when he first noticed her scent. She was different... And seeing how she handled herself, through fighting and being leader of her "dog team," she must be skilled in certain areas.

He would have let her into his pack, but a grey female known as Kita spoke up.

"Achak, sir, we cannot just LET a mere...mutt into the pack!" she announced. "She will only get in our way! One of her kind couldn't possibly survive out here for more than a day!"

Achak knew that wasn't true. It had been approximately three days since he rested with the dog, and even then she was injured from her fight. And there was a snow storm since then, so this dog handled bad weather and injuries and still survived. He made that point to Kita.

She said. "Even so, I will not allow that dog to taint our pack!" she turned to Achak. "Please allow me to be her key to entry!"

Achak thought about it for a moment. It would not be a bad idea to make the dog fight to get in. It would be interesting to see her style of fighting anyway. "Alright, Kita," he said, then speaking to the hybrid. "You will fight Kita. If you win, you can join my pack. If not, then you must leave my territory at once." He then began talking to both of them. "Anything goes. But there will be no killing." Then the fight began.

Kita jumped from her spot on the small cliff and made her way down to the dog, jumping on her from above. The dog leapt into the air and bit Kita in the face, making the two stumble in the air and land on their feet.

The dog could tell that this Kita would fight dirty. For some reason she didn't want her in the pack, but now she was even more determined to gain entry. The two females exchanged hateful glares before charging at one another yet again. Kita tried grabbing at the dog's throat, but she slinked out of her grip and bit hers. She didn’t draw blood, but Kita still whipped back for fear of physical pain. Kita jumped back forward and aimed for her opponent’s neck again, but instead latched into her harness. She viciously whipped the dog into the ground by her leather strap and it ripped with the force and fell to the ground.

The dog stared at her harness. She had forgotten it was on, but the thought that she could have been killed just now made her blood hot. The fury within her rose to the surface and her eyes rimmed with red brighter than her fur. With unnatural speed, the hybrid ran into Kita and knocked her into the ground onto some rocks. Kita cried out when she struck stone, and cried again when the dog just went insane and kept biting her.

We (CatWhoHas14Tails and Draco) have no idea when this fic will finally be released, but to keep you into it, more teasers will be on the way!

Picture teasers!

http://www.putfile.com/pic.php?img=3699161 <<--Made by Draco

http://i56.photobucket.com/albums/g184/ ... MELESS.jpg <<-- made by CatWhoHas14Tails

http://www.putfile.com/pic.php?img=3779822 <<-- made by Draco

http://www.putfile.com/pic.php?img=3788030 <<-- made by Draco

http://www.putfile.com/pic.php?img=3788177 <<-- made by CatWhoHas14Tails


Will any of the old characters make reappearance? Yes. Balto himself will appear in this fic!

We're both very excited about this fic. Below, there is a URL, but it's not just ANY URL my friends, no...It is a link! A link to a picture I have posted on putfile.com that relates to this new story!

http://www.putfile.com/pic.php?img=3314624

Now, what does this adorable little puppy (name is Hokee) have to do with the fic, you're asking yourselves, right? Well, he'll be in it for one! And to add onto this little teaser, we have a question to ask you.

Who does this pup look like to you? (From Balto)

That question is now raging in your minds isn't it, making you ever the more curious. Hints cannot be given other than what you see. You may want to go looking through some screenshots from the original first movie, maybe then you might find something.

Now, onward. So far we have pretty much thought out the entire plot. There will be drama, there will be mystery, and there will be love! There will also be twists and turns you never saw coming!


FANFICTION PARTS 1 AND 2 UPLOADED: http://baltosource.timduru.org/balto-ac ... g-638.html



PART THREE, WRITTEN BY CATWHOHAS14TAILS IS POSTED AND WAITING TO BE READ!!! --> http://baltosource.timduru.org/fanfic.p ... =2&nsite=1


Winner of the Hinto Contest wins a free soundtrack, put together by Draco and CatWhoHas14Tails!

We're also looking for fanfic titles! Assistance is very much appreciated!


TITLE IS FOUND! The fic from now until further notice will be called "The Brown Hill Spirits" which is a combination of the meaning of their (Achak and Kiona) names. Kiona's name means "brown hills" and Achak's means "spirit."


Hope this keeps you reading! Thank you for staying with us!

SUNDAY AUGUST 19TH, CONTEST ENDED: WINNER = TIKTAC! CONGRATS!

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CHAPTER 9 IS BEING UPLOADED!

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CHAPTER 10 IS UPLOADED!

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Because I already enterd the contest on another topic do you want me to put my entery here to (I mean the story and information)

Name:Hinto
Parents:Kiona & Achak
Breed:Wolf/husky mix
Picture: http://i54.photobucket.com/albums/g82/b ... /Hinto.jpg
Plans:I plan to use Hinto in Fanfics, and drawings. I have already thought of the beginning of a story about Hinto's start in life
and I have another pic i am doing

Well here is the bio and information for Hinto if I can adopt him

A curious red wolf walked through the cold forest at a night fall. As the wind blew through the wolf’s fur it shivered looking around nervously seeing a bright light between trees in a distance. The wolf slowly walked towards the light looking through the trees seeing the light cast a large shadow of a weird creature at the snow. “A human” He thought stepping closer. He had been told what a human was and that they were dangerous creatures carrying long black sticks that shoot something making a loud noise and killing everything it touched, but that human didn’t look dangerous at all he just sat there getting warm from the fire as it had now fur expect on his head and was wearing some kind of cloths. The red wolf was starting to walk closer as it heard a howl in distance. As the wolf turned around and fell back into the shadow the human looked nervously around and a dog that had been sleeping next to him started growling at the spot where the red wolf was. The red wolf glanced once again over his shoulder at where the human was before running towards the howls.
After running for awhile the red wolf could see a pack of wolfs standing at a cliff they’re howls cutting through the silent so beautifully. A large black and silver wolf and a red female wolf standing next to him looked down at the other red wolf. The black wolfs blue eyes looked like they could almost see through anything. The red wolf slowly walked over to them looking up at the larger wolf. “Where have you been” His dark but beautiful voice said as he sniffed the red wolfs fur finding some strange smell around him. “Humans” The female wolf said shortly looking worried at both the black and the red wolf… to be continued (Maybe it’s your chose )

But anyway like you can see in this start of a fanfic (that will maybe be made) You can see that Hinto takes a interest in humans though he knows they are a danger to his kind. Since he has been pup he had heard stories of humans and how dangerous they are but this is the first time he ever sees one.

Name: Hinto
Parents: Kiona © Catwhohas14tails & Achak © Draco
Breed: Wolf/husky mix
Picture: http://baltosource.timduru.org/affArt-l ... ong-1.html
Plans: Yeah I know I sounds like everybody else but anyway. I’m planning to write a fanfic about him, after I see yours of course so I can make out a good storyline (I don’t want to be like Balto 2 with a bad story line and a boring character ), And I will draw pictures of him (of course) And I’m not sure what more I can do except doodle pictures of him in my school books which I will probably do

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Also another picture of Hinto



Don't worry the mouse got away after an hour of being chased

Erm..I guess I'll enter again.




Name: Hinto
Mother: Kiona
Father: Achak
Breed: wolf/husky hybrid
Personality: Smart, fast runner, kind, loyal, and tries to act like his father.

About him from puppyhood:

When Hinto was born, Achak and Kiona were sure that he was going to become a strong healty wolf/husky hybrid. And as Hinto grew, he looked up to his father and admired his strength and prideness. Hinto also liked to explore with his siblings and pn one of his days alone, he meets a pup named Cheetah(Yes Draco, the one you liked^^) and becomes best friends with him. Hinto also spent time with Kanook and learned alot of his father's past.


What I plan to do with Hinto:

Well first of all, I will make a fanfic of his very own life (Like Achak) and also having a mate of his own once hes old enough. The fanfic will be called Walking in Achak's Steps or Walking in Father's Tracks. And I will also draw him often and he will have a picture entitled: Father and son. Which shows Achak with Hinto as a teenager. Also in his fanfic, he meets Cheetah and becomes his best friend. I also want to adopt Hinto because I love the color of his pelt and of his handsome blue eyes.




Picture: http://www.iaza.com/work/converted/Hinto92252.jpg

Guys read the reminder, this page was updated for a reason XD From now on updates will be in orange.

But then how come my picture isn't up there?

Name: Hinto
Father: Achak
Mother: Kiona
Breed: hybrid
Personnality: Proud, loyal, stubborn and curious.

Pup history:

Was born within Achak and Kiona's pack. Hinto was a healthy, playful and curious hybrid pup. He lived his puppyhood without anything too difficult to acheive or any rough times. He lived a normal pup life.

History when Hinto is One year old and up:

Hinto comes to the painful decision to leave his mother and father's pack with his mate ------(name still undecided). He leaves his beloved home for he wants to create his own pack and lead it with his mate. Achak and Kiona leave their son but, promise him that they would hold peace with each of their packs' for as long as they could. (I will stop writing here becaus I don't want to reveal my fanfic too much!)

What I plan to do in my fic:

-Hinto has pups, 3 pups.
-They encounter the late Aleu's pack
-Hinto, knowing his mother's hatred of Aleu, decides that once their pups grow older they shall attack Aleu's pack.

Other things I will use this pup for:

I will use this pup for fanart and lots of it! He seems fun to draw and also seems to have an interesting personnality wich makes me want to draw him in all sorts of situations!

Oh and heres another picture :
http://www.iaza.com/work/converted/Achak_and_Hinto64095.jpg

Awww!!!I can't wait to read the fic!!! And Kiona and Achak have some great puppies. Sooo cuute!!!!Well done CatWH14T and Draco!!! ^^Great!!!!

PS: I've read the reminder but I have a question: Can I draw Hinto still like he is your character because he is sooo cute? When there is someone's character I like so much, I love to draw them... Can I draw him?

Yes, you can ^^

I'd like to enter.He looks oh so cute! I know I'm weird!

Name:Hinto
Parents:Kiona(c)CatWhoHas14Tails & Achak(c)Draco
Breed:Wolf/hybrid
Personality:shy,determind to become alpha male,a real odd ball in the pack
Picture:
http://img158.imageshack.us/img158/1737/october252006sn4.jpg
My Plan:I don't really have a plan right now but,like everyone else,drawing him.If need be I'll write one ASAP but I have no ideas right now.

Cool, can't wait to see your pics guys!

After having another think about what I would do with Hinto if I got him I come up with these Ideas hope you like them..........

So far I have 3 good Ideas for 3 different fanfics here are my ideas

FANFIC #1~Final Goodbye~Hinto was the runt pup born on a stormy October night to Achak and Kiona, alphas of this perticular wolf pack. The wolves in the pack doubted that Hinto would become anything greater than omega in their status, Kiona and Achak thought otherwise and made him the alpha should anything happen to Achak. Three young male wolves in the pack, Keelut, Akela and Kanagon were angry at the thought of a born omega wolf being Alpha over them so they planned to get rid of him...
Two months passed and all the pups had grown quickly, all except Hinto. Achak was starting to have second thoughts now but Kiona was adament that thier pup would grow to be the greatest alpha the pack had seen, except for Achak ofcoarse. The three young males were trying to find a way to put thier plan into action without getting caught, so they went to a wolf who would not care if she got caught for her hatered of Kiona rose above everything else, her name was.....Kita.
Kita agreed to help the wolves dispatch of Hinto so one day when Achak and Kiona took the pack on a hunt and they left Kanook in charge of the pups, Kita decided that it was time they took care of the 'troublesome' pup. Kita told Akela and Keelut to take care of Kanook whilst she and Kanagon took care of Hinto. The two males crept up on Kanook as he was playing a game of 'tag' with the pups and they both used thier effort to hit him over the head with a rather large branch, the pups that witnessed this all ran in fear towards the den but Hinto stayed were he was to defend his great uncle and friend but just as he was getting ready to fight he was lifted into the air by the scruff of his neck. The pup squeaked and squirmed but Kita did not let go she hit the pups head on the floor and ran off with him up to and across the pack border and onto the Ookami pack's territory, that was were she left him bleeding and unconscious in the deep snow. Kita then sprinted off in the direction the pack went on the hunt so the three young males would look like the ones who had beaten Kanook and 'killed' Hinto.....
The Ookami pack Alphas, Angel and Demon had recently lost a litter of pups to the human hunters, Demon was over this now as it had happened over a month ago but Angel was still grieving terribly. Angel was on one of her daily patrols of her territory when she saw a strange wolf on the border. She was about to growl but then saw that it had a bleeding pup in its mouth so she held her tongue, she watched as the 'mother' of the pup hit it on the groung to make it bleed more and then left it in the snow. When the wolf was long gone Angel raced over to the pup and found it almost dead, choking on its own blood, she looked around to see if any other wolves were coming to find this pup but when she was quite sure he had been abandoned she picked him up and headed to her den, to introduce him to the rest of the pack as her new adopted son....... thats all for now cause I dont want 2 spoil it if I do write the fanfics

FANFIC #2:~Okami or Solar~ It has been a year since Hinto joined the Okami pack and even though he loves his 'mother' and 'father' dearly he cant seem to fit in so one day he decides to go on a little walk to clear his mind when he see's two misterious black wolf pups he watches them as they play together and then suddenly the pups just dissapear. Hinto begins to see these pups more and more untill he decides to talk to them...
"Hiya, my name is Hinto im the only son of the alphas of the Okami pack. Who are you two?" Hinto barked happily
"My name is Hex and this is Canevil my brother, we are two of four pups born to the alphas of the Solar pack!" barked the larger of the two pups
"I have seen you alot now, the first time I saw you you just dissapeared, how did you do that?"
"Thats for our family to know only!"growled Canevil
"Why dont you go back to your pack Hinto!?" barked Hex
"I'd rather......................................."
thats all for that one hehehe

FANFIC #3:~A Heros Tale~ (I have already begun to write this fic with out Hinto in it but all these fics would be joined together because of Hinto, how cool is that any ways Heros tale is a split fanfic between Hero son of Kodi and Dusty and Thorn Daughter of Deathstar and Rabidclaw of the Solar Pack. This is more about Hero and Thorn but Hinto would play a big part in it anyway here is the part were Hinto is in it)
Hinto is now a young strong member of the Solar Pack. This pack is like no other it is run by the two demonic alphas, Deathstar and Rabidclaw and their children Hex, Canevil, Thorn and Dusk. Hinto joined the pack a year a go and since then he has learned all the tricks of fighting and killing that the pups were born with. He has become hard on the inside aswell as the outside and he has fallen in love with Dusk.
The Solar Pack has not had to fight for a long time but just two years back a wolf dog hybrid from Nome had an acident with one of the Solar pups and killed it. The hybrids name was Kodiack and since then the pack has tried to get there own back but now Thorn has fallen for Kodi's first born son Hero. She has been getting herself and Dusk into trouble with the dogs of Nome and now Dusk has been fataly harmed by one of the dogs. All fingers point to Hero for his hate of wolves and a fight is raging in the heavens. Wolf and Dog begin to get ready for the fight of the centuary and Hinto will be the first to sink his teeth into his newest enemy......

THATS ALL FOR NOW Hopefully I will get to finish them and here is my newest piccy of Hinto as an Adult this one took me ages so hope I you like it

http://i54.photobucket.com/albums/g82/b ... /hinto.jpg