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 Post subject: Re: A Chance For Redemption *Kendell & I*
PostPosted: Thu Jul 03, 2008 8:18 pm 
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The Raven lead Steele for a little while, it was time for Steele to face down another bad part of his personalty. Steele was lead to a shallow pond, it was easy to cross or so it seemed. A falcon set looking at himself in the water. The Raven wasn't around.

OOC: Falcon is normal postive but I'm using a negative trait, vainty, we all know how vain Steele can be.


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 Post subject: Re: A Chance For Redemption *Kendell & I*
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The moment Steele put his paw in the water, the Falcon flew over and pecked him on the head. It went back to where it was and went back to looking at itself. On closer look, the Falcon's feathers were the same color as Steele's fur and its eyes where the same.

OOC: I know Steele was as outwardly vain as the falcon will come off as but thats because its Steeles incarnated vainty.


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 Post subject: Re: A Chance For Redemption *Kendell & I*
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The falcon looked up. "Was Balto?" it asked with a smile just like Steele's. "He was only hurting your ego and if you step in the water I won't be able to see myself so you'd be hurting my ego." he said.

OOC: Yep, I didn't mean for it to seem like that but it came out that way. I know the Falcon is coming off a bit more vain but in truth, its kind of exactly what Steele was doing, which is the perpose of his emotions coming to life, its to teach him how dum he really was acting.


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 Post subject: Re: A Chance For Redemption *Kendell & I*
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The falcon laughed. "Well why don't you just do it? If it really matters to you a few peck on the head shouldn't stop you, I mean hey w-I mean you smashed Balto's head against a rock with all your power and that didn't stop him did it?"

OOC: understand the little hint there for Steele that the Falcon is part of him?


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 Post subject: Re: A Chance For Redemption *Kendell & I*
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The Falcon pecked Steele as many times as Steele had thrown Balto in their fight, the last one causing himself to crash into a tree. The Falcon looked up at Steele and glared at him. "You haven't won yet, the worst will be ahead." he said and once again a red light came from Steele and went into the Falcon which vanished into red smoke that desolved before it could float off. The Raven flew over Steele's head.

OOC: Think the things stopping Steele from getting redemption in himself becoming something he can confront is a good idea?


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The Raven stopped on a branch and pointed to Steele's wounds then to a bush of berries the Raven was purched over, they were herbs that would make Steele's wounds heal and numb them.

OOC: I'm wondering though, for his final challenge, should I make Steele face an animal that represents his old self or a litteral self of his old bad self, thus a pure evil Steele lacking anything but Steele's negative personilty traits?


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The Raven nodded and landed on the ground in front of Steele. In a swirl of mist the Raven vanished, in its place stood Aniu. "Hello Steele, I hope you've learned something from this journy." she said. "In case you don't know the perpose of the wolf symbol, the wolf is the teacher and that's what I've or should I say we've..." she said. She changed into the animals Steele had met except for the Cayote, Wolvrine, and Falcon then back to herself. "Been teaching you, or more helpping you learn which option you want, revenge or redemption. Are you wondering why I didn't turn into the cayote, wolvrine, and falcon there?"


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"Very close, you're right but you didn't guess who they were." said Aniu. "They were you, well the bad parts of you." she said. "They were the parts of you that stood between you a redemption." she said. "How you dealt with them showed what would happen to them, if you had say attacked them and tried to kill them, you would of reabsorbed them." she said. "But you didn't you went past them, ignored them so they faded into nothingness along with the parts of you they were spawned from." she said. "So its time to choose Steele..." she said, behind her two paths appeared. "This path leads to your redemption and regaining everything you once had, your friends, the respect of the people of Nome, even a mate like Jenna, her twin sister infact, a much better match for you actuelly." she said, pointing to the right path. "This path leads to a chance for revenge on the one you thought was the cause of your banishment and fall from grace." she said, pointing to the other path. "So which path do you chose?"


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