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saske italian wolf · **Joined:** Thu Dec 27, 2007 9:45 am **Posts:** 6491

9/10
Love the design and the personality xD he's extremely POSSESSIVE! Lulz x3

JayJay?

street dog · **Posted:** Tue Jan 04, 2011 3:28 pm

10/10 love JayJay xD

Talulla?

Windancer · **Posted:** Tue Jan 04, 2011 8:51 pm

10/10 I liked how she wasn't a "perfect" character, and had a good relationship to the characters. (she's not, like, friends with a mate of a distant cousin of Simba)

Natia? http://www.animationsource.org/balto/en/chars/Natia_Windancer/18123.html

Raven the lioness · **Posted:** Fri Jan 07, 2011 7:22 pm

Um how can she be Jenna's great great granddaughter?anyways I rate it a 8/10 history was ok and liked her design and personality.It would be more interesting if you told us how her beloved old and new owners have died^

How about Jetta?
http://www.animationsource.org/balto/en/chars/Jetta/18367.html

NattiKay · **Posted:** Fri Jan 07, 2011 9:06 pm

Design: 7/10
The markings look much to jagged to be natural, and the black shades, in my opinion, shouldn't be pure black, but rather very dark gray (possibly tinted).

General Bio: 10/10
I see nothing wrong with it.

Personality: 10/10

History: 7.5/10
Not exactly a creative history; many of the plot points are very commonly used, but it could be worse.

Charmcaster wrote:

Um how can she be Jenna's great great granddaughter?

Erm, the same way you are related to your great grandparents. :/ If you look at her breed, you will see that she dose have husky in the mix.
It simply means that Jenna's pup mated with a different breed, who mated with a different breed, who mated with a different breed, who mated with a different breed, resulting in a pup that, though descended from a husky, dose not look like one.

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How about Adam?

Pictures:
http://oi54.tinypic.com/302b3hy.jpg
http://natticat8.deviantart.com/gallery/#/d2zxmnb

Personality/Background: Gruff and serious. Some say he's a little crazy. He comes from the "future" and was originally bred for military; his size is much larger than that of a normal wolf, his teeth are sharper, and his bones are thicker. He was intended to have enhanced intelligence as well, but that didn't work out quite right, making him mentally unstable during the earliest years of his life. He severed somewhat successfully during his first years, but eventually he became too much for the humans to control. They meant to "put him to sleep", but he escaped that night, running off into the forest. He lived there a while, his unnatural size and demeanor frightening off other wolves. Though he was no longer a military wolf, he retained the attitude. That paired with his mental problems made for a dangerous combination. As he grew older, the insane state of his mind began to wear off, but he still has momentary crazy spasms. The only wolf who wound up befriending him was another military mutation wolf, a female with a metal leg under the name of Josh (there is a reason she has a male's name, but I'll get into that another time). The old wolf remained cold and harsh, but strangely loyal to Josh, following the more lighthearted wolf on crazy journeys though he constantly complained about them.

Raven the lioness · **Posted:** Fri Jan 07, 2011 9:47 pm

8/10 love the design but personality/history is ok and what is wrong with history and what is common about it?I worked hard on it...
how about Aleata?
http://www.animationsource.org/balto/en ... 18377.html

NattiKay · **Posted:** Fri Jan 07, 2011 9:57 pm

Charmcaster wrote:

8/10 love the design but personality/history is ok and what is wrong with history and what is common about it?

Nothing is wrong with it, it just wasn't the most creative/original one I've seen.

Quote:

... After playing and secretly meeting with each other, Jetta asks her if she wants to meet her father to see if she is accepted in her pack....They both are happy to have adopted Aleka into the pack for her family got killed by hunters or other rogue wolves who is enimies with her pack. Their happiness of new found friendship doesn't last very long while one day, Jetta and Aleka go playing outside with each other on the forbidden open wilderness, as they hear a gunshot nearby and started running. Aleka got shot while Jetta was trying to save her own life, thinking Aleka was fallowing her. With a sinking heart, Jetta walks over to the fallen Aleka as she turns her around with her big paws to face her, to find a bloodied chest and back since the hunter kept shooting at them.

Jetta nuzzles her to wake her up but no response. Knowing she is dead now, she nuzzles her one last time and gives out a sad howl as one of Aleka's long lost survivor of the pack comes along to see her fallen body.... At firt Jetta never felt comfortable with becoming close friends to replace Aleka with her brother but she decides to give it a shot and becomes slowly interesting in being mates after getting to know him. Later down the road they became best friends then fell in love, being mates!

These are all very commonly used plot points: Secret meetings w/ friends, the new wolf in the pack, the dramatic death of a character's friend, love story starting with one or both characters unwilling.

Again, nothing is really wrong with any of these, they're just a little overused.

[I don't have a character to rate right now. Sorry. Next person rate Charmcaster's character, Aleata.]

Black Rose · **Posted:** Wed Jan 12, 2011 6:06 pm

9/10
I like her design except for parts of the face where the markings are boxy. Her colors work well though. I also really like her personality because she is a good dog without being a Mary Sue, and she also has flaws without her being completely evil. Good job!

Lera?

Raven the lioness · **Posted:** Fri Jan 14, 2011 6:23 pm

8/10 the history is ok but I love her design & personality..!How about Kari?
http://www.animationsource.org/balto/en ... 18509.html

saske italian wolf · **Joined:** Thu Dec 27, 2007 9:45 am **Posts:** 6491

7/10
Dunno, the design doesn't fit a lot with her breed (but that's just my opinion)

Luce?

xWolfPrincex · **Posted:** Sat Jan 15, 2011 3:07 pm

9/10 i love how she's a rescue dog and i love her colors.

Shani?

NattiKay · **Posted:** Sat Jan 15, 2011 4:16 pm

11/10

I love her design and the bio looks great. Good job! ^^

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My fursona, Natti? (Please rate the design only on this one)

street dog · **Posted:** Mon Jan 24, 2011 9:42 pm

10/10 very unique ^^ she fits you well, lol

My newest char, Finn?

MokiHunter · **Posted:** Tue Jan 25, 2011 10:38 am

8/10 I think the 'running away after being told they're adopted' is slightly overused and also, there could be some more details. But she's a great character besides that!

Phantom?

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