[Balto, Complete] So wrong, but it feels so right [Part 1]

!Balto! · **Posted:** Fri May 19, 2006 9:48 pm

Max looked at Kodi mad "i told you its a long story and right now the only way you can HELP him is by not going after him right now" then he moved out of the way "if you want Storm to get hurt go after him" then he said madly to himself " i dont want to deal with another brother right now i'm still mad at Slyth and now he's getting on my last nerve ever since i came back its been nothing but problem maybe i should just leave again people seem to be happier"

Kalgorn · **Posted:** Fri May 19, 2006 9:58 pm

"Thank you!" Kodi said exasperatedly. Then started off in the direction Storm had run. Stopping short of his run he looked back at Max. "What do you mean by the only way i can help is by not going after him?" He didn't want to walk into another one of Max's pranks thinking it was something to worry about and get serious about.

(pff, my brain is going dead. I can't think of more to say than this. Short post. . .sorry)

!Balto! · **Posted:** Fri May 19, 2006 10:03 pm

(OOC: i got to go for now cya tomorrow)
Max looked at Kodi and pulled him away from the others "well he kinda got himself into a street dog gang........Darts if you heard of him and if he finds out that Storm is a house dog he's die thats why i came out here to keep you guys from doing anything to expose him, we got a friend that has a plan to get him out unharmed but she needs help with a chalnge for him and she gots to think of a hard one so Storm doesnt get in" then he looked away "and now that you know can you help us" said Max calmed down about the whole brother thing

Roxas · **Posted:** Sat May 20, 2006 12:57 am

Storm looked at angel.
"wiat a minute..you really want a family, but youve got dart"

"Dart please don't tell him! He'll kcik me out!"

"Hey relax I promise too keep your secret safe" he smiled

"thanks" she said again and smiled

Anayu · **Posted:** Sun May 21, 2006 7:11 am

(Is it just me, or does anyone else recognize this whole street dog scenario and Angel the gang dog form a certain Disney movie? XD)

Blitz looked up as Max said his part, then left the room and then returned her gaze to the ground, thinking deeply again. She thought over the numerous riddles she'd compiled over the years, but so far, that's all she had. She had thought to incorporate a task with each, but just how would she do that? And she needed a reason for him to do each task as well, otherwise Dart would just wave off her suggestion and come up with something on his own, something that more than likely would get Storm accepted. 'But...if the reason for each task is simply to make Storm look silly and possibly embarrass him, that would certainly please Dart.'

With this thought, Blitz's maw broke into a wide grin. But just as she looked up to Slyth to mention her newest idea, she heard a high-pitched whine come from within his vocal chords. Her brow furrowed in a mixture of alarm and confusion and she stepped toward him. "Slyth? What's wrong? Are you okay?" The grin had vanished and the idea fled to the back of her mind for safe keeping. At the moment, she was more worried about Slyth than incorporating silly tasks with her riddles.

Roxas · **Posted:** Sun May 21, 2006 8:47 am

(*wistles innocently*)

Storm and ANgel walked down the raod, Storm kept telling himself this was the best life for him....but what if it wasnt?

Kalgorn · **Posted:** Sun May 21, 2006 9:45 am

Lowering his head, Slyth watched her walk toward him. He closed his eyes but didn't reply to her question. He didn't even know where that whine had come from. Because of that whine, Slyth was sure that Blitz thought of him as some kind of wimp. way to go genious He turned his head away from her, shaking his head as well. "It's nothing. Don't worry about me, ill be fine. It's storm you should be more concerned about"
He didn't mean to sound rude, but he felt sure that's what he had just been to Blitz. Re opening his eyes, he glanced at Blitz quickly before turning his nose down to the ground. He didn't want to show it, but he was acctually scared for Storm. This whine must have manifested itself because of his hidden emotion. What if Storm does pass these tests? I mean, if he passes them, ive basicalled lost my little brother

Roxas · **Posted:** Sun May 21, 2006 9:48 am

Angel and Storm sat down and wtached the sun rise proudly into the sky.

"Storm..."

"Yeah?"

"....nothing" she said with a hint of sadness but Storm did not hera it.

Anayu · **Posted:** Sun May 21, 2006 9:57 am

Blitz stood and watched him for a moment, her face a jumbled mix of emotions, none really presenting itself as dominant currently. She sighed lightly and then moved to him, hesitating at first, then rubbing her nose along his neck in a friendly nuzzle. She stepped back and grinned, trying to lighten the mood a little and said, "I can't not worry about you. That would be irresponsible, and besides, I think I have the whole challenge thing for Storm figured out. I just had a sort of revelation, if you could call it that, and I think I've got it organized perfectly now. It's balanced, a little harsh, fair enough for Dart to okay it, and yet impossible for Storm to accomplish. And the best part is that even after he's finished, everyone should believe that if he really belonged in the gang, he could have passed. Everyone except Storm that is."

She shrugged, her tail beginning to wag slowly, gently behind her. She had been in a depening mood of despair since she'd broken the bad news to Slyth, but now her hope and joy were lifting like a curtain. There was a way out of this, and so long as nothing went too horribly wrong, they would all more than likely have their lives back soon. "We'll get him out of this. All I have to do now is get everything set up for the tasks that will go along for each riddle, then I can go tell Dart I'm ready to administer the test."

Roxas · **Posted:** Sun May 21, 2006 10:03 am

Dart was waiting for Blitz in the junkyard, Storm and angel by his side. Storm was now very afariad that he was not going to pass.

!Balto! · **Posted:** Sun May 21, 2006 10:16 am

givin up on Kodi's answer Max looked back and saw the family doing other things so he walked over to the spot he was last time were he could see the whole juckyard and saw that they seem to be waiting for Blitz so Max started hoping she had a good one for Storm so they could get Storm back thats the only thing that matters but if he does get it he was hoping he would change his mind and come back because he missed his brother and didnt want him to get hurt

Kalgorn · **Posted:** Sun May 21, 2006 10:17 am

The sudden nuzzle from Blitz came unexpected to Slyth. He lifted his head up and looked at her. Tilting his head slightly. He listened to her everyword, surprised that she'd figured out what to do. It the tests were everything she said they were, then he had nothing to worry about. Now that she was done talking, Slyth stammered for something to say to her. After studdering a few time he shook his head. "thanks Blitz"
He then smiled at her. His frown turning upside-down. Now that she had told him she'd figured out what the test would be, he was curious to know what they were. But he didn't ask her. He just watched her.
Though he had to ask his next question. "When are you going to give storm the test?"

Roxas · **Posted:** Sun May 21, 2006 10:20 am

STorm shivered slightly and smiled when angel gave a concerened look.

"Well kid this is it" said Drat

"y-yeah"

"You have past two test now for the last" he siad

Anayu · **Posted:** Sun May 21, 2006 10:26 am

"As soon as possible. But like I said, I need to start setting things up now. I'll need a little help with some of the things. Do you know where there would be a chicken, a raft and a bag of grain around town?" Blitz flashed a mysterious, playful grin, once more thinking over her plan. "You can help if you want. After I know where the chicken, raft and bag of grain are...I just need to go ask for some aid from a vixen I know and I need someone to be willing to go through the last part of the challenge. Perhaps I can enlist Max's?" She giggled with delight as she mentioned the last task and couldn't help but imagine that scenario in her head.

Roxas · **Posted:** Sun May 21, 2006 10:42 am

Storm wa shaving thoughs, what if she made an impossible task? what then? he sighedmsireably and pryed he could do it.

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[Balto, Complete] So wrong, but it feels so right [Part 1]