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Ninetalesuk
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Post subject: Posted: Fri Jun 10, 2005 7:08 am |
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Yep, my name is Ninetalesuk on FFNet. My story is called A World of Adventure and Collision!... which has been running since 5th of November 2003.... and I still haven't thought up a good title of this story...  I don't think it would be your type as it's cross-over with all four seasons of Digimon, Pokemon, Yu-Gi-Oh and Sonic.
And the plot... is really tough. Tough to explain... Oy...
And anyway, why would the army go and attack Aleu and the wolves? What's up with that? Have I missed anything?
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Lone Wolf_fanwriter
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Post subject: Posted: Fri Jun 10, 2005 1:13 pm |
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Well, I guess I'm the odd ball here, as LoneWolf has nothing to do with my name. I just thought it sounded cool.
Anyway, glad to hear your writing the second part of the Talkeet trilogy. I can't wait to read it!
On a good note, if all goes well, Balto: Betrayal should be done by Sunday. Don't hold me to that, though. Then, I'll finish Balto: A New Life. And after that, I'll have to write a sequel to ANL, between B2 and B3, to connect ANL and B: B.
If you understood all my abreviations, then congrats! You just won the solid gold cuppie doll.
I'll post Betrayal as soon as it is finished, but until then...
STAY CREATIVE! FIGHT THE BOREDOM! AND KEEP WRITING!!
_________________ My five latest videos. Enjoy! The Change - Balto Two Worlds - Balto and Jenna Wake Up America - Balto Long Black Train - Balto Balto - Go the Distance
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Ninetalesuk
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Post subject: Posted: Fri Jun 10, 2005 5:53 pm |
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So, where does your story take place after from Rotramel's stories?
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Ninetalesuk
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Post subject: Posted: Fri Jun 10, 2005 7:04 pm |
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Which one of Balto 3? Rotramel's or the original version?
And it's gonna be intresting to see what happens next! Come on, bring it on! 
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Lone Wolf_fanwriter
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Post subject: It's FINISHED!! Posted: Sun Jun 12, 2005 2:44 pm |
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Okay! I put it on, had to remove it for editing, looked it over twice, and now I think its finally ready!
Ladies and gentlemen, I give you Balto: Betrayal in its entirety!
If it is difficult to differinciate between description and characters' thoughts, I apologize. When I send it to the site, you can download it. The download will have thoughts in italics.
Enough chitchat! Story!! Oh, and if you notice any more errors or mistakes *shudders* tell me. And, as always, reader feedback is welcome.
Enjoy!
To save space on the forums, this fanfic was deleted. But you can read it on the site, in the Fan Fiction section!
_________________ My five latest videos. Enjoy! The Change - Balto Two Worlds - Balto and Jenna Wake Up America - Balto Long Black Train - Balto Balto - Go the Distance
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Post subject: Posted: Mon Jun 13, 2005 2:11 pm |
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Well, I know there aren't many comments about fanfics, but that's because they require some time to read. But don't get this wrong, it doesn't mean at all that your fanfic is not good.
_________________ Webmaster of Animation Source, and more
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Rotramel the Writer
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Post subject: A JOB WELL DONE! Posted: Mon Jun 13, 2005 9:00 pm |
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It was great!
Kale coming back was completely unexpected, and him trying to kill her?
You know, great minds really do think alike.
I have almost the exact same scene in the outline for my next FanFic "Balto: When Love Isn't Enough."
Hmmm...
I'll have to think of a way to make it somewhat different now.
It was good though, and I can't wait to see what else you turn out.
You're a good writer LoneWolf, and I think you need to continue.
On a different note....
I'm almost done with Part two of "The Talkeet Trilogy: The Uniea War".
I think it's turning out nicely.
Right now it's sitting right at 69 pages.
It should be done by this weekend, and I'll most likely post it on Monday.
Then I can start part III, Father and Son.
This will be a sad one, but should be interesting.
It may be a little short for me, but...
As long as the story gets told it doesn't really matter how long it is.
Then I'm going to write "When Love Isn't Enough" and then the drug one, and then the one where Dusty and Kodi's illigitimate son runs away, trying to find his real father.
Sometime in between those three I've got to write Memories too.
I've also got another idea that I want to write called "Balto: Outbreak".
This one's plot will remain a secret until I post it, but I will tell you this...
I got the idea after watching the movie Dawn of the Dead.
Wow, I've got a lot of work to do.
Better get to it....
SEMPER FIDELIS!
- PFC Anthony E. Rotramel, USMC
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Mutt
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Post subject: Posted: Mon Jun 13, 2005 9:05 pm |
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Write it! Sounds good!
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Ninetalesuk
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Post subject: Posted: Tue Jun 14, 2005 1:45 am |
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I've checked the plot of Dawn of the Dead on a movie database and I gotta say... you sure come up with deadly storylines, you do. And I mean that in the nicest possible way...
Although, you still have your Star Wa.... Talkeet Trilogy saga to do and then, the Kodi/Dusty saga, passing the Memories before arriving at this story destination.
How do you come up with this stuff...? 
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Lone Wolf_fanwriter
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Post subject: Posted: Tue Jun 14, 2005 12:55 pm |
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Thanks for the reviews everyone! I'm glad you all liked it, and since no one seems to have any suggestions, I'll probably send it to the site.
However, there may be one problem. This story, as I wrote, takes place after B3, but A New Life takes place after B1, and I still need to write a connecting story between B2 and B3. Therefore, the order in which my stories come in may be sort of haphazard for a little while. Well, George Lucas did it with the Star Wars films, so I'll do it with Balto fanfics!
Rotramel, I guess great minds do think alike! Weird... Anyway, I can't wait for your next work, whichever it may be!
I also read the summary of DotD, and now I'm freaked out!  Balto: Outbreak, huh? Sounds interesting.
And like Ninetalesuk said,
How do you come up with all these ideas?!
PS: I finally sent in 100 posts! Yay!
_________________ My five latest videos. Enjoy! The Change - Balto Two Worlds - Balto and Jenna Wake Up America - Balto Long Black Train - Balto Balto - Go the Distance
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