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10/10 Amazing character! Her personality, history, and design are all top notch! 8D
Kane?

9/10 All seems perfect to me 8D The only thing I could say is that the grey marking doesn't really go with the other colours on his back. I'd suggest an even darker brown or maybe a black/grey colour instead :3

How about Fletcher?

Oh wow, Fletcher is a pretty interesting character. I love his history, it explains nicely how he came to be a "jerk" as you called him on his presentation. His colors look amazing and I like the darker line on his back. Pretty sad past though. He is sort of like a troubled child grown to fend for himself and sort of created a wall aroudn himself, his attitude I mean, to protect him for others. Very nice character, well thought out.

I'd really like to know what people think of my character, Sethar, http://www.animationsource.org/balto/en/chars/Sethar_Seth/19267.html, who is a brother of Balto. He looks pretty plain, but for some reason I loved coloring him like that.

I liked the fact that he isn't a "perfect" character, that everyone can't help but love. I also enjoyed the fact that he is dynamic, and opens up more later. While simple, I rather liked the design, though it could differ more from Balto's, in my opinion. I liked his history as well, but I would like to know more details. Such as; Why did Sethar need to be saved? (in the moment Zapheu died) and how Balto and Seth bonded, etc.

Overall, I would rate him a 9/10.


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I would like different opinions on Tahki. http://www.animationsource.org/balto/en/chars/Tahki_Windancer/19500.html

[quote="Windancer"]I liked the fact that he isn't a "perfect" character, that everyone can't help but love. I also enjoyed the fact that he is dynamic, and opens up more later. While simple, I rather liked the design, though it could differ more from Balto's, in my opinion. I liked his history as well, but I would like to know more details. Such as; Why did Sethar need to be saved? (in the moment Zapheu died) and how Balto and Seth bonded, etc.

Overall, I would rate him a 9/10.

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Thanks, I'm glad you like him. the reaosn I didn't explain in his presentation why Seth needed to be saved which resulted in Zapheu's death, is because that will be revealed in the fanfiction story, but I haven't written enough yet to upload on the site and I didn't want to reveal too much of the story through the character.

And yeah, he does look similar to Balto, just different shades of simialr colors, but I really liked the idea that he resembled Balto.

thanks for commenting on my character.

How 'bout Tide?

8/10 Wow, I've never seen a seal on the site before! A good character but would like to see more on her history, and also her character design is interesting, despite knowing seals don't have very interesting designs! Nice job!

Animal? http://www.animationsource.org/balto/en ... 11221.html

9/10

Her design and personality go really well together. The only thing that bothered me was why her pupils are blue. Is she blind or something?

How about Sabaka?

9/10 Her design is beautiful, the history seems to be pretty original, though the personality seems to contradict itself just slightly.
Trek?

General Bio: 10/10

Personality: 9/10
She may be quiet, but she certainly has a personality. You said she doesn't have much of one and then wrote about what she dose have, which is a pretty good one. Try not to contradict yourself there. ;)

History: 9/10
Not bad, but it seems slightly underdeveloped. Just flesh it out a bit more and you're good to go.

Design: 10/10
The colors go together wonderfully and the markings look great. Nice work!

Overall: 9.5/10


Nice character! ^^




How about Kari?