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TearsOfTheFox
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Post subject: Re: Secrets, Love, and Horror *Semi Advanced RP* -No spots left- Posted: Wed Nov 12, 2008 8:51 pm |
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Ooc//: Ok, I'f Serra doesn't post after a while, lets wait for her  Tear followed Balto in the shadows. UNSEEN by ANYONE. She saw Niara running up to Balto. Niara...You are my friend. I don't want to kill you. But I will if you don't stay out of my way...Levi decided to get some food from the forest. He liked freshprey. Tonight seemed like a good night to fetch some. He never likes the hard pellets his owners fed him. But it was OK.
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Post subject: Re: Secrets, Love, and Horror *Semi Advanced RP* -No spots left- Posted: Thu Nov 13, 2008 5:04 am |
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Niara saw Tear coming.She walked up to her."Okay Tear.I know what you feel for Balto but look,he has a mate...Tear,don't you understand?No,i don't want to stay in your way cause you're my friend,but,just thought about what i said,okay?You're like a sister for me,but i don't want to act like a mother to you,i love you like a friend and i want you to be clever,do you understand,Tear?"she nuzzled Tear and looked at her eyes with sadness.She wanted to keep her friend from any crimes or dangers she can fall in or make.She wanted Tear to be clever and safe...
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TearsOfTheFox
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Post subject: Re: Secrets, Love, and Horror *Semi Advanced RP* -No spots left- Posted: Thu Nov 13, 2008 6:20 pm |
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Ooc//: I put "Unseen by anyone" because i dont want anyone to see her
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Post subject: Re: Secrets, Love, and Horror *Semi Advanced RP* -No spots left- Posted: Fri Nov 14, 2008 10:45 am |
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Balto heard someome callling his name, but he didn't turn around. He didn't care anymore. He was dimly aware that his eyes were wet with tears..After all he'd done for them, for them all. He was the town hero- loved and respected by every single one of them. And they believed the words of some pretty little fox over his own, honest and true account. Didn't they know him better than that??...Obviously not.
He carried on walking, putting one scruffy paw infront of the other, over and over, not caring where he was going or how long he was going to walk for. Maybe to the ends of the Earth- just as far away from this place as he could.
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Serra20
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Post subject: Re: Secrets, Love, and Horror *Semi Advanced RP* -No spots left- Posted: Fri Nov 14, 2008 11:13 am |
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Niara stopped and looked at Balto.Then she walked away.Tear,what have you done...she thought.It was the only thing she was thinking about now.She started to run and found Saba.Near mail post.She walked up to her and put her paw on Saba's paw."Saba,i didn't believed that this will happen...But remember,the truth is on Balto's side.He said the truth..."she said and hugged Saba."I am sorry for everything.I think this is my fault that i didn't pay a good care to Tear,of what she doing..."she layed down near Saba and started to cry.
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TearsOfTheFox
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Post subject: Re: Secrets, Love, and Horror *Semi Advanced RP* -No spots left- Posted: Fri Nov 14, 2008 7:23 pm |
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Tear was still smirking as she saw how miserable Balto was. She stopped, the snow was beginning to fall hard. What is happening to me? This is wrong, why did I frame Balto? Or even try to get with him...? Tear's self consious tried to break free of the blackness inside her. But the blackness grew wider everytime Tear tried to think good thoughts. No, I will get you Balto! Tear started to cry. She wanted to escape this demon thing. The only way to stop anymore harm was to run. Run away and never come back...
So she did. She ran right past Balto, her tail touching his cheek. Tear growled and the blackness once again grew larger. Her stomach throbbed but she kept running. She now knew she had run a couple of miles into the forest. She fell, her stomach unable to hold her fox pups any longer. "No! Not now! AHHHHHHH" She wailed.
LEvi heard the cry and ran towards it. He saw Tear and shreiked. Turning around, he ran back to nome, stopping by Niarra. "N..Niarra! Come quick! Tear's in labor!" He barked as he turned and ran back towards the sound of a wailing fox.
Ooc//: Ok, for some reason, Tear is having the fox pups the day after. But lets say that fox's in this RP are like that...Lol
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Retro_Rollerskates
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Post subject: Re: Secrets, Love, and Horror *Semi Advanced RP* -No spots left- Posted: Sat Nov 15, 2008 4:16 am |
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Balto was startled as a tail tip as white as the snow falling around him slid across his cheek. But then a few minutes later he heard an awful cry that immediately made him break into a sprint, runnning towards the source of the sound. Luckily he didn't meet Levi, although he heard the sound of someone runnig past him. Soon he was deep into the forest, and by some miracle, since the snow was now falling thick and fast, he found Tear lying on the ground- clearly in agony. The pups!.... He thought to himself. My pups?... he thought, but then shook himself. Of course not! The fact that everyone had believed her almost turned Balto into beliveing it himself. But that was ridiculous. He knelt down beside Tear, trying desperately to remeber what Doc had said when Jenna was giving birth to her pups.
"Tear! Don't panic...it's me, Balto. Just keep breathing. In and out, In and out." He said, putting all that she'd done to him aside- he was just concerned with saving her life and the puppies'. Then he got up and saw to his horror that the snow was swiftly turning into a blizzard, and he couldn't do this on his own. He needed help, which he called in the only way he knew how to....he threw back his head and howled. A deep, eerie yet strangely beautiful sound escaped from deep within his lungs and sang out across the air. He only prayed that someone or somepeople had heard it.
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Post subject: Re: Secrets, Love, and Horror *Semi Advanced RP* -No spots left- Posted: Sat Nov 15, 2008 9:34 am |
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Niara opened her eyes and heard Levi shouting."What happen?Tear had pups?"she said like in a dream.Then she really opened her eyes.She was shocked."Tear have pups from Balto?"she shouted,quickly stood up and shouted."Levi,lead the way!"she shouted and ran to the place where Tear and Balto was."Tear!No!"she layed down near her.
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Post subject: Re: Secrets, Love, and Horror *Semi Advanced RP* -No spots left- Posted: Sat Nov 15, 2008 9:34 am |
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Tear watched as Balto ran to her. You've come my love! she wailed in her thoughts. When balto howled she felt that some of her belly wait was lifted. She turned her head and saw one of her fox pups crouching in the snow. She also didn't take notice to who or what was near her.She reached for it. Now she held two and her stomach stopped throbbing. She let her head rest in the snow and used her tail to keep her babies warm. She looked down at them and saw that only one of them was shivering. "No!" She wailed as she scoped up her baby. It was gone. She only had one left and pulled it close to her. Please, stay with me. She prayed. Her looked down and saw a puddle of blood surrounding her. She felt weak and the bleeding didn't stop. She opened her eyes and looked at Niarra. "N...iarra...watch h...her" She managed to gasp Ooc//: Her fox pup looks like this  Once she gets older in the rp, i'll make her bio. But her name is Amber. And it looks just like Tear and Balto. Amber's destiny in the rp is to find out who her REAL father is. And see if Tear was right or wrong.
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Post subject: Re: Secrets, Love, and Horror *Semi Advanced RP* -No spots left- Posted: Sat Nov 15, 2008 9:45 am |
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Niara started to cry.She took fox pup near her and licked him."No...Tear...Everything is gonna be allright...If not,i will take good care of him or her...Just don't worry..."she licked fox pup.
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TearsOfTheFox
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Post subject: Re: Secrets, Love, and Horror *Semi Advanced RP* -No spots left- Posted: Sat Nov 15, 2008 10:19 am |
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Tear smiled and the blackness once grew larger. She winced in pain. No, I cant live like this! she thought. She felt somthing stop inside her. Then her head fell to the ground. Tear left behind a wailing fox pup and her best friend. But all for a good cause
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Post subject: Re: Secrets, Love, and Horror *Semi Advanced RP* -No spots left- Posted: Sat Nov 15, 2008 2:35 pm |
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Balto stared at the morbid sight infront of him. "She's.....gone. She's really gone." He whispered to himself, tasting the cold reality. He heard the single remaining pup whimpering and snuffling, pushing its tiny nose into her blood-soaked fur. The poor little thing was too young to know that it's mum had gone....was on the other side of life, had passed out of this world. It was trying desperately to get some warmth from her cooling body. It was the only thing left that they had to remind them of Tear...and Balto watched as Niara pulled the precious thing towards her and him, and he wrapped his paw protectively around the tiny furry angel. He put his other paw comfortingly on Niara's shoulder.
"I'm s...so....sorry.." He choked, and a single tear dripped down his cheek.
After what seemed like an eternity, he gave the little pup to Niara to carry back, and grimly he picked the dead puppy in his mouth and slung Tear's delicate body over his back. He said gruffly to Levi- "Call a meeting in the Old Mill, this is urgent." ....and he began a sad, mournful journey back to Nome with the others.P.S. Does Balto get an apology now, as people see that it couldn't have been his puppies? And since Tear's dead  ?  But Balto and Jenna still feel it is their responisbility to take care of the pup, or Balto and Niara?
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Post subject: Re: Secrets, Love, and Horror *Semi Advanced RP* -No spots left- Posted: Sat Nov 15, 2008 2:46 pm |
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Ooc//: I had this idea where the pup would grow beliving that Niarra was her mother. And when she finds out that Balto was belived to be her father and comitted a crime against it. She would try and find a witness. Who comes later. So still everyone thinks it is Balto's pup since it looks a lot like him.
The little pup looked up at Niarra and Balto. Her little mind was lost and she nuzzled the cold, flame colored pelt of her mother. Whimpering, she was picked up and carried to Nome.
Levi sighed and lead the way back.
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Post subject: Re: Secrets, Love, and Horror *Semi Advanced RP* -No spots left- Posted: Sat Nov 15, 2008 4:10 pm |
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As they reached the outskirts of Nome, Balto heard cries of horror and shock errupt from all sides. Dogs came, clustered around them, whispering worriedly amognst themselves, and helping to lift the weight from his back and mouth and onto the snow. He heard dogs cry out as they saw poor Tear's corpse, and that of her newborn pup, lying in the snow. Balto felt weak at the knees, felt like he was going to collaspe....until he saw Jenna. "JENNA!" Balto cried and ran towards her, wrapping her in a passionate hug. He didn't care about the rules. Hang the rules. He was now crying so hard that his tears soaked her fur.....
"Jenna, Tear's dead. I tried so hard...but we couldn't save her...I could....have done more...there's just one pup left..." he wept bitterly.
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