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Hey guys,

I know I am not a mod or anything, but I wanted to give you some advice on this roleplay. Could you please clean up the grammar and spelling a bit? It doesn't have to be perfect, but using captil letters and puncuation will make your posts a lot more legable. Also, I am not to sure how well the subject of this roleplay follows the rules. I'm not going to report because you seem to be having fun with it, but the subject of war may not be the best topic for a kid friendly site. Just for future reference, I wouldn't post another war roleplay.

~ Black Rose

Duncan walked back to Black and held his leg, bandaging it. "I'll be back for you brother." he said and one of his men rode by, he jumped up behind him.

Duncan was taken back to the base and his shoulder and leg cared for. He thanked the medic and sent him after Black, to take care of him.

Duncan sat, waiting for everyone to come back. He sat back, the medic came back with Black in the back of a truck, he set him down gently with a special harness and tended to his leg. Duncan sat and watched.

Duncan put down his saber and went to help the medic to bandage his horse's leg, the medic walked away and he sat back against Black, Black lifted his head and Duncan patted his neck.

"yeah, he just took a bullet to the leg, he'll be good as new in a few weeks, though in Ye mean time I'll have to work with one of the rookie warhorses.." Duncan said, he smiled up at the other man.

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