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5/10 He's got too many conflicting personalities. Pick one and work off of that.

Marnah?
http://www.animationsource.org/balto/en ... 11252.html

9/10 i love how she's a tough girl that stands up for her brothers :3


Viper?

10/10 I love how he's a bully, but he's nice to girls and his pups. I like the conflicting thing ^^ I also love the bit with the snakes and his name fitting into that. Heh.
Trey?

7/10
hmmm...the head has a very complicated design but the rest of the body not...mah, there is something that is out of place on him =/

Caleb?

20/10 Oh my gosh I love him <3 He's such a good charrie!! *faves*
Miles?

10/10 he is adorable and intersting storyline
How about Kaci?
http://www.animationsource.org/balto/en ... 19269.html

General Bio:
10/10

Personality:
9/10
Overall, not bad, but it seems kinda average for a BaltoSource character. I also get slight vibes of contradiction, but maybe that's just me.

History:
8/10
Not exactly well-developed at the moment, but it shows promise.

Design:
4/10
The colors, though natural, seriously clash, and the dark face but light body looks very...odd. I suggest making her body darker and giving it more of a gray tint than a cream one. As for the face, saturate down the tan spot a bit and lighten the dark brown. Also, change the paws to match the face. ....Basically, something like this.

Overall: 7.75/10



How about Kanti?

Picture: http://oi51.tinypic.com/k9xixt.jpg

Personality: Due to her crazy past, Kanti is a bit cautious and reserved, but also very determined. She is slightly shy and often only opens up around her owner, Ali, her mate, Coal, and a select few friends.

History: Kanti was quick to be adopted as a pup. The young girl who adopted her initially named her Carly, but when the older dog of the house, a snobby husky named Queen, refused to accept the newcomer, "Carly" had to be given away again. They brought her back to the box, which was now empty, and put her back in, walking away sadly. "Carly" swears she saw tears in the little girl's eyes as she gave the pup a keepsake she would treasure forever: a sliver rhinestone collar. It had no ID tags; it was just decorative. Later that night, a young, beat-up teenager finds the little pup howling pitifully in the box and takes her in...or, seeing as the girl had no real home, out. She received the new name of Kanti. For a while, Kanti and the girl (her name was Ali) lived in the old, shut-down orphanedge in which Ali resided. Eventually, Ali found a dogsled, and she and Kanti taught themselves how to work it. In the process, they discovered a lost pup, a bit older than Kanti, which they kept and trained with her as a sled dog. Now with a sled and a team of two, Ali could race. For the next year or so, they were able to live off the pitiful amount of money they earned racing. On the way back from one, however, Kanti collapsed of determination and tire. Luckily, and probably ironically, it was just in front of the veterinarian's office. The vet, Dr. Williams, noticed them when his husky, Coal, threw a barking fit. He took them all in and nursed them back to heath, including Ali, though humans weren't quite his strong spot. With nowhere else to go and thanks to Dr. Williams's kind nature, they all wound up living with him. Over the years, Coal and Kanti began to grow closer, and, well, fall in love. At the age of six, Kanti gave birth to a litter of five pups which Coal was proud to father. Her friend, too, grew close to the pups, almost like their aunt.
[That's all I've got so far. Story's a work in progress.]

*Note: the pictures used in this post are not mine, they are both colored linearts. Originals by ~werewolfLycia

9/10

I like her simple design, but her personality could use a bit more depth to it. Her history is also very good, but I would like to know more about this friend mentioned in the last paragraph.

How about Lucy?

9/10 Her personality and history seem very well developed, and overall she seems to be a very good character, however her design clashes a lot with the four different colors on it in random places. Why does she have all three lab colors?

Aaron?

9/10 His design is great :3 I think the colours go well together and the markings aren't to complicated but aren't to simple either. I like his personality also, however, it is quite common on here, but pretty much everything is on here now, so you can't win xD

Saxon?

10/10
I can't find a single thing wrong with him. He had a great personality and history, not to mention a very handsome design.

How aboutLera?

Hunter - The reason she had all the lab colors was to give her design more varity than just black, yellow, or brown.

General Bio:
10/10

Personality:
10/10

History:
10/10
Interesting...do you have a fic for her?

Design:
6/10
I love the markings, but the colors clash. Try making the red and gray a bit more brownish-tinted, like this.

Overall: 9/10

Nice character! ^^





Then why don't you rate her? ;D

10/10 I found her design simple, but likeable, as well as the character herself. And having known Kanti, and meshing her with that story made it better, in my opinion, since Kanti had been created for...a while now.

What about Tahki? http://www.animationsource.org/balto/en/chars/Tahki_Windancer/19500.html

General Bio:
10/10

Personality:
10/10

History:
10/10
LOVE it. The part about breeding superstrong canines reminds me of Josh and Adam, lol. XD

Design:
11/10
That is spectacular. o_o The colors and markings go together perfectly, and as common as they are on BaltoSource nowadays, the scar looks really awesome.

Overall:
10/10

EXCELLENT character, WindyWolf. :3



Kahlei again? (Want different opinions)