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(And spice it up^^ We need more drama for him too and don't ask me why, but I think he looks cute with a hair tuft *hides under the bed*)

"Um, Dad, this isn't the right time." Anuli said in a small voice, staring at her fathers hind legs that were hanging just above the horns of the wildebeest.

(Indeed, I just can't get anything in my head x.x Help? D: )

- Don't interrupt me, young lady! You two are in a lot of trouble, when we... Sergei began with an angry voice, but suddenly a wildebeest grabbed him from the stomach with it's horn, dragging him away from his cub and caused him to yelp from pain.

(How about Aleksei loses his faith in love, and then saves this girl, whom he starts having feelings for, but doesn't tell himself that he's in love as he believes it will ruin judgement. They part ways. Years later, he bumps into her during his search for Anuli. How does that sound?)

I told you this wasn't the right time, Anuli thought, but out loud, she yelled, "DAD!!!"

She frantically searched for her father in the wildebeest. She looked towards her brother. The stampede was clearing and she began to run down the rocks.

(Six, you're a genius! Yes, that's it, that's what I'll do )

- Quick! Down there, Alek called as he ran down the rock ahead Anuli, and then began to search for his father with eyes, as the dust made him cough.

- Daaad! Where are you?? he called as he desperatly tried to see through the dust.

(Thanks^^ Here's a little something I'd like your opinion on-> http://www.animationsource.org/lion_kin ... mart=18660)

Anuli looked around as the dust cleared and saw a hazy figure nearby. She went a bit closer to the figure to realize that it was her father. She moved in closer to see that he was still and not moving.

(My... they ARE good looking together! o_o )

Aleksei followed closely after his sister, and when he saw his father on the ground, his heart skipped a beat. The cub's eyes widened, he ran up to the bigger lion only to see his eyes were closed, and he was completely motionless.

- ...Dad?

(I'd thank Missus Art for his design^^)

Anuli felt fear scrape her heart yet again. If her father was dead, it was entirely her fault.

"He's not dead, Alek," she tried to reassure her brother, "He's just knocked out. He must have gotten hit with the hoof of one of the wildebeest." But, deep inside, with every passing moment, she was starting to doubt that theory.

(He sure is a handsome fella^^)

- Are you sure? Aleksei asked his sister with a worried and even little scared tone in his voice.

- But what if he's...

But just then, the big white lion moved, and lifted his head with a small growl.

(Yeah^^ When I first laid eyes on him, the first thought that went though my mind was "He might look good with Anuli" )

"He's alive!" Anuli didn't hide the extreme relief from her voice. She ran to her father, nosing him up.

(I can totally see why! By the way, after one more week I'm going on a cruise to see the Reckless boys again!)

Sergei felt Anuli nosing him, he opened his eyes and shook his head a little, as he had gotten a hit from one of the wildebeest's horns. He then tried to get himself up, feeling pain on his right front leg.

- Dad, are you okay? Alek asked with a worried tone in his voice.

- Yes, son... I think so, Sergei growled quietly, and got up but had to hold his sore paw in the ground.

(I know^^ and that's so cool! Hope you enjoy yourself)

Anuli bent down to see her father's leg. She observed it just the way her mother had taught her.

"It's a sprain, Dad," she told him, "I think you bent it."

(I will! It'll be my 17th gig. Not bad, huh? )

Sergei raised an eyebrow, and looked at his daughter with a rather serious look on his face.

- It'll be all right, once I walk it off. But don't you even think of getting away with so easily, he said, and began walking forwards, limping his front leg. Walking was rather uncomfortable, but he simply ignored it, since he was too angry with his cubs who had disobeyed him.

- We're going home. Now.

(Yep, not bad at all^^)

"Dad, we know what we did was wrong, but you have got to rest that leg. Or it'll just get worse." Anuli said, feeling guilty and concerned at the same time.

(I'm about to break my personal record^^)

- I have plenty of time of rest it when we get home, Sergei growled quietly, as he walked forwards.

- Uh, Anuli... maybe we shouldn't get him any more angry than he already is, Alek whispered to his sister's ear.

(Record?)

Anuli sighed. "I wish Mom was here."