[Balto, Complete] So wrong, but it feels so right [Part 1]

Kodi's Girl · **Posted:** Wed May 31, 2006 10:21 am

Saba hadwalked ihnto the exact same forest, she laid herself down and cried. "All because I wanted to saee Slyth, I've become somethign a loathe, an uncaring girl, he's so sweet and nice. I really don't deserve Slyth, Blitz does, I dunno, my head tells me that but my heart tells me I lvoe ihm, I shoukld just stay away from everyone, I've been so sick ever sicne I hesitated to tell Slyth how I feel about him... I love him! I love Slyth!" she said loudly, probably enough for anyone ot hear, she dropped down agian and cried.

Kalgorn · **Posted:** Wed May 31, 2006 3:36 pm

(Hay Katie Girl, could you type a little more carefully?)

Unfortunatly for Slyth he wasn't close enough to hear Saba scream her feelings for him. The sound died out before they were carried to him. He might not have heard it anyway, he was currently sniffing the ground, wondering in pointless and confusing circles. At one point he had closed his eyes and, with his nose to the ground, concentrated on that one smell. . .that one smell that he secretly fonded, and followed it. It only took him a minute to mess up. Realizing he had been walking in a figure eight.

"i can't find her. ." He frowned. She was probably close. Painfully close and he was just to blind to notice her. Why did it seem his nose worked better in the town than here in this forest? "Screw it, maybe i can call to her. Blitz! Blitz! Can you hear me?!"

Anayu · **Posted:** Wed May 31, 2006 3:57 pm

Blitz, who was somewhere in the middle of the two, managed to hear both their cries. Her ears flicked out, knocking some snow off themselves as they caught Saba's first call. 'She really does love him. Then it's just as I thought, they were meant for each other. Siblings or not, that's something I can't let myself screw up as long as they both mean it, and I'm sure they do.'

But as Slyth's shout came, she nearly jumped at the sound and how close it was. After all, what were the odds that both would be in the same vicinity of forest? With her jerk, she'd caused snow to fly off her again, exposing her gray-flecked black fur against the ground once more. 'I should just let him keep looking. He'll surely run into Saba eventually. I shouldn't interfere.' But despite herself, she felt her vocal chords strain to shout, "Here! I'm over here!" Her voice cracked from the cold and lack of use for the few hours she'd been there.

She remained where she was, though she rolled over onto her stomach again, her legs under her. She'd only just realized how could her limbs were and she tried to nestle them under her body for warmth. She'd lived in Nome, never usually 20 feet from the nearest heater, and hadn't grown the thick underfur her ancestors used to keep themselves warm.

Kalgorn · **Posted:** Wed May 31, 2006 4:17 pm

Closing his eyes once he had called for her, he waited to hear her response. Which, after a short wait, came. Cracky as if they hadn't been used in awhile. Now using the direction her voice had come from, he started towards her. Again, stepping into a thorn vine and cutting around his eye. Under his eyebrow. It stung even more in this area so he winced and gritted his teeth. Determined to pain it no attention, he backed up and went around.

It seemed like now that he knew which way to go to get to Blitz, it was only harder than it should because the amount of thorns he kept walking into. He grunted everytime one cut him. They were small cuts but they stung like heck at first. Then, finally he found his way around the last of the thorns and entered the clearing Blitz lay in.

The sight of her laying on her stomach, head up, looking at him relieved him. He'd wondered how she was holding up after almost an entire night in the forest. She didn't look too good though. Her eyes glistened as if she had been about to cry, or had been crying for some time.
"Blitz? You okay?" he asked. He knew he couldn't be looking to good either. countless small cuts and scratches with leaves and twigs sticking to his pelt. Tree sap smeared across his side, making the fur stick up in an odd angle.

Anayu · **Posted:** Wed May 31, 2006 4:29 pm

Despite herself, she was overjoyed to see him. Blitz tried to stand, but forgot her legs were still underneath her and she toppled over into face plant directly into the snow again. She got up slowly and shook herself, off her legs not wanting to cooperate completely from the cold. She shook a little uneasily at first and then steadied herself, moving toward him slowly. He looked like he'd been through just about every thorn bush in the whole forest and attacked by a sap monster, but she didn't care. She was just happy to see a friendly face.

"I'm fine. But, Slyth," she said slowly, her voice still a little on the croaky side, "why'd you come all this way looking for me? I haven't caused you anything but trouble since we met." Her ears lowered against her head again and her tail drooped. "Besides, Saba's around here somewhere, don't you need to find her too? I heard her just a coulple of minutes ago, didn't you?"

Kalgorn · **Posted:** Wed May 31, 2006 4:44 pm

Guess the cold has taken effect on her Slyh thought, seeing she had trouble standing back up. But she did manage to get up on her paws and trot over to him, and her voice sounded again. Still sounding cracky. Once she had finished speaking, he had to take her questions one sentence at a time.
"Well, i wanted to see if you were okay. I know you're half wolf, but i didn't know if you were going to be able to survive longer than a night in this cold" then he couldn't help it. His head started bending towards her and Saba popped up in his mind. Now he had his head bent halfway towards her neck. Awkward! what now?

Trying to play it off he bent his head back. "No, you haven't. I like being around you" This didn't help him at all. "er, what i mean is, you fun to be around" he repled hastily, feeling his cheeks heat up, blushing. Despite the cold.

Anayu · **Posted:** Wed May 31, 2006 5:32 pm

Blitz's ears perked a little and she watched as he bent toward her. But why? She raised a brow in confusion, but mentally shook it off as he leaned back and blushed. She grinned and chuckled quietly at him. "Are you sure?" At least a smile, even if it was small, was apparent on her face again and she sighed. "Okay. I guess I did get a little cold...but I didn't really notice it."

Her tail wiggled half-heartedly and uncooperatingly and she felt the impulse to laugh. It must have looked incredibly stupid to Slyth, but she still wanted to laugh at it. "Soo...What about Saba? Didn't you hear her just a few minutes ago? She shouted pretty loudly, from..." Blitz looked around and then pointed with her nose to her left. "...from that way, I think. Her words weren't completely clear, but I think I understood them." 'No, I understood them completely, but it doesn't matter. Maybe Slyth heard too, so I won't have to say what she shouted.'

Kalgorn · **Posted:** Wed May 31, 2006 6:27 pm

Slyth frowned. He hadn't heard anything, maybe he could have had he not been so preoccupied with finding Blitz. . .buy why had he been so persistant on finding her? Was it really just because he was worried about her? Maybe it did mean more than that. . .but this was crazy. Two dogs had won his heart, and he had no idea how to respond to it. Frowning he asked "Saba?"

She was popping up everywhere now. Dominantly his mind. But Blitz was taking up alot of that too. Lord knows he wasn't going to tell her about his dream. Why a dream like that had gone on in his mind. . he didn't know. Simply because of the absence of Saba in it, he was even further confused. But was he really starting to fall for Blitz? He'd thought over and over about this and had come to one conclusing: It was either Blitz. . .or Saba

Kodi's Girl · **Posted:** Wed May 31, 2006 6:34 pm

[I'm really trying Balto]

Saba sighed, she thought only of nothing but, life. She let tears fall "Slyth, please, please go to Blitz, I won't be herem uch longer. But, I love you Slyth! you may be my brother but I lvoe you dearly!" she yelled again before she pressed her claws ot her neck "But I..I don't want ot be a nuisance in your life! It's clear! It's clear that you and Blitz were meant for each other! I can't can't live the lie! I can't go on, if you aren't wiht me, I'll die for your happiness!" she yelled out more andm ore, pressing her claws deeper.

!Balto! · **Posted:** Wed May 31, 2006 7:03 pm

Max just got off Storm in a way happy he said that so he know the truth that it was because Storm was playing stupid Dart got killed he just forgot about Storm being his brother he was more like a stanger someone he didnt even know him anymore then he started off he looked at the boat to see if Slyth was still there and saw he wasnt and thought to himself " why did he go after her she just wanted to be alone for a little" but then layed down "i guess they'll be back later" and fell asleep, later he got up (bout the same time Slyth found Blitz) and saw no one their still so he got worried because it was snowing so he jumped down and started looking till he made it to the forest "they might be in here" so he ran in but got lost but heard a faint vioce yell but it sounded like a female "it must be Saba" so he ran after it

Kodi's Girl · **Posted:** Wed May 31, 2006 7:15 pm

Saba was breathign deeply, she sighed and pushed her claws deeper, eyes only lsits as she felt herslef nearer her jugular vein, the very vein that could mean life or death, in this case, she wanted death "It's so clear! I can't live iwhtout ihm! I can't.." she was criyngi n pain by now as she pushed deeper "Don't anyone try to stop me form doing this! I won't live the lie of this anymore! Slyth! It's clear! I want you to be happy! And Blitz makes oyu happy! I want you andh er otgether! BUT I WILL ALWAYS LOVE YOU AND LOOK OVER YOU!" she screamed out that and Slyth's name, she pushed deeper, wanting ot end her life more this time. It was os very clear, Slyth andh er weren't meant ot be together, she wanted imh to be happy, but, this was hero nly way of doing so.

Saba, went more to her jugular vein, goign closer ot her death.

!Balto! · **Posted:** Wed May 31, 2006 7:26 pm

Max jumped through a few things and stoped when he heard Saba scream that out and freaked and started dushing after her "what is she thinking she going to kill herself for Slyth whats wrong with the family she's going crazy" then jumped over a log and saw her then pinned her paws down and looked at her "Saba what are you doing you cant kill yourself thats just wrong" then making sure she couldnt move her paws "nobody will be happy if you kill yourself not even Slyth if anything he'll be mad plz just stop dont do it"

Kodi's Girl · **Posted:** Wed May 31, 2006 7:32 pm

Saba struggled and growled "He will be! Max please! I'm not gonna live a lie! SLYTH WILL CHOOSE BLITZ! I WANT HIM TO BE HAPPY!" she screamed and struggled to free her paws.

!Balto! · **Posted:** Wed May 31, 2006 7:38 pm

as she struggled he kept her paws down and yelled "no he wont he'll hate you for every thinking that he wont be happy he'll feel horrible" then started crying a little but kept it in "plz Saba stop acting like this its not like you and it aint right you cant do this and belivie me Slyth would say the same thing cant you think of a different way where you wont do this plz" then looked at her "he is happy with you alive"

Kodi's Girl · **Posted:** Wed May 31, 2006 11:15 pm

Saba struggledm ore, crying "PLEASE MAX! Lemme go! NOW!" she growled weakly and cried more, eyes red and neck bleeding lsightly, she really wanted ot cause Slyth no pain.

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[Balto, Complete] So wrong, but it feels so right [Part 1]