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Name: Phali
Gender: Male
Personality(optional): Loving, Caring, Friendly
History (optional): Brother of balto
Likes: Friends, humans
Dislikes: People who think hes intruting
Mate/Crush: No one right now
Other: Scar in shape of eagle on right side

I know how to get into stuff late like this i've done it many times.

Accepted, but this isn't really a Balto type RP.

OOC: I know but just saying that is his history

Phali: Walks into a pack territoy not even knowing that he was in one He acidently steps on a stick and sees wolves over a hill "Holy" He whispered to him "I'm in a wolf territoy?" he said quietly. He quickly bolted to a tree and look over and everyone was looking that direction thats what he saw. "great they know someones over here."

Tornado & Blizzard & Twilight & Snow:: They trot around. Tornado leading.

Occ// Not to be rude, Lionlover2546, but that's not really how you role-play. It's more like a book built up of paragraphs. For example:

Terra rushed through the forest, her legs acing in pain. Her father had betrayed her... she would never go back to him.

Instead of writing: Terra: Running through forest.

You have to write it as if you were writing book.

Hope this helps!

Bic:

Aridane's legs were slowly collapsing. She was extremly tired, and apart from being in a cave, she could feel the bitter cold biting her nose. SHe lay down slowly, curling up to Midnight. "I'm very sorry, I- I must stay with my pup... hunting like this would be perilous!," she told the other wolves.

Phali climbs a tree accidently shaking the leaves. 'crap!' he though 'they heard that'

Tornado & Blizzard & Snow & Twilight:: They all perk their ears, and turn their heads. They hear a pack. Tornado and Twilight partner up and Blizzard and Snow do the same. They get ready for a fight if one happens to be coming.

OOC:: I know, I write stories and I have role played for 2 years.

Phali: Stays still in the trees and leans down to see what they are doing. 'hmmm, I don't want to get killed by them my best bet is to travle through the trees for a while.' he thought standing there looking around 'they look like there going to attack me or something' He also thought.

OOC: Not to be mean or anything, but could you please write in third person? It's easier to understand, by far.

OOC: I am third person view it just seems like i'm in a first person because of the way i type it.

"Okay, thank you... and goodnight," said Aridane sleepily, and closed her eyes. Keeping Midnight warm, she fell alseep, and snow drifted quietly into the cave, accumulating on her fur.

Occ//
@Lionlover234: Maybe so, but still, it's not very easy to understand when you RP like that.

Tornado & Twilight:: They hide in the shadows, the only thing visable is Tornado's deep green eyes and Twilight's ice blue eyes, they stand beside each other, Tornado clearly taller.

Blizzard & Snow:: They hide behind a fallen tree, their eyes both are ice blue and their coats are white as the second fallen snow. They are all very well hidden.

Phali: Jumps toard the next tree with a clear visibility of his fur in the midnight sky. and he shakes more leaves in the prosess 'i really need to work on stealth' he though while he was waiting for a good moment to jump out and run.

Tornado & Twilight:: They howl from deep inside the shadows of the forest.
Blizzard & Snow:: They do the same.