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Err, thanks... I think it could use some editing, but I just am not the type of person to do that right away, I have to think it over first... I'll try to write more poems...But I just can't seem to get that flow... I guess I just write it because I enjoy it! ^,^;

Strolling down the quiet street,
With lots of hopes,
And new people to meet!

The trees bowing up above!
With the barking dogs,
And cooing doves!

You just keep on skipping along,
Hum-hum-huming,
That cheerful song!

Nothing in the world can get you down!
You're too happy!
Nothing can make you frown!

Keep on keepin' on!
Don't let go!
Don't let your smile be gone!

('K, that might've been cheesy, but I had fun!)

Ah, one of the very few cheerful poems he have here!! lol, you should do more of them!! You definitely are getting on to something!!

P.S. Please, all these poems I'm doing are for a grade. So, if you have any suggestions, critiques, flames, and such, please don't hesitate to tell me!!

BEST FRIENDS

two of a kind
birds of a feather
me and you are best friends
forever
When we met i really liked you
And then i found out you liked me too
You are the best friend anyone could ever get
And i wouldent trade you for any friend yet
The point is is that your my best friend
And we are friends to the very end

Rose Petels Of Fire.

A garden of roses
the sent the essense the thorns that prick the dark hearted ones and dye
the petels red with the blood of the ones that they hurt
steeling life as the sent flows through the forest of eternal flame

to lead ones heart back into the mirror of self refection to smell the sent of the flaming roses as the petels of fire was once the blood red of seering color now incinerates into ash

a new life born from the ash now blows with the winds of time
through the underworld the mirror stands with the reflection of what once was life in a world of eternal change that could not be stoped

the roses the sent nice yet horrafying blood colorerd and vishus the dark side of nature takes its corse distroying lives distroying all that was ment tobe the unleashing of natures rath as punishment for the sins of darkness that will never be forgivin

the life now ends as a passing breath the wind with the undead ashes the bone chilling cold of an ice coverd mountin to the start of all tme
begins with the roses petels of fire.


By Silver Wolf.

I now have 6 entries in my Dragon a Day book. 2 of which I'm particularly proud of:

Wishing Well
I once found a dragon,
it was hiding down a well.
It looked at me with emerald eyes,
and begged me not to tell.

I never thought these things were true,
but there it was; plain as day.
It asked to have its secret kept,
here's what I had to say:

"I promise not to tell a soul,
if you promise in return;
to let me have a look at you
with neither bite nor burn."

The dragon thought most carefully,
and roared out this reply:
"A deal's a deal, young human,
on your word I must rely."

I checked to see the coast was clear,
as it crawled out from its fold.
With scales of blue and wings of grey,
it was a sight to behold.

The dragon nodded and flew away,
and that was when I knew;
to make a wish down every well,
for it might one day come true.

On Calling a Dragon
Do you know not how to summon a dragon,
it's really quite a synch.
Just draw a circle on the ground with a stick marked to the inch.

Prepare an offering just in case,
the dragon has a mood.
Hot granites boiled in rainwater, and you'll soon have it cooed.

In order to call a dragon,
you must have thoughts that you mean well.
Now take a breath and close your eyes; recite the follwing spell:

"Come to thee, O Great One,
From your mighty Dragon Hall!
Bestow on me your presence by the sound of my voice call!"

Repeat the spell at least ten times,
now I think that should do.
But do take caution, stranger, here and now I beseech you:

To summon dragon's a power
only one man has achieved.
it takes patience, but above all, only works if it's believed.

AMAZING SUKA!!! You've got every right to be proud of those poems, in my opinion! XD You've got some gigantic skill! I'll give you that, man, I'll give you that!!!

Ok, I'll try to make another poem...


Have you ever noticed,
How the sun rises in the east?
Ever noticed how the wolven and bears,
Come to their kill and feast?

How the wind whistles in the whillows,
And blows the buffalo grass?
And noticed how the
Red foxes move fastly past?

How the new spring flowers bloom,
And when their colors are prettily bright?
Notice how the water shines,
Beneath the pale moonlight?

Notice how the wolven howl,
And sing out their song?
In the forest they are a chorus,
Long, and loud, and strong!

Next time you hear the wind,
howling through the air,
Look to the left and the right,
And treat the world with care!



Ok...I tryed to make it rhyme...

Thanks. It's nothing, really. I just sit on my bed for hours, constantly thinking, "Err...what's suposed to happen next?" and "What rhymes with 'synch'?" XD It's all just a working flow of ideas and spiffy vocabulary.



Hey!! You're a natural, Blackwolf!! Truly!! One thing I really like about all your poems is that it's real easy to identify the theme. Less thinking, and more time to actually appreciate how well-thought up the poem is!!

Thanks. Your compliment is highly appreciated, seriously. What I like, is that your vocabulary is like...HUGE... My problem is I don't take the time to look up these words in the dictionary, so I just wait for my mind to be able to understand the meaning...

XD So we're switched!! I, on the other hand, like to keep my readers guessing.

Very nice! I like the vivid imagery! It's like I can see it in my mind. Great Job! I also really liked your first one!

Thank you so much.

Wow...That is also a beautiful poem. Even though it doesn't rhyme, I LOVE your word choice...Very beautiful words...^.^ (This one below is one I worked on at school when I had free time...)

Inspired by an E.E. Cummings poem!

Light fading to Dark

Little child,

Small innocence,
What has darkened your soul?
Darkened as well is your presence,
And what turned your heart so cold?

No longer do you smile,
Laugh, or grin, or play...
Small innonence it's been a while,
Since you've had a happy day.

And you have remained this way, an eternity...



Well, that's it...I couldn't think of any more...

(occ- ok i haven't finised my poems and stuff yets, but i do have a poem that i memorized for my english test, and i like it so much that i woant to show you and credit the author)

how much grit do you think you've got?
can you quit a thing that you like alot?
you may talk of pluck; it's an easy word,
and where're you go it is often heard;
but can you tell to a jot or guess?
just how much courage you now posses

you may stand to trouble, and keep your grin
but have you tackled self-disipline?
have you ever issued commands to you
to quit the things that you like to do,
and then when tempted and sorely-swayed,
those ridged orders have you obyed?

don't boast of yor grit till you tried it out,
nor prate to man of your courage stout,
for it's easy enough to retain a grin
in the face of a fight theres a chance to win,
but the sort of grit that is good to own
is the stuff you need when your all alone.

how much grit do you think you've got?
can you quit the things that you like alot?
have you ever tested yourself to know
how far with yourself your will can go?
if you want to know if you have grit,
then pick out a joy that you like, and quit

It's bully sport, and it's open fight;
It will keep you busy both day and night;
for the toughest kind of game you'll find
is to make your body obey your mind.
and you never will know what is meant by grit
unless there's something you've tried to quit.

~by Edger Albert Guest

THIS PEOM WAS DONE BY EDGER ALBERT GUEST NOT ME, GIVE HIM THE CREDIT!..................now doesn't this peom just make you want to read it over and over????? this peom, along with all you other people that post there poerty is what got me into poetry, and know i love peoms, thankyou Edger Albert Guest, thank you everyone here

Those are wonderful! ^.^ I REALLY love your second poem!! ^.^ Write more! !