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Starfire - The reason I gave Marlina a 7/10 is because some parts of her history didn't make sense, like her owner and the government betting on a race. It just seemed very unrealistic. Also, her design reminded me of another character on Balto Source. I didn't take any point off for that, because that happens, but I just thought I'd point that out.

Also, you should read the personality and history of a character before rating and not just rate on design. That kind of the point of the game, to give helpful critique so everyone can perfect their characters.

Anyways, back to the game.

Question - I really like this character. He makes mistakes and isn't perfect, and thats sometimes hard to find. I give him a 9/10 because I was a little confused on his history, but I;m sure if I read through his father's character page, I'd understand a little better. Also because I don't see why his name meaning fits him. Does he do something evil when he's older?

How about Emma?

Hunter - Just wanted to add that I'm so happy you like my characters! Thanks for much for the feedback. I may write some fanfics for them, but I'm not sure I want to start a project like that until I get all my characters that would be involved a character page. Also, school starts tomorrow, so I won;t have a lot of time to work on it. I may start it next summer. Oh, and do you think it would be a good idea to start a topic on the request page for me to help people develop character bios?

10/10 Wonderful, unique yet simple design. Her history is also very detailed, great job!

What about Chakide http://www.animationsource.org/lion_king/en/chars/Chakide/14795.html?

Starcather-Could you give reason for why you rated him 4/10?

3/10 Her design is far to common, along with her history...sorry.

How about Inca? http://www.animationsource.org/spirit/en/chars/Inca/15147.html

10/10 I think she's very pretty. ^.^ Her personality sounds just like my cat Silver's personality and her history actually did surprise me.

Pania?
http://www.animationsource.org/lion_kin ... 15030.html

I give her an 8/10 I love her history but her colors are ok
How about Reno?
http://www.animationsource.org/balto/en ... /8580.html

uhh these are basically mercy points but.. 4/10 I'm sorry, but the history doesn't really make sense. Like, you didn't explain how she became Kaltag's mate and you didn't explain how she became Rosie's pet either. Also, the design is WAY too overused. It's too Balto like and unoriginal. (meaning it looks almost exactly like Balto's design leaving out colors of course)

Crash? (since last time I posted him)

Barbara gets 5/10
I disliked her unrealistic design and her history seems unrealistic too

Red Robin?

10/10 I seriously can't fault him cx First off, his name is awsome! He also has a lovely design, a uinque personality and history.

Chakide? (I want more opinions ^^) http://www.animationsource.org/lion_king/en/chars/Chakide/14795.html

3/10 Again, mercy points. I'm sorry, but I don't see how the druid wolf and chinook dog really tie into the whole mix. The design is too simple, and the history seems very jumbled and confusing (personality as well). It doesn't say how she even met Niju in the first place, or why her siblings teased her, or why she had such anger issues.

Crash? (I want more opinions)

Also, Starcatcher, the whole POINT of deigo saying "More Opinions" is because she wanted someone else's opinion thisides yours, since you already rated. So please do not do the same thing to me.

3/10 Her design in quite unrealistic, and her personality is too predictable (the whole 'completely-adored-by-everyone' thing.)

Different opinions of Chakide? http://www.animationsource.org/lion_king/en/chars/Chakide/14795.html