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silver wolf
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Post subject: Posted: Sat Apr 22, 2006 3:33 am |
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OK im so pissed right now about someone that if I see them there dead so im writing this song to relese some of my anger.
This true thats why I wrote it.
Note this song is very harsh and not nice just a heads up
Betrail
You have betraid me
I workded my F*N A** for you and all you say is F*U and you betraid me
im not your slave im not your b***ch im not anything you want me to be
im only the one who is gona put you through all my pain that you have caussed me, you make me so sick
DIE MOTHERF*ER DIE!!! your not going to hurt me ever again your not going to make me your slave ever ever again
(C)
you betread me all you know is beatrail im not your b**ch anymore never never again will I slave to you
I am walking down the road of betrail im so blinded by hate for you I can't even read brail im stuck im so lost the hate I have for you
Im going to find you
(C)
Living under your rule is not worth all the pain im not going to take it anymore im going to leave and if you try to stop me you'll be dead before you hit the ground
im going to make your grave ahead of time and i'll put you into the ground time for you tobe in the flames of eternal and pain
your turn to feel the flames burn you burn you in darkness and pain you will die by your sin let it kill you it has already clamed you, you will fall you will fall
(C)
miss you I will never time to die MOTHERF*ER!!!!!!!!
Ends with a very loud and hard gutair blaze.
That feels so much better to get that out of me and note you will be able to hear this song when finnished and the music to it will be very hard.
I will sencer it if you want i just needed to get it all out and no i don't do hate filled songs like this much.
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Kalgorn
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Post subject: Posted: Sun Apr 30, 2006 1:32 am |
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I remember a rhyme me and my friend made up once int 5th grade.
Its totally retarded though.
My name is Jack
I am black
Stepped on a tack
Fell and broke my back
On a track
Went to a shack
ate a snack
yadda yadda. There's more too it but its too stupid to put the rest up.
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Boltodude
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Post subject: Posted: Mon May 01, 2006 4:59 pm |
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this song is called rejected
every time I pass through a town all I see is rejection no one has respect for each other but loves one another how can this be we have lost ower minds yet we have to gain sanaty. You have to talk to each other or all we do is reject each other.
All I hear about is rejection in class, at home, every where we have no control over this mater.
There must be another way than all of this ill manerd rejection.
I'v been rejected in my life. There is no exuse for people to reject others for there looks or belifes.
There have to be the ones that set a good example to the other people around you.
There will be times that you'll feel the lowest from beeing rejected.
All there should be is love in this world.We should help others that need it and want it or don't want it but keep in mind that we will all be juged sooner or later in life but cherish what you have and do not reject others eaven though they'v rejected you in the past for you must love one another always.
well that's it and agian some parts repeat 
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Post subject: Posted: Tue May 02, 2006 5:12 pm |
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Boltodude wrote: this song is called rejected every time I pass through a town all I see is rejection no one has respect for each other but loves one another how can this be we have lost ower minds yet we have to gain sanaty. You have to talk to each other or all we do is reject each other. All I hear about is rejection in class, at home, every where we have no control over this mater. There must be another way than all of this ill manerd rejection. I'v been rejected in my life. There is no exuse for people to reject others for there looks or belifes. There have to be the ones that set a good example to the other people around you. There will be times that you'll feel the lowest from beeing rejected. All there should be is love in this world.We should help others that need it and want it or don't want it but keep in mind that we will all be juged sooner or later in life but cherish what you have and do not reject others eaven though they'v rejected you in the past for you must love one another always. well that's it and agian some parts repeat 
Ok. How about this?
In a world that embraces rejection, how do we love one another?
When we need love more than anything,
Rejection is all we see.
The lonliness I feel from being rejected, and I wonder
Is there another way for us to be?
When we're the lowest of the low
Is it not love that raises us up?
We judge, knowing that we will be judged later
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Post subject: Posted: Tue May 02, 2006 5:28 pm |
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In a world that does not see me, I wander
Trying to find the path in the darkness that befriends me
My body, shriveled and tired
My soul feeling numb to the world
I reach for a hand to hold
Only to find that it's slapped away
You say my hands are dirty
And you spit in my eye
Yet you have never looked at yourself
You can identify me,
But you cannot see yourself in me
But I see your dirty hands
I see your lonliness
I see your longing to be loved
I offer my hand,
But you reject it, claiming you're too good for me
If only you could see
I am the face in the mirror
I am what you don't see in yourself
******
Okay. So this song is a metaphor on life, but I'm not sure if anyone will see that.
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Post subject: Posted: Tue May 02, 2006 5:31 pm |
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Kari wrote: no double posting, and nice song 
oops my bad. sorry 'bout that
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BlackwolfWSP
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Post subject: Posted: Fri May 26, 2006 2:07 pm |
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Joined: Thu Aug 11, 2005 12:27 pm Posts: 1108 Location: Misery
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I like your songs, Gothic Princess. ^^
(Here's a new one, not all the way done, I think...lol) By me...
As I walk on this frozen lake
I wonder how you're doing
And I wonder if you are awake....
It's 2' am in the morning
And I cannot seem to sleep
For I have no idea where you are,
And I know you're somewhere without me
I wish so much that I could see you
Just one day or night
Without you my world came crashing down
And for you I'd surely fight
I wish to hold you in my arms
And you hold me in yours
I wish that I could grow wings
And fly right through your doors
I miss the calm you brought me
And the love you showed each day
I wish that I could see your face
And know that you're ok
Please won't you please, oh come back to me?
I have no clue why I wrote it about that, of all things. 
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Post subject: Posted: Sat May 27, 2006 2:49 am |
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Avianne wrote: I like your songs, Gothic Princess. ^^ (Here's a new one, not all the way done, I think...lol) By me... As I walk on this frozen lake I wonder how you're doing And I wonder if you are awake.... It's 2' am in the morning And I cannot seem to sleep For I have no idea where you are, And I know you're somewhere without me I wish so much that I could see you Just one day or night Without you my world came crashing down And for you I'd surely fight I wish to hold you in my arms And you hold me in yours I wish that I could grow wings And fly right through your doors I miss the calm you brought me And the love you showed each day I wish that I could see your face And know that you're ok Please won't you please, oh come back to me? I have no clue why I wrote it about that, of all things. 
Thanks. I really appreciate that.
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Swords of the Wolves
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Post subject: Posted: Mon Jun 05, 2006 7:21 pm |
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Joined: Mon May 22, 2006 10:41 am Posts: 1947 Location: Missouri
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Here's the first couple verses. I think you all know what this song is.
Hope
dangles on a string
like slow-spinning redemption
winding in, winding out,
the shine of it has caught my eye
and roped me in so
mezmerising, so,
hypnotizing, I am,
captivated I am
Vindicated!
I am selfish I am wrong!
I am right, I swear I'm right,
swear I knew it all along and I am flood,
but I am cleaning up so well
I am seeing in me now the things you
swore you saw yourself
So clear,
like the diamond in your ring
cut to mirrior your intention
oversized, and overwhelmed
the shine of which has caught my eye
and rendered me so
isolated, so
motivated,
I am certain now that I am
Vindicated!
I am selfish I am wrong!
I am right, I swear I'm right,
swear I knew it all along and I am flood,
but I am cleaning up so well
I am seeing in me now the things you
swore you saw yourself
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Post subject: Posted: Tue Jun 06, 2006 4:20 pm |
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Swords of the Wolves wrote: Here's the first couple verses. I think you all know what this song is.
Hope dangles on a string like slow-spinning redemption winding in, winding out, the shine of it has caught my eye and roped me in so mezmerising, so, hypnotizing, I am, captivated I am
Vindicated! I am selfish I am wrong! I am right, I swear I'm right, swear I knew it all along and I am flood, but I am cleaning up so well I am seeing in me now the things you swore you saw yourself
So clear, like the diamond in your ring cut to mirrior your intention oversized, and overwhelmed the shine of which has caught my eye and rendered me so isolated, so motivated, I am certain now that I am
Vindicated! I am selfish I am wrong! I am right, I swear I'm right, swear I knew it all along and I am flood, but I am cleaning up so well I am seeing in me now the things you swore you saw yourself
Wow. I love it. That is sooooo awesome.
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Evo
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Post subject: Posted: Tue Jun 06, 2006 11:23 pm |
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This is a song from Metallica that I really like, its called Sanitarium (Welcome Home)
Welcome to where time stands still
No one leaves and no one will
Moon is full, never seems to change
Just labeled mentally deranged
Dream the same thing every night
I see our freedom in my sight
No locked doors, no windows barred
No things to make my brain seem scarred
Sleep, my friend, and you will see
That dream is my reality
They keep me locked up in this cage
Can't they see it's why my brain says rage
Sanitarium, leave me be
Sanitarium, just leave me alone
Build my fear of what's out there
Cannot breathe the open air
Whisper things into my brain
Assuring me that I'm insane
They think our heads are in their hands
But violent use brings violent plans
Keep him tied, it makes him well
He's getting better, can't you tell?
No more can they keep us in
Listen, d*** it, we will win
They see it right, they see it well
But they think this saves us from our hell
Sanitarium, leave me be
Sanitarium, just leave me alone
Sanitarium, just leave me alone
Fear of living on
Natives getting restless now
Mutiny in the air
Got some death to do
Mirror stares back hard
“Kill, it's such a friendly word
Seems the only way
For reaching out again
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Swords of the Wolves
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Post subject: Posted: Sat Jun 17, 2006 6:10 pm |
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Joined: Mon May 22, 2006 10:41 am Posts: 1947 Location: Missouri
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Here's another song from the Spider-Man 2 Soundtrack. (In case you don't know, the first song I posted was "Vindicated" by Dashboard Confessional on the same album as this one) It's called "Ordinary", by Train, and this is the first part:
Who's eyes am I behind?
I don't recognize anything that I see.
Who's skin is this design?
I don't want this to be the way that you see me
I don't understand anything anymore
And this web that I'm tied up
Is taking me right up
these walls that I climb up
to get to your story.
It's anything but
Ordinary.
And when the world's on it's knees with me it's fine
And when I come to the rescue I get nothing but left behind
Everyone seems to be getting what they need, where's mine?
'Cause you're what I need so very but I'm anything but
Ordinary
Can you save me from this world of mine?
Before I get myself arrested with this expectation
You are the one
Look what you've done
What have you done?
This is not some kind of joke,
You're just a kid,
You weren't ready for what you did, no!
Last edited by Swords of the Wolves on Sun Jun 25, 2006 11:15 am, edited 1 time in total.
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Ecliptica
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Post subject: Posted: Sun Jun 18, 2006 5:27 am |
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DarkHusky wrote: Ok here's one:
couldnt think of a name so yea.
Time and again you told me you loved me, you said u cared, you always stood by me and always shared. I love you wth all my heart, no matter how much you make me cry, til the end of time i will love you, till the end of my life i wll adore you. Even if you betray me, Or you never care, i want to tell you how much i love u, I will love you till the end of time, till the end of my life i will adore you.I will love you forever and ever more, I will never hurt you or slam a door, Care to deeply no matter what you do, cant think of what id do if i lost you.
(c) 2006, Tylva
(hmm not one of my best pieces but o well, it was fast -Me just did it)
Wow that was beautful, please do write more.
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